Oola, Page 4 Inks
Added 2019-08-13 19:58:55 +0000 UTCThe biggest part of the next comic is all set! I'll be starting on the digital painting tomorrow, and that'll be it for this one. Although the page is incomplete I wanted to get this up so that you can all at least see the forward progress. This page is my favorite so far. It's fun to contrast the rough textures of the rancor against Oola's soft curves.
Side note - her costume gets added in the painting stage so make the coloring easier for me.
Comments
mouth time is always great!
2019-08-17 06:31:18 +0000 UTCSome predators crush their prey before swallowing. More
2019-08-17 06:30:33 +0000 UTCtrack? In jungle bird there was screaming and some sound effects. I don't have a suggestion but maybe other would
2019-08-17 06:27:08 +0000 UTCI am wondering about the vore game. Do you have a sound
2019-08-17 06:21:49 +0000 UTCAlligator teeth resemble the Rancor teeth and alligators usually swallow large chunks by biting and tearing off flesh.
2019-08-17 03:32:19 +0000 UTCWe're into the territory of alien physiology, so the rancor might operate differently. Although most predators do not swallow their prey whole, those that can are my favorites and that's how I've always pictured this scene.
2019-08-16 12:29:04 +0000 UTCwould happen if Jabba lost his pet again.
2019-08-15 03:00:50 +0000 UTCand alive. Even a big beast like that could choke. What
2019-08-15 02:59:36 +0000 UTClike to add my view. Most predators don't swallow prey whole
2019-08-15 02:56:35 +0000 UTCArtists need to be free to create as they like. I still would
2019-08-15 02:55:36 +0000 UTCThere will be a page 5, and then that'll wrap up this comic. I haven't finalized the page layout yet but I do like ending with an internal shot, so almost certainly.
2019-08-14 16:54:43 +0000 UTCThis looks great! Is there a part 5 with an internal shot coming up out of interest?
2019-08-14 16:16:05 +0000 UTCThanks! Some tears would be a nice touch, I agree. Blood is something I'm thinking of trying out in the next comic (the cavegirl choose-your-own-ending scenario), like maybe a vicious raptor pack option. For this one, it's tempting but I always worry it'll alienate my soft-vore base. But I'm very open to feedback!
2019-08-14 12:03:08 +0000 UTCLooking awesome. I personally would love to see some blood and tears but that’s just my preference. Ty for making such a great comic of what is one of the most sorely over looked vore seems in history!
Tony
2019-08-14 11:52:16 +0000 UTC
