Liquid mercury RE p29-30
Added 2022-07-11 23:13:25 +0000 UTCAnother 2 page done. Redraw some panel too.
Only 6 page remain.
And I thank you for another month of support. I hope I can make it worth it.
As alway if you find anymistake feel free to post it in the comment.
Comments
here, this is first version https://www.patreon.com/posts/liquid-mercury-p-59601861?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copy_to_clipboard&utm_campaign=postshare and this is second version https://www.patreon.com/posts/liquid-mercury-59993712?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copy_to_clipboard&utm_campaign=postshare
Pohwaran_TH
2022-07-14 16:17:18 +0000 UTCWhat do you mean the first version and where can I read it
Blackstripes 08
2022-07-13 17:32:32 +0000 UTCLast dialogue of the second panel is missing a space between "and" and "removed". Last dialogue of the last panel, shouldn't it be "press firmly against my body..."?
Ian Hsieh
2022-07-12 23:46:53 +0000 UTCPity it's only 6 remaining
Ant992
2022-07-12 19:46:51 +0000 UTCGood to see people have been loving the post on deviant art. I can't stress enough how your hard work paid off. And while you should sharpen your craft I would still advise you to take a break so you don't burn out. I'd love to get to my commission at some point XP i'm as patient as the Rock ;)
Jaegar Media
2022-07-12 19:39:34 +0000 UTCso in the second panel on page 29 I think "my apology" should be " my apologies" as the phrase uses plural. Same with "Belief" it should be "Beliefs" as the reprogramming changed all of Miller's beliefs, not just one.
Keimori
2022-07-12 09:29:57 +0000 UTCI'd be touching her! Y'know, for science...
tinpin
2022-07-12 02:41:36 +0000 UTCI think that last panel should say “on my body” not “his body”
Canti
2022-07-12 01:37:13 +0000 UTCFantastic work as usual. Wonderfully done. Did notice one problem in the last dialogue bubble in the second panel of page 29, it says "andremoved" when I'm assuming you meant "and removed". Didn't see anything else out of place.
Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)
2022-07-11 23:56:57 +0000 UTCAwesome stuff! We're approaching the finale now!
Arbiter
2022-07-11 23:46:07 +0000 UTCMy favorite part is coming up 😎 wish it was the 1st version though but still good
DaxJaden
2022-07-11 23:38:37 +0000 UTCWell it's hard to deny she looks beyond amazing
StarGazer
2022-07-11 23:25:13 +0000 UTCWill she kill them or transform them, perhaps something else? gaaaaah!! The pressure is killing me I want to know!!!
Blackstripes 08
2022-07-11 23:20:58 +0000 UTC
