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Added 2020-02-25 21:13:52 +0000 UTCErick woke early. The sun had yet to rise on th
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thank you very much! I hope it goes for a long time, too~
Arcs
2020-03-12 17:38:38 +0000 UTCHi! Just joined your Patron. I love your story to the core, and I hope it goes on for a long time. Thank you! ^^
Earfallas Blanc
2020-03-12 06:25:55 +0000 UTCPurge all dragons!
PloofDoodle
2020-02-26 21:25:09 +0000 UTCYes, he could!
Arcs
2020-02-26 07:56:23 +0000 UTCHis spell being intercepted really bothers me. Can't he make the spell again?
Chris
2020-02-26 06:34:38 +0000 UTCHoo boy. O.O I wasn't expecting Messalina to pop up right then and there. Though I don't know that I'd take her at her word, her "True Resurrection" might really be wish fulfillment and self delusion. If people want to believe...
Conrad Wong
2020-02-26 04:55:01 +0000 UTCThe Head's backstory clears alot of stuff up. No wonder he hates her so. She proved him wrong.
Seadrake
2020-02-26 01:13:31 +0000 UTCIf you take responsibility, people look to you to take more responsibility, and you are in control of your own future. or at least that's the idea Erick has of the world. As far as the apology goes: he didn't apologize for being in the wrong; he apologized for snapping.
Arcs
2020-02-26 00:04:01 +0000 UTC'fight was the plunge' the -> to
Corwin Amber
2020-02-25 23:34:48 +0000 UTCfixed. you're right
Arcs
2020-02-25 23:28:56 +0000 UTCSomething that has bothered me about this story from the beginning is that sometimes Erick is really treated like a doormat, and he just kinda accepts it. During the part about the workers going blind on the second floor, how is any of that his fault? He explicitly warned them what would happen if they took off their glasses in the dungeon, and made enough glasses for the people working that day. How was he supposed to know the people bringing the stone would be allowed inside? I just don't understand why he holds himself responsible for the mistakes of others, especially after he made a point to tell them what not to do and then they did it anyway. And the one time he stands up for himself and says something about how others are treating him, he apologizes immediately afterwards. It sometimes feels like Erick's character has not developed at all, even after 74 chapters
BigBuckler
2020-02-25 23:27:26 +0000 UTC'first floors lights' i feel this is missing an apostrophe
Corwin Amber
2020-02-25 23:21:46 +0000 UTCfixed, thansk
Arcs
2020-02-25 23:11:17 +0000 UTCFixed fixed
Arcs
2020-02-25 23:11:07 +0000 UTC'about a two hundred fist-sized' -> 'about two hundred fist-sized'
Corwin Amber
2020-02-25 23:10:03 +0000 UTC'fast as he could fly' -> 'as fast as he could fly'
Corwin Amber
2020-02-25 23:07:09 +0000 UTCfixed.
Arcs
2020-02-25 22:55:06 +0000 UTC'base floors of he dungeon' he -> the
Corwin Amber
2020-02-25 22:53:35 +0000 UTC
