Chapter 32 is up
Don't mind me. Just sipping coffee while crying.
2025-06-22 16:16:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Don't mind me. Just sipping coffee while crying.
2025-06-22 16:16:45 +0000 UTC View PostI forgot how absolutely devastating these chapters were. SO ENJOY.
Link to the document in Discord.
2025-06-22 15:27:51 +0000 UTC View PostI forgot how fucking sad this chapter was, and now I need to go do something else for a little while.
2025-06-21 20:53:08 +0000 UTC View PostWorking through these as best as I can. We're going to be coming up to more major rewrites pretty soon again.
2025-06-21 16:18:02 +0000 UTC View PostPoor Austin. It's a little life.
As usual, the story link is up on the story-updates channel in Patreon discord.
2025-06-21 15:14:52 +0000 UTC View PostHad to rearrange some scenes and rewrite quite a bit. I took out Derrek's point of view from the old draft and kept it in the main character's.
It was a quick rewrite, and I haven't revised it. Considering I have to go back through the whole book again for another revision, it's kind of pointless to revise right now since it just wastes more time.
Anyways, it has been added to the document. The link to the document is on the discord story-updates channel.
2025-06-20 01:23:18 +0000 UTC View PostHope you have time for some Sunday evening perversions. Same deal. Patreon Discord. Story updates.
2025-06-15 23:08:42 +0000 UTC View PostDid a little rewriting to sync up with the changes I made earlier in the story. As always, updates to the document are in story-updates in Patreon Discord.
2025-06-15 16:44:24 +0000 UTC View PostI added a scene that was in the original draft but I left out before posting it. As always, the link to the story is in story-updates on the Patreon discord.
2025-06-14 17:27:51 +0000 UTC View PostWas able to finish it today. Okay, I'm done for the weekend. X|
2025-06-09 00:16:00 +0000 UTC View PostSame deal as earlier. I may get one more chapter going today after a bike ride.
2025-06-08 16:37:48 +0000 UTC View PostHad to do a bit more rewriting, but for the most part kept a lot of it the same. Document on the Patreon discord story-updates
2025-06-08 15:24:28 +0000 UTC View PostHad to do a bit of rewriting. I didn't realize just how intertwined the scenes from chapter 17 were with everything up until now. Hopefully this is the last I have to deal with it.
As always, link to the document is in Story-updates on the Patreon-only discord channel.
2025-06-07 15:57:51 +0000 UTC View PostNot sure if I want the chapter to end like that or if I want that last part to go into the next chapter. Anyways, the chapter is up on the story-updates channel on Discord
2025-06-01 03:59:47 +0000 UTC View PostFuck that was a lot to rewrite. I'm still up in the air with this chapter since I had to change so much. It kind of seems unfocused, but that I kind of have an idea of how to steer the story. It will definitely need some major revision later on, but for now I'll leave it at this.
Some of this stuff was pivotal to the plot later on, so I may have just toppled an entire house of cards.
Anyways, chapter 18 is up, I'm 50-50 on it, and we'll see what I think of it later on in the rev...
2025-05-26 17:41:51 +0000 UTC View PostThis chapter was completely rewritten. Had to change some lore which will very much ripple into the later chapters. So there will probably be more rewriting in future chapters as well. The hard part starts now, so there will be times when chapters won't be up as fast.
As always, all chapters are in a google doc shared on my story-updates channel on discord for Patrons.
2025-05-18 00:30:22 +0000 UTC View PostOkay, we are getting to the part where I will be completely rewriting these chapters, so bear with me.
2025-05-12 18:03:10 +0000 UTC View PostI didn't change too much here, but I did clean up some of the interactions between Art and Austin.
2025-05-12 14:52:34 +0000 UTC View PostThis one required quite a lot more rewriting. I'm changing Mosavi's personality. Not too much, but enough to give him a bit more depth as a character while also making him a little more likeable.
2025-05-11 14:30:35 +0000 UTC View PostI was wondering why I've gotten no feedback, and I realized I had comments disabled. They are enabled now.
2025-05-05 02:16:52 +0000 UTC View PostAlright, I think I'm done for the day.
2025-05-04 18:59:08 +0000 UTC View PostDidn't really have to do TOO much rewriting with this chapter either, but I am setting Mosavi up for a change. The biggest rewrites will be probably chapter 12 and onward. As always, the link to the beta document is in Story-Updates on discord.
2025-05-04 15:08:58 +0000 UTC View PostYou know the drill. Link is on the story updates channel in Discord! Changed quite a few things, but left a lot of things alone in this chapter. I haven't had to MAJORLY rewrite anything yet, which is good.
Since this is an alternate version of Earth, I'm changing state names to something made-up. Eventually when I go back through this story to change the character names and stuff, I'll be changing some of the pop culture references. Some will stay, others will change.
2025-05-04 03:44:16 +0000 UTC View PostAs always, the link to the google document is up on the story-updates channel on Discord!
2025-05-03 20:24:42 +0000 UTC View Post
"You can't escape the curse..." After years of abuse in a loveless relationship, Leo Grayson secretly packs up his life and heads west to Varcross, Oregon. But there’s a problem: Varcross doesn’t exist—well, not in Oregon. Strange lights over the highway send Leo careening into an impossible realm with no way to escape. While struggling to cope with being the only human in a cursed and derelict town, he finds love and companionship with the very monsters who may one day lose control and ...
2025-04-30 00:51:07 +0000 UTC View PostI found out that most of the document didn't copy over, and I ended up losing about a quarter of my changes for chapter 6. It's up now in full. Sorry about that.
2025-04-27 18:32:44 +0000 UTC View PostThis was was also a bit of an extensive rewrite. I noticed a lot of inconsistencies that end up not making sense in later chapters. Those are being fixed.
This story is definitely getting another round of extensive revision before I can call it serviceable, but it'll get there. Once again, the document is in the Story-Updates channel on Discord.
2025-04-27 16:24:41 +0000 UTC View PostI did a LOT of rewriting this chapter. I took out the weird threesome sex scene and replaced it with something a lot more in character for both Derrek and Arthur. It hasn't been revised, so it's a little rough. It's a little more emotionally involved and sets up the conflict between Derrek and Simon a little more than having it come out of left field.
2025-04-27 04:17:07 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 5 is where I'm going to be hitting a rewrite wall. I didn't think the threesome, double penetration scene came so damn soon in this story. I keep forgetting, it was only supposed to be about 6 chapters long, so I just crammed as much fucking into the beginning as possible.
Anyways, the shared document is in the Discord channel. Feel free to comment and critique.
I'm going for a long bike ride before coming back to this again. I hope to get up to Chapter 7 this weekend, b...
2025-04-26 16:50:50 +0000 UTC View PostI'll be working on the next two-three chapters over the weekend. If you want to read the progress, I have linked the google doc in the Story-updates channel in Discord in the Patreon channels.
I'm making quite a bit of progress, but I suspect it will slow down as I have to rewrite more. Either way, it feels good to be getting this off my plate.
2025-04-25 13:14:55 +0000 UTC View Post