[Another minicomic script that never made it to being a minicomic. This one for obvious reasons being it's too long and would take quite some extra time to make. DISCLAIMER: I don’t claim to be a good writer! This is just meant to be a short outline/idea for a comic]
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‘You still haven’t told me what you want for your birthday.’ Kim said aloud, breaking the silence. It was late in the evening with both of us lounging in the living room on opposite couches, him channel surfing and me on my phone looking up movies we could watch.
‘Yeah I haven’t decided yet..’ I answered.
‘It’s in two days!’ He snapped with a laugh.
‘Fine, an iPad then.’ I told him. ‘This phone sucks and it’s too small.’
‘You know I can’t afford that right now. If you don’t price it under $100 I’m just gonna buy you dinner and call it a day.’ He mumbled.
‘I know something I want that’s free.’ I looked over smiling.
He looked back over at me. ‘Come on.. No.’ He groaned, rolling his eye.
‘You don’t even know what I’m gonna say!’ I laughed, getting up from the loveseat and going to lay next to him on the bigger sofa.
‘It’s the same thing you’ve been asking for for the past 2 months!’
‘Well if you just let me top you once maybe I’d stop asking.’ I grinned.
‘...I’ll save up for the iPad.’ He smiled and resumed flipping TV channels.
‘Seriously?! You’d spend like a $1000 just so a dick doesn’t go up your ass?!’ I blurted. It sounded even dumber when I said it out loud.
‘They’re that much?!’
‘Hey, don’t change the subject, why can’t we just make this a special birthday occasion? I haven’t topped anyone in years! My poor machismo is withering away!’ I joked and dramatically stretched out, now halfway on top of him.
‘It’s not that I’m trying to emasculate you, don’t make me feel bad.’ Kim huffed.
‘Then what’s the problem?’ I asked, not expecting a serious answer but quite surprised when he gave one.
‘I just think.. I’m not as confident on bottom. I’ve only done it a few times a really long time ago.’ He got out.
‘Really??’ I asked but then it got quiet. ‘I got an idea. Toys!’ I said.
‘What.. Adult toys?’
‘No, Legos, yes adult toys! That way it’s controlled and maybe less embarrassing. And it kinda eases you into the whole thing!’ I wasn’t even trying to be sexy, I was just excited I had a solution that made sense, at least in my head.
‘How in gods name is that less embarrassing?!’ Kim laughed.
‘Because! Think of it more like an erotic massage than you bottoming. We can treat it very professionally. Like how guys get happy endings in spas. But this'll be hotter.’
‘Well.. I dunno.. I guess.. But if I hated it, we‘d stop.’ He blushed slightly and looked back at the tv.
‘Duh. Then you’d just get to fuck me with it.’ I laughed.
- - - -
The next day Kim got home from a long day at work and saw a suspicious black plastic bag on the kitchen counter. I stood beside it, arms crossed with a smile painted on my face. He didn’t say anything, just turned his head to me, knowing I was up to something.
‘I went to Sadie’s Adult Novelties today.’
‘You did not! I didn’t think we were serious!’ Kim immediately blushed.
‘Oh, I was dead serious. And I already discretely threw out the box and receipt, don’t worry. Look at it!’ My excitement overpowered his embarrassment.
He pulled out a velvet bag and opened it to see an 8in, mildly veiny flesh colored dildo with a rounded base that looked like a tight ballsack.
‘Kylee, what the fuck, this thing is huge!!’ He blushed again, his voice almost a whisper as if he thought other people were in the house.
‘You never said there was a size limit! I made sure to get one the same size as you so you know what I go through.’
‘You don’t know how big I—‘
‘I measured your morning wood once out of curiosity while you were still asleep, that’s not the point! I also got some really good lube, too, it was a package deal.’
‘It’s kinda heavy.. Am I really this big?’ Kim asked, grabbing the shaft of it. I snatched it out of his hand before he could inspect it more.
‘You better prep yourself tonight! I’ve never been this excited for a birthday present before!’ I teased, placing the toy back in the velvet bag and pulling the strings out to close it.
‘Why the fuck did I agree to this..’ he shook his head.
- - - -
Kim and I were on his bed, making out. I was straddling him, already having gotten rid of my clothes. He still had underwear on, which I took my time removing before slowly feeling up the rest of his body. Our tongues entangled as I felt around inside the familiar mouth. Spit started to trail down our chins as our enthusiasm picked up. I broke us apart as soon as I felt up his chest.
‘Your heart’s beating pretty fast.’ I commented. I wasn’t sure if it was from nervousness or anticipation but either way, it got me more excited. My dick was already hardening and we hadn’t even started.
I reached over for the velvet bag and pulled out our new friend as Kim made a small huff noise.
‘Well, there went my hopes that you’d forgotten about it.’ Kimrick joked, grimacing a bit at seeing it. His tone was light though so I knew he wasn’t as deep in regret as he was letting on.
‘We don’t have to do this..!’ I laughed and seated myself in front of him. He was still on his back, his body supported at a slight angle by pillows.
‘No.. it’s your birthday... and you were right, giving you some control is probably good for us..’ He slowly placed both legs on each side of me more comfortably, adjusting his hips a bit which gave me full view of his body. His hand was still on his dick though, rubbing it idly. I got the feeling he wasn’t trying to hide the sight from me, more just try to occupy or distract himself.
‘I wasn’t that serious about the masculinity thing.. But also good cuz without the box and receipt, we can’t return these.’ I smiled and kissed him quickly in appreciation.
I popped the cap of the lube and coated my first 2 fingers with it generously. The lube had a good weight to it, it was almost more gel than liquid. I placed my left hand on his side to steady myself as my right hand reached down, slowly beginning to massage his entrance. I pulled all the tricks I used to do on Scotty and the other guys I’ve topped. First in circles, then slight pressure, then back and forth, massaging the taint while I was at it. Kim had his eye closed and I could tell he was trying to hold his breath.
‘Relax, Kim, remember? It’s just a massage.’ I cooed, finishing the sentence by plunging a finger in, not unlike a doctor trying to distracting you when you get a flu shot.
‘Aah..’ he breathed out heavily. I knew this part probably wasn’t the most fun for someone who was nervous or forgot what it felt like.. or both.. So I tried to make it a bit sexier by grinding my dick onto his, sandwiching my hand and wrist between our groins.
I moved slightly, feigning thrusting while my fingers worked their magic inside him. His breath started hitching when I did that and it boosted my confidence.
‘You okay?’ I asked, almost thinking small talk would help out as well.
‘F-fine.. Yer good at this...’ he mumbled as I added another finger, making him tense up a bit. His hand would frequently come up to cover his face to hide his twisted up expressions. I thought about telling him to stop but didn't have the heart.
‘Not as good as you but I’m trying.’ I laughed. I figured trying to boost his confidence would help to match mine in that moment. I leaned in and pressed my lips onto his and that seemed to help even more. As if I was saying "it’s okay, you’re in good hands."
I pulled my fingers out and grabbed the toy.
‘Th..that was it?! That wasn’t enough, was it?’ He brought his hand down to feel the lubed up mess I left below his balls.
‘That’s what all you do to me. I assume it’s enough, I’ve never had problems.’ I told him, shrugging. His non-characteristic naivety was only making me more riled up. I lubed up the silicone toy which started creating small squelching noises. It really didn’t sound any different than stroking a real lubed dick.
‘You’ve.. You said you had experience with these, right?’ Kim asked.
‘Once or twice with Scotty. But we couldn’t get into it.’ I smirked as I started to stroke his entrance again, adding a few last minute preparations.
‘Then why’d you.. hnngh.. suggest we do it?!’ He questioned.
‘Cuz Scotty and I were just being idiots. I knew this was gonna be different. Better. Sexier. Don’t tell him I said that.’ I laughed and positioned myself a bit better to lighten the weight off my knees. I raised Kim's leg up just a bit to give me more room. And view.
I touched the slicked up head of the dildo against his somewhat more loose hole.
‘It’s cold..’ he mumbled through gritted teeth.
I laughed under my breath, brought it up to breathe heat on it almost comically, then lowered it and began pushing it in. He tensed up immediately and even tried to squirm backwards a bit, making a long whimper noise in the process. But he had no where to go so my hands just followed along with the squirms.
I caught myself starting to pant and my face starting to get hot. His eye was closed so he couldn’t see me but I was very much enjoying this new sight in front of me. Not even the dildo action but just seeing his body move like that. His abs would tense up then relax, his hips would squirm a bit then settle.. It was like I’d forgotten what it was like to make someone’s body react like this. And now I was doing it to Kimrick of all people.
I pushed the toy in, pulled it out a little, pushed more, pulled a little.. it kept going for a minute or two, letting his body continue to get adjusted to the intrusion as my body had to do every time he fucked me.
‘How’s it feel?’ I asked, letting my left hand continue to push the toy in and out ever so slightly as my right snaked down to my own dick, now rock hard. Kim’s breath was hitching more frequently and soft moans were escaping his lips beneath a hand that covered his face. I could guarantee if he could hear himself he would never let us do this again.
‘It’s not.. bad...’ he told me through gritted teeth, his voice slightly muffled by the hand on his face and I almost forgot I asked him a question. ‘..You can go faster.’
‘Cuz you want it or cuz you want it over with?’ I teased, as he had teased me many times before in bed.
‘Jus’ do it, you little shit.’ I couldn't see his mouth through the hand covering it but judging from the tone, he was smiling at my dumb attempts to be dominant.
I quickened my pace, shoving the toy in and out, watching Kim’s face.. imagining it being done to me.. wanting to make him feel good. I reached back and started fingering myself almost out of some kind of instinct.
We were both panting pretty hard at that point. Kim was making the best soft grunting noises I’d ever heard as our warm breath danced around us making the air thick.
‘Aaah..! Move it a bit more.. forward..!’ Kim got out, his hips rising and falling a bit, trying to find the spot I had just hit.
‘M..my forward or your forward?’ I asked like an idiot.
‘Mine!’ He snapped and I realized I had most likely hit his prostate.
I plunged the toy as deep as it could go inside him and pushed it up. I could see his body tense up at that feeling. One of his feet were pressing so hard against my legs behind me that I knew I'd end up with bruises.
I worked at the angle a bit, trying to rub along that designated area the best I could. It was the weirdest and hottest thing seeing Kim so much at my mercy. Something he might not have considered before all of this being the world’s biggest alpha male. And it was something only I could view and enjoy.
And then I knew how I could make it even better for him.
I lowered my head and began licking the head of his dick, which was already swollen, looking like it needed more attention anyway.
Kim’s eye shot open in confusion. ‘Kylee!!’
Instead of answering I pressed the toy deep inside of him and plunged my mouth down his shaft, not taking all of him in but enough for me to play with. My tongue darted around it inside my mouth and I heard Kim start moaning again, a bit louder this time. I brought up my free hand to grip the base of his dick, adding extra pressure every now and then.
His hips bucked harder and the familiar salty taste of precum flew around my mouth mixing with my saliva.
I worked my mouth and the toy at the same time with Kim thrusting and squirming every now and then, his heavy breathing being the only constant.
‘Aah! Fuck..! It’s too much..!’ He arched his back and let his hand grab the side of my head. Familiar slurping sounds were filling the room as both of us moved to my rhythm. My tongue hit the little groove right below the head of his dick, which I knew was one of his weak spots, and I could hear a sharp inhale of breath from him.
It was time for my last surprise. I sneakily pressed the not-terribly-obvious button on the bottom of the dildo. It began vibrating. The balls of it were actually a vibrator motor in disguise and by throwing out the box and the ‘on’ button being concealed under the silicone, I was hoping to have surprised Kimrick.
‘Fucking Christ, it’s a vibrator?!!’ Kim spat out, his body instantly freezing up and shaking at the new sensation. I could hear the buzzing with how close I was to it and hoped it was set at a good speed for him.
I raised my mouth enough to smile and utter a ‘Surprise!’ And then continued my assault on his lower body. It surprisingly wasn’t too hard to keep a pace going between the blowjob and the dildo-turned-vibrator but Kim was just about done so I sped it all up, spit and snot trailing down my face as he thrust his hips up again, his cock hitting the back of my throat and making me suppress a gag.
It took less than a minute and he reached his limit. ‘I.. Kylee, aaAAH!!’ He called out and shot inside my mouth in a few lightning fast spurts. I could feel his whole body convulse beneath me as I swallowed everything I could, with the rest drizzling out of the corners of my mouth.
I rested my head on his thigh and moved the hand on his dick to my own, finishing myself off. It didn’t take much and I came shortly after he did, shooting into my hand with a muffled screech. I breathed out a heavy sigh as my body went warm and weak.
‘Kylee, turn it off..!’ Kim pleaded.
‘Oh yeah,’ I commented nonchalantly and pressed and held the button to turn off the vibration. I wiped my cum-stained hand on my leg which was already sleek with sweat and climbed up the bed to lay next to him. I’d shower in a minute.
Kim reached down, pulled the toy out and tossed it on the floor, clearly not worried about cleaning at the moment. We laid on our backs in silence for a second, both of us staring up at the ceiling, panting and trying to come down off of the high we just experienced.
‘Well? What’d you think?’ I eventually asked.
‘I think you were a demon in a past life.. what’s the sexual one?’
‘Haha, an Incubus?’
‘Yeah, that one..’ He laughed softly, his body no doubt still trying to process what just happened to it. ‘..I’m not gonna say I didn’t like it..’ he mumbled, his eye closed.
‘Really?’ I asked honestly, turning my head toward him.
‘I’ll admit it did feel pretty good at the end but.. I can’t believe you go through all that prep and pain every time we fuck..’
I laughed. ‘It’s the burden all bottoms have to bear.’
‘I swear..’ Kim laughed. ‘Why are we even gay..’ That made me laugh louder. Then we both laughed louder. The endorphin release must have made us loopy.
Once we quieted down again, I reached my left hand that was between us to hold his hand in mine. He accepted it and our fingers interlaced.
‘This was suppose to be your birthday present but I think I got more out of it than you did.’ Kim sighed, already sounding like he was falling asleep.
‘Says you. I was very much enjoying it. We may even have to make this a regular birthday thing? Maybe even replace dildo for my dick one year? Eh?’ I half-joked at the end.
‘Maybe.’ Kim answered, calmly. My eyes widened.
‘Or I can just get a payment plan on that iPad.’ He turned and smiled at me. I slapped him playfully.
We laughed.
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