069 - Jane, 2/2
Added 2020-01-25 03:54:29 +0000 UTCWhen everyone was healed, they stood over the u
Comments
Good stuff!
Joppest
2020-02-03 14:36:31 +0000 UTCThank you!~
Arcs
2020-01-27 17:58:26 +0000 UTCI love how the Jane chapters contrast so much with the Erick chapters. Jane's are more grimdark, whereas Erick has successfully gotten himself allies who lookout for him, making his chapters more optimistic.
AlbusScitus
2020-01-27 04:24:27 +0000 UTCAbsolutely awesome piece. This isn't really a chapter, 32K word count puts it firmly into the novella category. And its a good one too, I've seen authors try to pass off some sub-standard garbage this length as a novella, (or a novel even); but this is much better.
AlbusScitus
2020-01-27 04:18:21 +0000 UTCWonderful chapter, worth the wait. Cheers
KingMinnow
2020-01-25 21:56:21 +0000 UTCYup yup! next update: back at oceanside. see you soon~
Arcs
2020-01-25 07:08:40 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters. It was nice reading about Jane, but I'm happy to get back to Erick :)
Corwin Amber
2020-01-25 07:04:51 +0000 UTCWhew, that was quite the epic!
Conrad Wong
2020-01-25 06:33:48 +0000 UTCUsually I hate it when stories waste time on whole chapters without the main character in them, but the Jane chapters have been wonderful.
BigBuckler
2020-01-25 06:17:11 +0000 UTCpatron couldn't handle a 32k word chapter at once. Chrome kept saying 'no response! :('
Arcs
2020-01-25 05:59:33 +0000 UTCawesome twofer
Seadrake
2020-01-25 05:55:37 +0000 UTCThe forms that come with the body are not usable outside of Polymage. The essence abilities, like [Flame Body], are.
Arcs
2020-01-25 05:48:13 +0000 UTCThank you so much for the VERY long chapter. I really enjoyed it, and I definitely appreciate the lack of cliff. I'm intrigued to see the fallout of Jane's unicorn adventures. Perhaps I've just forgotten but can Jane use all the skills from her polymorph forms regardless of her current form or just the ones like [Flame Body]?
Bloodorange17
2020-01-25 05:38:10 +0000 UTC
