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Demon lord chapter 2 p12

Another page is done. Slow and steady I said.

Hope you guy have a good week. As alway see any awful grammar or have a suggestion 

feel free to tell me on the comment.

On other note finally got Kama form Fgo gacha. 

Demon lord chapter 2 p12 Demon lord chapter 2 p12

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12.1.2 worryI => worry I alteryour => alter your ...like (I did with) Gilda. 12.1.3 Heh Gilbert let me turn him into whatever I wanted. He was so easy to mold and reshape that he must have felt he deserved his fate... {some missing or extra spaces here} 12.2.1 ...resisting? Still holding out hope you can yet save me? 12.2.3 to be a => to make a

Asani

Late again *sigh* but hopefully better now than never.

Asani

@ibenz009 congrats on kama roll, I also got her on my final single quartz, nearly lose hope and I saw your single page kama artwork, I love it. I hope it becomes a full tg sequence in the future

Arxynos

Wow so the Church had such an authoritative hold on him that Gilbert was capable of discretely/indirectly and knowingly going along with them to carry out the demise of his dear friend. I see how that would cause devastating guilt to those with a conscience which makes the Demon Lords words about Gilbert hit all the harder. That’s a good route for Gilbert’s characterization, a bit more grim than what I thought up but good in its own way.

MagicCobra911

So he got a easy way out of a problem

D Banks

Do you ever feel you don't want to face the problem and pretend it will go away until it's blow up right on your face. It's something right that. He don't want to kill his friends but he still duty bound to his mission. So he secretly wish he just die from the fight so he don't have to feel the guilt and can blame it to demon lord. Hero must die there is no alternative way to stop demon lord from coming back.

ibenz009

The question is why didn’t Gilbert tell him, was it really just raw fear/cowardice or something more that we didn’t quite see in these comic pages?

MagicCobra911

I forgot about that

D Banks

he knew what would happen to the hero and didnt tell him

Cylestea

Hey congrats on the gacha luck. About to use all mine in Arknights tomorrow lol. Also pretty good grammar on this one. That first bubble just needs some punctuation fixes.

Draknus2009

Damn I wonder what Gilbert did

D Banks

NP3 Kama – I got <i>incredibly</i> lucky with one particular 10-roll – however I'm still stuck with all my Alter Egos (including Kiara) at NP1.

Benjamin Lawton

Well done Aria’s new light blue skin tone and glaringly blended eyes look cool. I was mistaken about the context changing Gilbert feeling he deserves his fate is in fact an indication of guilt.

MagicCobra911

Oh real nice; and I'm familiar with that event, just wrapped it up earlier today and got Kama a couple of days ago

Arbiter

Love youre work 😊

Victor

You can’t say no to yuri action, looks amazing.

StarGazer

Gacha congratulations!

TEMAK


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