Demon lord ch2 p24
Added 2021-06-27 20:54:43 +0000 UTCAnother page done we are almost at the end now.
As alway if you find any mistake or have any suggestion feel free to tell men in the comment.
Comments
@ibenz009 When you came up with the spell, "Arch Purificare," were you drawing from Latin, French, or from English?
Arthur Yeung
2021-07-01 01:54:41 +0000 UTCHeck. Sorry. I'm the self-appointed "that guy", but I don't always have time to get to things right away, then wind up forgetting when I get distracted with other stuff. Only corrections are the above typo, and maaaybe "grant your salvation" -> "grant you salvation" to match the previous sentence, though I'm torn on that point. But regardless, this page is a thing of beauty. Aria's look of determination, the intricate runes and spell energy gathering around her, Demon Lord looking nonplussed as it starts radiating in her direction, and finally... the money shot. Soooooo good.
Asani
2021-06-30 08:26:30 +0000 UTCFantastic work. As was already noted, the only flaw is that it should be “repent”
ElSalsaRey
2021-06-29 14:34:15 +0000 UTCI hate to be that guy. Repent was misspelled at the end but all in a well done page it was epic.
2021-06-28 08:24:15 +0000 UTCBrilliant work! Absolutely brilliant!
Arbiter
2021-06-27 21:50:49 +0000 UTCCould this be the end of the demon lord
D Banks
2021-06-27 21:50:29 +0000 UTCAn end game white mage, uuuh well I suppose Aria had a lot of hidden potential that we didn’t see previously LOL. Her resolve can certainly help put this page and the next into perspective. I can also understand not wanting a drawn out fight since this was already 29 pages long.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-27 21:31:09 +0000 UTCI kinda run out of space. Big magic is fastest solutions. Just think that aria is end game level white mage since the party manage to storm demon lord castle lol.
ibenz009
2021-06-27 21:25:47 +0000 UTCloving it
Evelyn
2021-06-27 21:22:24 +0000 UTCfantastic work here!!!
JC
2021-06-27 21:13:29 +0000 UTCAn Interesting and a very well done page. I was hoping that all 6 of the remaining pages would come in pairs but given how good and detailed these pages are I can understand why that hasn’t happened.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-27 21:00:09 +0000 UTCIt certainly was quite a feat for Aria to unleash a top tier miracle from the light goddess, although while it did come with a big cost for Aria the fact that she was able to do it at all admittedly does stretch my suspension of disbelief a bit far I’m still surprised that Aria could do that in her Demon Form.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-27 20:59:57 +0000 UTC一緒に堕ちず、袂を分かつのがとても好きです。
guitar_double
2021-06-27 20:58:05 +0000 UTCWow, really love the lighting effects on this one.
StarGazer
2021-06-27 20:56:17 +0000 UTCAwesome job on the lighting!
HylianJayAppears
2021-06-27 20:55:43 +0000 UTC
