Demon lord chapter 2 p23
Added 2021-06-16 13:04:28 +0000 UTCTaking a bit long too finish this page. I've redraw almost the enitire page lol.
Anyway sorry for that. As alway if you want help fix my grammar or anything else feel free to post it in the comment.
Comments
Dear Ibenz, that was great, thank you
DenK
2021-06-20 09:28:42 +0000 UTCpoor, poor demon lord ... will he return to his ruins again? will he see the light in the window? please draw ibenz for him good luck and a happy streak?)))
DenK
2021-06-17 15:41:28 +0000 UTCAmazing and wonderful as always! Can't wait for the next chapter! Gotta love the nice and amazing poses!
Fetish Studio
2021-06-17 15:40:03 +0000 UTC23.1.1 HAHAHAHA {line break here} A demon who still thinks [it's / she's] a priestess wishes to purify the Demon Lord. My my, your antics never fail to amuse (me), Aria. {I was going to suggest an X-cum-Y construction, as it perfectly matches what Demon Lord is saying, but the more I look at it, priestess-cum-demon probably doesn't work as well as I'd like it too...} 23.1.2 whatI => what I 23.3.1 She's => She {"She's" is not necessarily incorrect, but I think "She" sounds better here.} 23.6.1 AWW that hurts => OWW that hurt 23.7.1 Just kidding, {try to fit it on one line} hurt => [injure / damage] {for word variety}
Asani
2021-06-16 19:41:55 +0000 UTCFIGHT-O!! :arm_chop:
Asani
2021-06-16 19:41:48 +0000 UTCNot simply the text, the artwork itself, when I zoom the page as a whole it is not quite as clear.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-16 19:20:13 +0000 UTCNot sure. The font is slightly pixelated if you really zoom in close, but otherwise they look like the same image. Did you left click to expand the dialogue version before downloading it?
Asani
2021-06-16 19:16:52 +0000 UTCgreat work !! but this format is not good for a pdf!!!
Stormfries
2021-06-16 15:59:51 +0000 UTCIs it just me or does the version of the page with the dialogue have a lower resolution?
MagicCobra911
2021-06-16 15:32:40 +0000 UTCA lovely chapter, but you've made some typos like, that's hurt, when it should've been, that hurts, and she disappear, when it's, she disappeared, else the page was fine. :)
Smash YoutubeHD
2021-06-16 13:22:13 +0000 UTCTruth be told, I actually appreciated the "Gah!" level of shock that the Demon Lord felt in the sketch. It had me fooled for a second.
Arthur Yeung
2021-06-16 13:11:56 +0000 UTCAria should just become the new Demon Lord!
Vinicius Paiva
2021-06-16 13:08:57 +0000 UTCLet the battle commence, I find it pretty neat that half of Aria’s face is covered in the purple goo and haunting yellow eyes for a moment before fully consuming her physically. I definitely thought form two was really cool and even intimidating, now that it’s in color I couldn’t possibly miss it.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-16 13:08:00 +0000 UTCgod I love your Demon Lord series! how you considered doing a timelapse, of you making a comic page from sketch to final?
JC
2021-06-16 13:07:46 +0000 UTCLooks good a b confusing how to read the chapter
Victor
2021-06-16 13:07:33 +0000 UTCWonderful; absolutely wonderful stuff!
Arbiter
2021-06-16 13:06:34 +0000 UTCLet them fight!
StarGazer
2021-06-16 13:05:50 +0000 UTC
