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Public Release 0.1625.1: New Villain Storyline Extension

Hello, everyone!

Over the past month I had a bit of a think about what to do for what would be the last public update of the year. I wanted to deviate a bit from my routine of writing alternate endings for stories that are mostly already written and try a thing folks weren't quite expecting, give you something more to look forward to heading into the new year. So I made the somewhat bold decision to explore a previously greyed-out choice that occurs near the beginning of our story, soon...

Early Access 0.1625.1: New Villain Storyline Continuation

Hey, cakes!

For this update I've written the script for the first two scenes of the Villain storyline's "stick around" route that I outlined in the previous release and added the new CG to go with it. There's a lot more to come from this, but I think we're off to a decent start ^^

I'll naturally be exploring the possibilities this new route opens up in December's round of updates. I have an idea or two that I'm confident you folks will find interesting...

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Art Preview: New Villain Storyline CG

Hi, cakes!

I really haven't done many of these art preview posts this year, so have a gander at this latest one I'm getting done ^^

Spoilers for the latest storyline of the Villain route, which was outlined in the earlier release this month. In this scene, student council president Akiko pulls Kyou away to discuss his recent behaviour after he's caught loitering in school after class and accused of being a stalker. After some back and forth, a somewhat pissed-off Kyo...

Early Access 0.1624.0: Villain Storyline Extension

Hello, cakes!

I've had a bit of a think about what to do for this next update. As we're approaching the end of yet another year I wanted to deviate a bit from my routine of writing alternate endings for stories that are mostly already written. This time I wanted to do something folks weren't quite expecting, give you something more to look forward to heading into the new year. So I made the somewhat bold decision to explore a previously greyed-out choice that occurs near the begi...

Lanzamiento público 0.1623.1: Nuevo sendero para la línea Crédula de Hiroko

¡Hola a todos!

En esta nueva versión queda completado el nuevo sendero de una de las historias de Hiroko. Específicamente en la que Kyou se convence de que sigue sus indicaciones asistidas por la linterna porque es crédula y toma esa creencia a varios extremos con ella. La bosquejé el mes pasado, pero ahora está completamente escrita con algunos bocetos del CG que ilustra su escena más memorable.

Para llegar al nuevo sendero, elijan las siguientes decisiones a...

Public Release 0.1623.1: New Hiroko Gullible Story Path

Hello, everyone!

This latest version sees the completion of a new story path on one of Hiroko's storylines. Specifically the one where Kyou convinces himself that she's following his penlight-assisted suggestions because she's gullible and takes that belief to varying extremes with her. I outlined it last month, but now there's a fully-written script some sketches of the CG that depicts its most memorable scene.

To get to the new path, make the following choices from...

Early Access 0.1623.1: Hiroko Gullible Storyline Completion!

Happy Halloween!

For this update I managed to write the conclusion to the new Hiroko Gullible story path, following on directly from where we left off from before. It's been another race to get this done in time, and there's definitely some quality issues towards the end so I'll want to read it over again and make some edits... but we DO have an ending ^^

The planned CG addition will once again have to wait a little longer, I'm afraid. It's gonna be a big one though,...

Early Access 0.1622.0: Hiroko Gullible Storyline Update

Hi. cakes!

So sorry it took so long to get an update out, but I hope there's something in this to excite you and make it worth the wait~

First off, this release includes the finished version of the CG set from the Robot storyline in last month's update, and it turned out as pretty as you'd expect. But probably more importantly, I made some progress in the new sub-path of Hiroko's Gullible storyline that I outlined before.!To read it, make the following choices from t...

Lanzamiento público 0.1621.2: ¡Nuevo final para la línea Villana de Robot!

¡¿Qué hay, gente?!

¡Con la actualización de este mes se completa la sub-ruta más reciente de la línea Robot! Una vez más, para aquellos que no recuerden cómo llegar a este sendero, hagan las siguientes decisiones a partir del comienzo: Usar la pluma linterna, convencerla de que necesita un novio, irme a casa, ignorarla, hacerla creer que es mi robot, recordarle quién es el jefe y convertirla en mi novia.

¡Espero que (¿)disfruten(?) el resultado! También ...

Public Release 0.1621.2: New Villainous Robot Storyline Ending!

Hiya, folks!

This month's update completes the script for the latest sub path of the Robot storyline! Once again for those who don't recall how to get to this path, make the following choices from the beginning: Use the penlight, convince her she needs a boyfriend, head home, ignore her, make her think she's my robot, remind her who's boss and have her become my girlfriend.

I hope you enjoy(?) how it plays out! I also had a CG set planned for the ending, but it could...

Early Access 0.1621.2: New Villainous Robot Storyline Ending!

Heya, cakes!

Sorry for another late update. I wasn't expecting to have that much trouble given the outline I wrote last time seemed relatively straightforward, but I've yet again struggled to get a decent flow going for writing and things really dragged out. But anyway, the latest sub path for the Robot storyline is now functionally complete so I'm happy to mark this off as done and move onto something else. I hope you folks are happy(ish) with the way it's turned out~

Lanzamiento público 0.1620.1: Nuevo final para la línea Robot (bosquejo)

¡Hola a todos!

El último mes he estado trabajando en terminar la historia que comencé en el lanzamiento anterior, que toma lugar en la línea Robot donde Kyou convence a Nozomi de que sea su novia. Crear un final para para este nuevo sendero en la ruta Robot ha sido... desafiante, pero tras unas cuantas lluvias de ideas, logré tener la suficientes para escribir la mayoría de las escenas y crear un rápido bosquejo de cómo creo que debería ir el final. Definitivamente toma ...

Public Release 0.1620.1: New Robot Storyline Ending (Outline)

Hello, everyone!

This past month has seen me working to finish the new story path I began in the previous release, taking place during the Robot storyline where Kyou convinces Nozomi to become his girlfriend. Working out an ending to this latest story path on the Robot route has been... challenging, but after a bit of brainstorming I did have enough thoughts on it to write most of the scenes and draft out a quick outline for how I think the ending should go. It definitely takes a...

Early Access 0.1620.1: New Villainous Robot Storyline Ending!

Hiya, cakes! It's the end of the month and I have another update for you~

Working out an ending to this latest story path on the Robot route has been... challenging, but after a bit of brainstorming I did have enough thoughts on it to draft out a quick outline for how I think it should go. It definitely takes a different direction to the original path, which is what I was most concerned about going into this, so I hope you... enjoy it? I don't know if that's the right word; you'l...

Early Access 0.1619.0: Villainous Robot Storyline Continuation

Hi, cakes!

Here's a little work-in-progress update for the new sub path I've been writing for the Robot storyline. A couple more scenes have been added, included amongst some script I recycled from the original path. Oh, and I made some edits to the previously-written script for the last update in response to some feedback I had. And the first CG for this path has also been included, as promised~

In case you don't recall how to get to this new path, make the following choic...

Art Preview: New Robot Storyline Sketch

Heya, cakes!

I wanted to get a couple of CGs done for the new story path I'm writing for the Villainous Robot storyline, so spoilers below if you haven't read it yet.

This one's for the scene where Nozomi, fresh from being converted to the benefits of being Kyou's girlfriend, rushes home from school to find Kyou at his home and, after a breathy love confession, embraces and kisses him right by his front door!...

Lanzamiento público 0.1618.1: Adiciones a la línea de Sayori Alter y la línea Villana de Robot

¡Hola a todos!

Para esta actualización terminé el último pedacito que me hacía falta para completar el sendero de Sayori Alter del mes pasado. También comencé a escribir una de las nuevas sub-rutas de la línea Villana de Robot en la que Kyou, por métodos viles, convence a Nozomi de volverse su novia. Sigue siendo un trabajo en proceso, pero las bases han sido puestas con algunas escenas escritas.

En cuanto al arte respecta, busqué reemplazar varias escenas que usan los s...

Public Release 0.1618.1: Sayori Alter & Villainous Robot Storyline Additions

Hello, everyone!

For this release I've put together the last little bit of script I needed to complete the Sayori Alter path from last month. I also began writing one of the a new sub-path from the Villainous Robot storyline where Kyou, through nefarious means, convinces Nozomi to become his girlfriend. It's still very much a work in progress, but the initial groundwork has been laid out with a few scenes written.

On the art front, I sought to replace a number of sce...

Early Access 0.1618.1: Villainous Robot Storyline Additions

Hiya, cakes!

For my next undertaking on the slowly decreasing list of unwritten sub-paths, I committed to writing one from the Villainous Robot storyline where Kyou, through nefarious means, convinces Nozomi to become his girlfriend. It's still very much a work in progress, but the initial groundwork has been laid out with a few scenes written.

That's all for this month! In the next, I'm wanting to get one or two CGs done for the new sub-path while I work out the res...

Early Access 0.1617.0: New Sayori Alter Storyline Ending & CG Additions

Hi, cakes!

For this release I've put together the last little bit of script I needed to complete the Sayori Alter path from last month. With that checked off the to-do list I'm free to pick another unwritten path to tackle and hope to make a decent start on it over the next week or so~

On the art front, I sought to replace a number of scenes that use the standard character sprites with CG art. The climactic scene during the Delusion storyline had its CG extended slig...

Lanzamiento Público 0.1616.1: Expansión de la línea de Sayori Alter

¡Hola a rodos!

Pues, para este mes, conseguí (casi) completar uno de los senderos restantes de la historia original de Sayori Alter donde Kyou cede a la tentación cerca del final, e incluí un nuevo CG para la parte divertida de este sendero. Para llegar a lo nuevo, comiencen la ruta de Sayori Alter y asegúrense de que salga de la casa de Kyou siendo Sayori, y luego acepten la oferta de Nozomi de ayudar cuando la haga.

Para el próximo mes, pretendo terminar de e...

Public Release 0.1616.1: Sayori Alter Storyline Expansion

Hey, everyone!

So for this month I managed to (almost) complete one of the remaining story paths on Sayori's original Alter storyline, where Kyou gives in to temptation towards the end, and included a new CG for the fun part of this path. To get to the new writing, begin Sayori's Alter storyline and make sure she leaves Kyou's house as Sayori, and then accept Nozomi's offer of help when she makes it.

For next month, I intend to finish writing the ending here, and then start work o...

Early Access 0.1616.1: Sayori Alter Storyline Expansion

Hiya, cakes!

So for this month I attempted to (almost) complete one of the remaining story paths on Sayori's original Alter storyline, where Kyou gives in to temptation towards the end. It's been another frustrating time, as if you couldn't tell by the lack of updates this month, but I managed to cobble something together, along with a new CG for the fun part of this path. Again, I'm not happy with it and I'll need to finish it for the next update but it is what it is. See how feel abou...

Lanzamiento público 0.1615.1: Expansión a la línea del Delirio

¡Hola a todos!

Para esta actualización, continué escribiendo lo que comencé el mes pasado, así que tenemos una especie de final para la nueva rama de la línea del Delirio. No estoy del todo satisfecha con ella, y puede que añada una breve escena de epílogo después, pero servirá por ahora mientras enfoco mi atención a otro lado.

También tenemos un nuevo CG para la línea del Agente Durmiente, el cual aparece durante la escena climática. Pueden encontrarlo tomando el se...

Public Release 0.1615.1: Delusion Storyline Expansion

Hi, everyone!

For this update I continued the writing I began last month, so we now have an ending of sorts to the new branch path of the Delusion storyline. I'm not totally satisfied with it and I may add a short epilogue scene later on, but it'll do for now while I turn my focus elsewhere.

We also have a new CG set for the Sleeper Agent storyline, which appears during the climactic scene. You can get there by taking the villainous path at the start, choosing "turn her into my un...

Early Access 0.1615.1: Delusion Storyline Expansion

Heeeey cakes...

So I hit another block trying to wrap up the new path of the Delusion storyline and missed my deadline again. Sigh. It's done in the sense that there is an ending now, but I'm far from satisfied with my output. Again. I may add a short epilogue scene later on, but I think for my own sanity I'd better move on to something else.

At least the new CG set I had made for the Sleeper Agent storyline turned out lovely! I got a lot of use out of it illustratin...

Lanzamiento público 0.1614.1: Expansión a la línea del Delirio

¡Hola a todos!

Para la actualización de este mes decidí intentar escribir uno de los caminos pendientes más antiguos del juego. La parte en la que Kyou comienza a dudar si lo que está haciendo está bien en la primera historia de Penlight: Delirio.

No he volteado mucho a ver mi viejo trabajo, por lo que esto fue una experiencia interesante. Creo que lo que hay en su mayoría se sostiene bien, aunque hay un poco de esa sensación rara típica de versiones tempranas en la forma...

Public Release 0.1614.1: Delusion Storyline Expansion

Hi, everyone!

For this month's release I had a crack at writing one of the oldest unwritten story paths in the game. The part where Kyou has second thoughts about what he's doing right at the end of Penlight's very first storyline: Delusion.

I haven't really looked back at my old work all that much, so this was an interesting experience. I think what's there mostly holds up pretty well, although there's a fair amount of early installment weirdness with how the characters express t...

Art Preview: Sleeper Agent Struggle Scene

Hey, cakes!

The next CG I'm having worked on takes us back to one of the old villainous storylines, and is one I've wanted to have done for quite some time but never got around to speccing. Anyway, spoilers ahead for the Villainous Sleeper Agent storyline if you never go around to playing that yet.

So in this scene, Kyou has been wrestled to the floor of his house by Nozomi and her friends after ambushing him. The overconfident wannabe mastermind had though...

Early Access 0.1614.1: Delusion Storyline Expansion

Hey, cakes ^^;

Sorry for the lack of communication this month. Writing's still hard but I really didn't expect it to take this long to get an update out...

Anyway, this time I ended up having a crack at writing one of the oldest unwritten story paths in the game. The part where Kyou has second thoughts about what he's doing right at the end of Penlight's very first storyline: Delusion.

I haven't really looked back at my old work all that much, so this was an interesting expe...