Pulse 506 WIP 2
I guess Annie finds a lot of broken robot animals and another door.
2023-03-24 11:27:25 +0000 UTC View Post
I guess Annie finds a lot of broken robot animals and another door.
2023-03-24 11:27:25 +0000 UTC View Post
I think I just need to write the dialog (with as many jokes as possible) and letter it.
2023-03-24 09:49:06 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie led the robot to smash through the wall. On the other side, she finds the remains of lots of broken robot animals. She knocks the robot away, and then Lucy controlling the robot leads Annie to a door-- but the robot smashes her leg.
There's probably a debates between Annie and the bad guy about their robot theories? He prefers survival of the fittest, and she treats them like her creations.
2023-03-22 10:36:13 +0000 UTC View Post
Three pages left to the chapter. I wonder if I should have included sound effects on panels 2 and 7?
2023-03-19 11:26:57 +0000 UTC View Post
Yuffie goes out and uses the materia to enhance the newscaster shown before on live TV.
2023-03-16 09:38:38 +0000 UTC View Post
The drones give Annie a chance to think and she tricks the robot to smash through a wall.
2023-03-16 09:28:11 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, so the drones fly down through the broken skylight, Lucy is controlling them. She has them use their lights to help Annie see the structure of the room. She taunts the robot to smash through a wall.
2023-03-14 11:08:32 +0000 UTC View Post
Finally, page 7-- or 33 depending on how you count it.
2023-03-14 09:29:17 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I wanted kind of a big attack from the robot before the story sort of continues. That Annie should face it in combat before filling in more of the story.
2023-03-10 11:48:43 +0000 UTC View Post
An edited version of the Lucy in a towel picture.
2023-03-07 12:42:34 +0000 UTC View Post
I don't know. I think it came out okay, but I wonder if I should have gone in another direction, or didn't go far enough?
2023-03-05 08:35:03 +0000 UTC View Post
If you notice, Annie's strategy with the robot animal is used on her. She's blinded and then a tracking device is attached to her. It is only attached to her cloak, but something else would have triggered her shields and it could have bounced away-- or revealed she's wearing a metal suit.
2023-03-02 12:58:21 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I think this just needs color and lettering.
2023-03-01 13:05:39 +0000 UTC View Post
Some is inked, but still a lot to do.
2023-02-28 12:21:20 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie ends up in a dark room, and starts being questioned. The same tactic is used on her as she used before- blinded by light, and then hit with a tracker. Then the robot animal attacks, but it's way larger than before. She uses the thruster on her back to heat it up.
2023-02-28 12:15:09 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie's alter ego here doesn't have a name yet. I think she wanted to be called "The Unknown", but I think the villain here will call her "The Patchwork Girl".
I'm dragging out showing Charlotte's costume just to surprise people with it. I considered sexy, I considered if there was something that made some kind of sense from a story point of view, I considered something cool... And decided on something bizarre. I think she'd really focus on the idea that she shouldn't ...
2023-02-25 11:02:17 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I think this is done, it just needs me to finish the dialog. BUT, I've run out of time and won't be able to work on it again until after midnight- so here's what I've got so far.
Annie is talking over a communicator with Lucy, wondering where's Charlotte. Why is she taking so long? Lucy says she can't reach Charlotte, but she hears noises. Then the signal to the tracker goes out, and Annie jumps into action.
Obviously Charlotte has such a curious cost...
2023-02-24 13:11:43 +0000 UTC View Post
There's a few little things to fix, but it's almost ready for color.
2023-02-23 12:36:52 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie is waiting in disguise for Charlotte to arrive, but trying to figure out what's taking her. Lucy comments that she can't get any response, but she keeps hearing moving and breathing, maybe her communicator is broken.
Then the signal goes out on the tracker- so Annie acts.
I need to add in the parts of her suit that was damaged. I also need to add the two working drones somewhere maybe.
I had considered putting her in her normal clothes in panel two, and the...
2023-02-22 11:40:42 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm trying to work out the next few pages-
Page 7-
This one has been mostly drawn for a while. I just needed to draw the one panel, color it, and finish the dialog.
Rikku decides she's done trying to be good, and she's going to go berserk like Yuffie to avoid Tifa finding out they were lying. BUT she meets some people and can't go along with it.
Page 8-
Rikku must have been made club president. Yuffie tells Rikk...
2023-02-20 13:11:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie's bust seemed way too small in panel three, so I bumped it up since the last WIP.
2023-02-18 12:50:12 +0000 UTC View Post
Almost done, just need to finish the dialog and letter it.
2023-02-17 13:33:40 +0000 UTC View Post
Just based on the story, they have to get help from Charlotte, not Tabitha. Because Charlotte appeared at the beginning of this story, and Tabitha hasn't appeared in the story at all yet. Also it'll be fun to see what Charlotte chooses as a secret costume.
2023-02-15 11:48:24 +0000 UTC View Post
I figure this hasn't happened -yet-. Something for a future event.
2023-02-14 12:22:20 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I thought that Annie would be hurt and wouldn't be able to keep things from her roommate. She also needs Lucy to reason with her and prevent her from doing something stupid. Not that Annie won't go after the robot, but she needs to be reasonable.
2023-02-11 12:55:56 +0000 UTC View Post
Making progress with this. Only have a few days to finish it.
2023-02-09 13:04:04 +0000 UTC View Post