https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CcH68D44ztCx4lAhcRfjUSsBYV4wpV2cPhJ9tMLOPTI/edit?usp=sharing
I wanted to also do Rain's bit from Yuzhen's PoV, but it's gonna be long so i cut things short.
Head throbbing from the influx of Sendings, Yuzhen closed her mind off and bowed her head, praying this First Imperial Grand Conference would en...
2018-05-01 20:22:17 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jngGinLpnFpdpio1Vz8ggH7kDVLgmgXqJnvDU-0mRuc/edit?usp=sharing
Propping myself up on the side of the skiff, I cant help but smile at the antics taking place. Cupped gently in the palm of his hand, my teacher turns in place and holds the green stone high, locked in a bitter struggle with the greedy and ...
2018-04-29 20:37:42 +0000 UTC
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Depending on how long the explanation takes, I may move it onto the next chapter. Usually after editing, ch's get longer too, and I feeel like I forgot sth in this ch. Will Get back to you all if there's more.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zl0-UoauWiL9650wH0CsuFr7Vf10uDUQWYuuuCkF9J4/edit?usp=sharing
No one ever mentions it...
2018-04-26 20:52:17 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sxK76UQRVNyvx-mBm5LleR9qP2S9hJo0z8Sc6jHfAZQ/edit?usp=sharing
Waking to the fragrant smell of roasted meat, Song gingerly extracted herself from the pile of slumbering animals and Lins tangled embrace. Frowning in her sleep, Lin grumbled and rolled over to claim another victim, clinging tightly t...
2018-04-25 15:49:13 +0000 UTC
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Was really struggling to finish this, but I think I need to sleep on it, or at least step away for a bit. Not happy with how it went, but can't quite say why. I haven't written the ending yet, so it's missing like a fifth or mebbe more. Sorry bout this, but i might just rewrite the whole thing. We'll see.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...
2018-04-24 23:03:47 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dgH1qd7_nq-wQE_IJ_4ZXMHTGOVsma-fsLW1fgJtqEU/edit?usp=sharing
Going over my presentation didnt take long because I didnt have much prepared. The meeting with the Legate is all a big game of show and tell, a wallet-measuring contest of the highest levels, and Akanai only had a few suggestions regarding delivery...
2018-04-22 19:29:58 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DumEhUMX4BhOj8n9riLhDZsHr0GRBauqHBwS6e4ZZ9U/edit?usp=sharing
Ill ask you once more, youre certain this information is important enough to wake the boss?
Pausing mid-drink, Jorani choked down his mouthful jerky and flatbread in his haste to answer. Sure as sure Mister Rustram, he croak...
2018-04-21 15:55:50 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yaagL59Rbv5U9vxoMMeZt7x8qa2cfOLI56s-AgziwKg/edit?usp=sharing
Ill ask you one more time: youre certain your information is important enough to wake the boss?
Pausing mid-drink, Jorani swallowed his jerky and flatbread to answer. Sure as sure Mister Rustram, he croaked, regretting his hasty...
2018-04-19 20:19:57 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G3t2RRapnpsHbUQ4AZOId1ZiLEnfH5rSAJNU_asYc6Q/edit?usp=sharing
Theres a point when unmitigated self-loathing gets so intense, you dont even feel like killing yourself anymore. You hate yourself so much, you think death would be too easy, so you want to suffer, need to suffer, because you deserve it. Its a ...
2018-04-17 20:01:07 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/176K0o_18RQlNWHaZyOGMmJ3DcWpLIp3WwojrUaDTjoA/edit?usp=sharing
What do you wish to know?
Faltering at the monks question, Baledagh took his time to think things through. He couldnt come right out and ask about transmigrated souls which possessed knowledge of other worlds, or multiple souls dwelling in on...
2018-04-15 19:22:55 +0000 UTC
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bTwmWWXX_BCUSd8s_MVQJok4mZcr6027704YaQxo5GM/edit?usp=sharing
While coasting back to shore in Ping Pings grasp, Baledaghs celebratory mood came to an abrupt end as he noticed Mei Lin and Sumila waiting in ambush. With Li Song, the wildcats, and a horde of bunnies hopping about as reinforcements, Baledag...
2018-04-12 20:17:06 +0000 UTC
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Written, but unedited. Not even spellchecked.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ubvm6-XtXNOofNvPyxCw5OAOmdgjq6wOHYYD2RL9Oa8/edit?usp=sharing
With a long sigh of relief, Baledagh hugged Banjo close and thanked the Mother for her mercy. Sumilas powerful stomps fading into the distance were like music to his ears, fr...
2018-04-10 19:57:12 +0000 UTC
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Has a proper ending, touched up the flow, and changed a bit in the middle. Rain/Bdawg makes an appearance.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kM8isqJRoSy9TYh4dQDPbVqO79jdhdiVFRXIbvHky8M/edit?usp=sharing
Letting loose with a piteous moan, Mila prayed for a merciful end to this inhuman suffering. Cursing the twisted mind which de...
2018-04-09 19:02:03 +0000 UTC
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This chapter isn't edited and the conclusion isn't written, mostly because I hated what I had and deleted it. There's still a bit more to cover in the ch, but here's what I got so far.
Enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kBvbXinLU9rM6IY7i5iCkXdW5BjNZuCkDafDYHL4X8U/edit?usp=sharing
Letting loose with a pi...
2018-04-08 19:55:38 +0000 UTC
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Hey, I made a pretty big change to the back third of this chapter, in particular with how Song views life. Much less depressing and more in line with how she's developed. Also, since most ppl want it all posted on Patreon, I'll do that here, but I'll still leave the link to gdrive anyways.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1isEsv49ZhtI2fALJJo-Q...
2018-04-07 23:12:53 +0000 UTC
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Which format do you guys prefer for advance chs?
2018-04-06 00:27:23 +0000 UTC
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Super unedited version, feeling too tired to do that atm.
Also, not entirely sold on how this chapter went. Might make big changes. Dunno yet. We'll see after I sleep on it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV87y6O2eaYR2MNyWqHze5eeiGFN8POjEtFhI3d_NUE/edit?usp=sharing
2018-04-06 00:26:07 +0000 UTC
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So over Easter, I put a bit of extra time into writing and got a ch ahead. Since I also hit 100 patrons recently, I decided to release it here for everyone as a thank you for your support.
As this is just a test, please don't mention this to anyone on discord or in comments anywhere. I don't know if this will be permanent, i.e always 1 ch or more ahead on Patreon, because I don't know if I can keep it up. I figured i have the ch, so might as well let you guys get a looksie.
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2018-04-03 20:01:14 +0000 UTC
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We now have a Savage Divinity Discord Channel! I'm in there every now and then, so drop by for a chat or to ask questions, or just hang out. All Patrons get a Warrant Officer role on the channel, which means you can upload pictures and files, use emoticons from other Discord Channels, and post reactions.
Here is the Discord link.
https://discord.gg/55M9bvb
To claim the Discord roles, you...
2017-09-30 18:12:27 +0000 UTC
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First off, all of Rain's gear has already been chosen and named. Sorry.
The cast list has listings of the weapons, with a very basic description and who wields them, or if you have a weapon in mind, I can give it to one of the characters who has yet to reveal theirs.
You can also name a Form, or city, or place, or whatever. Email me at ruffwriter@outlook....
2016-08-02 15:13:17 +0000 UTC
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Please don't share with other people, or I will have to resort to adding each Patron individually. Honor system d^^b
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B7vJZLjMunEANnZ3OGJDcDVPeE0&usp=sharing
2016-05-18 19:39:46 +0000 UTC
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If you would like to be mentioned in the chapter posts, please email me at ruffwriter@outlook.com with the name you'd like me to use, or post it here.
2016-05-15 02:31:30 +0000 UTC
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