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Beyond Critical - Chapter 8.1

One question remained at the forefront of Kaito's mind.

"…If you have all this planned out, why haven't you done it yet?" he asked. There had to be a reason why. Otherwise, he would have just used them already before he and Irina turned up and been on his merry way.

"Because it's really rather complicated to use them, when you're not a devil yourself you fool." Satanael scoffed, shaking his head.

Not an explanation at all.

But, Kaito would take it.

After all, h...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 7.2

It was only the eruption of a wave of pitch black cursed flame that saved Satanael from being consumed by dragon fire.

That was fine.

It blocked his vision after all.

He was unable to see as Kaito, blurred and moved.

The teenager rounded the fallen angel and shot at him from behind. A kick shot out aimed at the back of one of the fallen angel's knees and made contact.

The fallen stumbled back just in time for Kaito to clasp both gauntlet clad hands together and s...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 7.1

"It's really quite fascinating, the ability of Arondight that is," Satanael eyed the dark blade in his hand almost hungrily, "It can copy any attribute and use it. Funnily enough, I never honestly paid that much attention to it until recently when I found myself in my current position, but now that I have, I'm almost grateful."

Kaito had no idea where he was going with this, but he let him talk, and glanced back to meet Irina's eyes.

She wasn't looking too confident now and he cou...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 6.2

The force of his strike bodily lifted Satanael up and slammed him into the wall, hard enough to dent the concrete wall.

Black feathers rained down lightly through the air and Kaito scowled. He couldn't see Satanael even though the man was right in front of him?

Why?

Because he was cocooned beneath ten large ebony black feathered wings that erupted from his back just before Kaito's fist struck him.

"That….that is not a Vritra gear." a ragged growl echoed from within t...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 6.1

"You didn't have to come you know."

"No offense," Kaito prefaced, side-eyeing the girl he was walking along the streets of Kuoh with, "I kinda did."

"It's sweet of you to worry, but I'm not weak Kaito-kun," Irina puffed her cheeks up and pouted at him, "I'm a holy sword wielder y'know, I even have an Excalibur with me!" she lifted her arm out of the cloak she was once again wearing and wiggled it in front of his face, specifically the floral bracelet she had tied around her bicep....

Beyond Critical - Chapter 5.2

While Kaito was absolutely curious who the white cloaked figure was that was meeting up with the devils at Kuoh Academy.

He also didn't care at the same time and wanted nothing to do with them and whatever they were in town for.

So why was it, when classes ended for the day and Kaito was making his way to the Muscle Garden gym, the construction site at which he honed his muscular temple…..he found himself staring at-

"O-blessings on this pitiful lost, lamb, won't you besto...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 5.1

Thankfully for Kaito, after the stupidity that was his Monday and dealing with not only a walking talking sexual assault case, but a stupid murderous priest and an overweight Chinese Emperor, his days were much more quiet from then on.

'The fact that's even a sentence that I thought is stupid in of itself though.' he mused as he leaned over the railing atop the academy roof.

Since Monday, he'd taken to retreating up here. He honestly thought initially, it was only shown in light l...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 4.2

Once he'd pilfered everything useful from the stray exorcist, and even stole the mans coat, because it was rather high quality and quite dapper looking-

Kaito left the alley way behind in a hurry and continued on his way to the gym, 'I should start working on stretching out properly and getting limber enough to use my Muay Thai properly.' he mused.

It would probably take a few weeks, if not months of conditioning usually, but he was already pretty flexible so it wouldn't take as l...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 4.1

Hours after dinner, Yanagi found herself leaning over her windowsill, peering out her bedroom window as she watched Kaito walk away.

It was already getting dark out, but surprise surprise, he was not on his way home, but on the way to the gym.

'Who could have ever predicted that?' she snorted.

As she told her brother earlier, he practically lived at the gym. Actually, lately he was there even more than usual.

Anytime she called him outside of school hours, there was at...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 3.2

"I hereby call the Uzaki family dinner to order!"

Fujio announced with a laugh and big grin from where he sat at the head of the table. Kaito found himself seated next to Yanagi, directly facing her older siblings while her mother busied about in the kitchen.

"Dad, the food isn't even fully ready yet." Uzaki Kiri, the only male of the three siblings pointed out exasperatedly with a roll of his eyes. Despite being the only son of the family, he looked nothing like his father. Being...

Beyond Critical

So, I'll get straight to the point. I was thinking of maybe adding in Trinity Seven to the Multi-cross for Beyond Critical.

But, I thought maybe there's already enough going on. In the end, I couldn't decide, so I figured I'd leave it up to you guys to decide if you want it included or not.

Beyond Critical - Chapter 3.1

One might think, that after their first real encounter with someone from the supernatural side of the world and being involved in their first ever supernatural fight, one would be rather shook up and have to take some time to themselves to calm down and come to terms with things.

Kaito found, that wasn't really the case for him.

As he left the alley way behind and the unconscious form of a 'king' slumped in the trash like a chump, he felt pretty calm.

And pretty good actuall...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 2.2

Kaito looked over his shoulder at Murayama and jerked his chin at the alley entrance, "Get out of here, I'll deal with this clown." he told her.

She hesitated, "Go!" he barked at her and she finally listened after a moment taking off running.

Which was good.

Because she couldn't be here to see what he was going to have to do at this point.

"You've really pissed me off kid," Cao Huan snarled as he stood up, the green aura extending from around his leg and travelling up ...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 2.1

Surprisingly, or maybe not so surprisingly. Kaito found himself having a rather relaxing weekend with no disruptions.

And he was right in the end, that all his tension at the sudden interest Koneko had in him because of his power increase, was absolutely useless in the end and a waste of time.

It did not of course stop him, from hitting up the gym every single day over the weekend.

While that would usually be detrimental to training ones physical body, he was a rather unusua...

Jordinio Version - Chapter 31.2

Weirdly, Misty didn't take too kindly to the fact that I was going to be heading to Kalos soon.

Dunno why to be honest, I told her I wouldn't be there for long in the relative scheme of things, I do plan on competing in the Indigo League after all. And it wasn't like she actually travelled with me or anything like that.

'Women.' I shook my head as the wind whistled in my ears, once again riding through the air atop Pidgeot, 'I just don't get them sometimes.'

Well, at least I...

Systematic Shinobi - Chapter 46.2

He slid his foot back further to push off with, at the same time he made a single hand seal and exploded forward in a rush towards the old man with a shunshin enhanced blitz.

His eyes with their enhanced perception were digging into the old mans form, preparing for any move he could make from the slightest twitches of his muscles as he rushed forward lashing out with a rapid right straight aiming for his face, specifically his eyes, to cut off his vision.

It was a feint after all....

Update And Poll

Right, so finally my cold is beginning to clear up enough to really get into things again. The replacement of Class Extended, wasn't supposed to be for a while yet, I was just using the first chapter to get back into the swing of things. With my bitch ass bug almost done for, my exzema under management with that once again and me set to get back to the gym tomorrow and re-ignite the grind, it all culminates in time to write properly again. Gonna work on Systematic Shinobi today and possibly s...

Beyond Critical - Chapter 1

Another day, another seven hours of absolutely wasted time.

Koneko resisted the urge to sigh and roll her eyes in annoyance as she made her way through the halls of Kuoh Academy towards her classroom. As always, people greeted her constantly and kept trying to talk to her and get in her space.

She really hated that mascot crap they labelled her with.

She could be doing a million other things that would be a better use of her time. Like sleeping. Or listening her rap music. O...

Alright anime, but...?

So an overwhelming win on the anime, I kinda expected it to win, but not to that degree cuz I found the manga really good.

But what region did you prefer? And with what main poke-girl?

And yes I did exclude Alola with Lana, Mallow and Lilie and Gen 8 with Chloe. Cuz, let's be honest, those are the death of the anime. and the only good ones are Mallow as best girl in Alola by far and Chloe for cucking Goh.

Update

So, since I'm still getting my ass kicked by this cold, I decided to get a new laptop so I could work on shit from bed. I got a pretty good laptop, one that generally costs £800 but I got for £260 with a Black Friday deal. You'd think one that price would be really good, right? Well, you're not wrong...more or less. See, the thing is, the keys on it are well, way more bunched together than I'm used to, so it's throwing me off trying to use it cuz I'm generally used to being able to type wit...

Systematic Shinobi - Chapter 46.1

Sarutobi chuckled lightly at Daiki's insult, "Now now Daiki-kun, your Tobirama-sensei is showing, what would Sasuke-kun think?" he wagged his finger at him, "Besides once you get to a certain point, it becomes rather easy to copy jutsu even without the Sharingan."

"…Wait, what?" Daiki blinked, his slight shock over seeing his own seal being used by somebody else dissipating. Like, he had copied jutsu before, but it was different for him, while he didn't have the Sharingan, he could fu...

Systematic Shinobi - 3rd Harem Slot

So, as I mentioned before, now that we've hit the end of chapter 45, I'll be beginning the poll to decide on who gets the 3rd out of five harem slots.

And here, have a Kushina I made.

Systematic Shinobi - Chapter 45.2

When the joking conversation died down, Hiruzen turned to Daiki, "Are you ready?" he asked.

"I wouldn't be here if I wasn't old man." Daiki responded, smirk fading as his lips pressed into a thin line, serious mode going into effect.

"Good, because we don't have a whole lot of time," Hiruzen nodded, "I won't be going easy on you at all." he said, placing his hand on Daiki's shoulder.

And it was then the boy noticed.

His pipe was gone.

He hadn't noticed.

…...

Systematic Shinobi - Chapter 45.1

The next morning, as the dawn came and the sun rose up bit by bit into the sky, found Daiki sitting on the edge of his bed. Lewd, wet slurping sounds echoed throughout the room, bouncing off the walls.

Between his legs, the naked, voluptuous form of Anko had her lips wrapped around the fat head of his cock, as her hands slowly stroked up and down the rigid manhood, and she worshipped his balls with her tongue.

Only possible thanks to how long she could make her tongue. It was a no...

Anko In The Poll?

So, I'll be making the next waifu member poll for Systematic Shinobi after I finish chapter 45. Only 2/5 of the full slots have been filled by Tenten and Hinata. Originally, Anko wasn't a waifuable choice, and was more going to just be a bootycall, but quite a few people keep messaging me and bringing it up and asking me to add her, so like the lazy cretin I am, I decided to dump it on you guys and delegate. So, do you want Anko to be a possible waifu candidate and be included in the waifu po...

Eternal

‘I don’t feel any different.’ Ash noted.

It was dark out now, the mass of noise that was the stadium that hosted the Masters Eight, was empty. Not a single soul was present, except for him.

He was sitting atop the stand where Leon presented the trophy to him. Declaring him the winner of the Masters Eight, passing the crown to him, beginning the new reign of a monarch, the strongest trainer in the world.

...That was him now.

Yet as he sat here atop the stand, star...

Systematic Shinobi - Chapter 44.2

Well, it was his reward after all.

Still, that didn't mean he should just rush into it. While she was pretty wet already by his reckoning, if he just did what he did with Kurenai with her, he was more than likely going to hurt her. And not in the fun way.

A little prep work would go a long way to get her ready and make breaking her in all the more fun.

He planned on making sure she came crawling back for more.

"Come sit in daddy's lap." Daiki grinned, patting his naked...

Zanpakuto Poll

So, weirdly the poll didn't set to the date I put for it and just ended at like 2 hours ago apparently, it was supposed to go on till tomorrow night. And I can't re-open the original poll either, thanks Patreon.

So just casting it again here, sorry for the blunder guys.

Zanpakuto

So among other things, I haven't been just idle while in bed over the past week. I've been putting thought into the zanpakuto for systematic Soul and I've narrowed it down to two I like, though if you guys don't like either you can veto them. 

On top of that, I decided to pay for a subscription with NovelAi to generate images to use for my stories. It's not the most accurate, but some of the images are still really, really good. Like, I made this one for Daiki.

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Update

God this bug has been a way bigger pain in the ass than I thought it would be. I thought I'd shake it within a day or two like I usually do but man, I still have it. I've went through two boxes of those lemon cold relief sache drink things. It's mostly clearing up now thankfully, and I should hopefully be back to the grind tomorrow and getting shit written. I'm gonna need to power mode to make up for lost time.