XaiJu
secretstash
secretstash

patreon


Oola Page 5, unfinished inks.

I'm pressing hard this week to get the last page out ASAP! I had hoped to have it finished today but I'm not quite there. I wanted to share this preview, at least.

The inks on it are about half way done, with the top right panel like 99% finished. The bottom panel is pretty close too, but the stomach lining that's currently drawn needs more development. The middle panel with Oola's feet going in needs more work rendering the rancor but is pretty close. The blank panel at the top left is going to be an in-mouth shot, and isn't inked yet because I'm not happy with the sketch yet.

Again, the fishnet costume gets added as part of the digital paint stage so that it's easier for me to work in the appropriate lighting.

Oola Page 5, unfinished inks.

Comments

Ms.Oola is a mouthful.

Oh man, that would be a good view! I already finished up drawing a panel with her pressed roughly between its teeth or I'd be using that idea! I think that'll have to be the view I use with the upcoming t-rex pages.

A shot of Oola grabbed by a second set of teeth like a goblin shark or a wet shot of her submerged in a pool of saliva would be cool. I think an intermediate shot after the great shot of the Rancor with her legs dangling, showing her on all 4 with her buttocks up trying to prevent being swallowed and the tongue pushing her between her legs down its throat.

Great work. It will be good when it's done.


More Creators