Demon lord chapter 2 p14-15
Added 2021-04-19 21:10:48 +0000 UTCWe're halfway there! At least it's better than waiting for new chapter of berserk lol.
Not much to say but hope you all still alive and well.
As always gramar and mistake feel free to tell me in the comment.
Comments
14.3.3 don't want... => I don't want... 14.4.2 sleeep => sleep 15.2.1 I'm => Am 15.2.2 I'm => Am 15.5.1 Such as => Like {"such as" works, but I think "like" sounds slightly better}
Asani
2021-04-29 01:11:24 +0000 UTCGilda perching on Aria's cocoon in the sketch was really cute, but I quite like the vibe of her lovingly embracing it in the final version here. Somehow Gilda's left arm looks longer than her right in that last panel, but that could just be me. Love the starry void Aria is floating in on page 15. Not sure if it was intentional, but her shadow body looks like a form-fitting space suit, which only enhances the "lost and alone" of it all~
Asani
2021-04-29 01:11:10 +0000 UTCIn the miraculous chance you aren't going to already, please have the Demon Lord and Aria make out! :3
Kevin
2021-04-21 07:28:16 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Thank you so much! I can add this info when I work on the novelization adaptation.
Arthur Yeung
2021-04-20 03:46:17 +0000 UTCIt’s interesting to see back story for Aria, Otto seems to look like Hero but older, this probably is just a coincidence but are they related?
MagicCobra911
2021-04-20 02:51:41 +0000 UTCWell i don't think it's important so i will not focus on that. The nun teach her some basic. She like it. when she decided become priestess enroll in church academy and get assign on some city and met hero there. Otto just visit her sometime and recommend her for the academy.
ibenz009
2021-04-20 02:22:39 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 So Otto is the one who trains Aria in priestess magic? Or do you have any ideas on a new character that will train her?
Arthur Yeung
2021-04-20 01:37:09 +0000 UTCNot decided yet she just a elderly sister who's running church orphanage. Aria enter priestess training much later.
ibenz009
2021-04-20 01:14:34 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Sorry, I meant the old hag that Otto recommends to train in magic under her..
Arthur Yeung
2021-04-20 01:08:40 +0000 UTCMentor name is otto. Knight it just side character.
ibenz009
2021-04-20 00:51:58 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Does Aria's mentor and the snooty knight in the flashback have a name?
Arthur Yeung
2021-04-20 00:13:16 +0000 UTCAnd on to the dream sequence! Still looks brilliant; I'll eagerly await the remaining pages of the comic.
Arbiter
2021-04-19 23:50:24 +0000 UTCI see you changed the structure one of the panels from what it was in the sketches again, admittedly I am a bit curious what else will change from the sketches.
MagicCobra911
2021-04-19 21:54:04 +0000 UTCYeah she is embracing Aria in such a nurturing and far reaching way☺️! It might even be my favorite panel with Gilda so far, although the panel with her giggling and having a delighted face from teasing Aria with a bite is up there too.
MagicCobra911
2021-04-19 21:46:42 +0000 UTCpg 14: sleeep -> sleep pg 15 change the 2 i'm to am in slide 2
Nathaniel Merrill
2021-04-19 21:22:29 +0000 UTCCoool
Stormfries
2021-04-19 21:14:47 +0000 UTCHeh, love the way Gilda's hair is holding Aria's cocoon.
StarGazer
2021-04-19 21:14:19 +0000 UTC
