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Chapter 8 weekly status report (4)

Hi guys, work continues with Chapter 8 as planned. Last week I finished most of the illustrations and I've started writing the code.

I have a rough outline of the plot, one that I've gone over a few times now, since there are a lot of pieces I have to fit in a way that makes sense, and I want to advance the central plot points so the story and the action can move forward. I have the basic structure but I know I'll have to add and move pieces as I progress, so now I'll try and focus on the writing itself.

This chapter will be titled "Falling into place", referencing all those pieces that were left up in the air in Chapter 7 and that now have to find their place in the jigsaw of the plot. I feel this chapter won't be as action-packed and dramatic as the last once, since it will be more focused on defining where the characters are in the story and what path they will take moving forward, but that doesn't mean there will be some very hot scenes, some quite anticipated, and as always, some surprising ones

I hope to create another engaging and fun chapter for you guys, and deliver it as soon as possible. I can't wait to make the story move forward even more.

By the way, I re-released Chapter 7 with a few revisions. Check it out here!

Chapter 8 weekly status report (4)

Comments

Yes, it takes place after GGGB, but there is no canon ending. You may encounter her bad or good version, depending on with who have Lena slept with.

VK

The heroes of the story according to the script are not ready for a serious relationship at the moment, but they are increasingly content with casual sex without obligations ! Some partners can now use them as the object of their secret lustful desires and lure them into a trap! I wonder if people will notice that a person is in trouble? Will they help?

VALERY SMAISER

I'm confused though with Jess because I'm assuming since shes a tattoo artist it takes place after GGGB? Does that me an Jess has the redemptive ending as her cannon ending or was it the bad one?

Dandelion

OMG! I'd love to finally see them together.

Brother Bethor

Lena took it off just before she kissed Holly <3

Brother Bethor

But where are Holly's glasses?

Priestwiz

Hope Stan finally becomes THE MAN!

Dashole

So, Ian/Ivy confirmed on this chapter? :) ha, just kidding! I think I forgot to mention it before, but I believe Ian's interactions with both versions of Jess were among my favorite scenes of the last chapter. Before chapter 7, I was on the fence about bringing Jess to ORS, but I really enjoyed her meeting Ian at the bar or at the club - and the athletic's approach was hilarious (imagine if you'd drawn that scene, lol).

VK

Lena/Holly/Ian throuple!

Diana

Well now, "some quite anticipated" scenes? Crossing fingers for Lena/Holly. Looking forward to it.

Ethereal Twist


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