DeprivedArt

Pages 1 & 2 sketched with dialogue

I'm having some trouble setting up photoshop 2024 and I can't figure out why the pen preassure is not registering. It's fine for the page sketches but I'll have to figure it out before going beyond that...

I'll also do some sketches for the assistant's design then.

Page 1 rough sketch and full comic rough dialogue draft

The dialogue is pretty messy and probably has a bunch of spelling mistakes, sorry about that.

Magician design sketches

I think I like the left one. Right one is maybe too cartoony?

Third poll to see if some votes would change depending on the other poll's result

Ok so the first poll's result is pretty clear. The assistant will be an audience member.

So I just wanted to check if, knowing this, the second poll will get the same result.  Because if the magician doesn't get locked it could be a slightly more interesting concept where they do a raffle in this show and the unlucky winner has to be the entertainment for the rest of the audience.

And if the magician gets locked, it might fit better if the assistant is voluntary too. (So I'll...

Magician poll

I'll start working on the poll winner soon (a comic adaptation of this caption: https://twitter.com/meri_kinkeyes/status/1717779942707273785?s=46&t=DS6vv-fQPGCdptioMFYtkw ).

I was thinking about some slight changes to the dynamic in the caption and wanted you input.

Regarding the magician:

Magician's assistant poll

I'll start working on the poll winner soon (a comic adaptation of this caption: https://twitter.com/meri_kinkeyes/status/1717779942707273785?s=46&t=DS6vv-fQPGCdptioMFYtkw ).

I was thinking about some slight changes to the dynamic in the caption and wanted you input.

Regarding the assistant:

5k twitter followers box opening

I'll post it on twitter in two or three days.

I'll update the first panel then (so it says the correct amount of followers and days).

EDIT: Updated images

Page 2 colored

Page 1 colored

Mandatory "I might change the colors".

Page 3 ink

Suggestions for the next box

Do you have any suggestions for the options that will be in the next twitter poll to decide the content of the next box?

It will probably open at 7k this time. I wanna have some room to do a non box opening comic about her.

One of the options will be -3k to her unlock as always ( unless you can think of another more fun option that would help her out). And I'm thinking I'll include last poll's second most popular option (chastity bra and bondage mittens).

Page 2 ink

I think I'll leave her eyes blank like that, I like how it looks.

+ a tweak to the first panel in page 1, trying to make it look less like she's fucking the box and more like she's shaking it.

I'm also still trying to come up with a better acronym for the robot's name (C.A.S.S: continuous ass stretching system). I'd like to use "progressive" or "gradual" instead of "continuous" but I can't  find one that sounds like a name. Maybe I should just give up on trying to have it als...

Page 1 ink

5k box opening sketch

Dialogue will probably get changed a little. And I'm not 100% sure about the pose on the last page.

Robot nurse

Pretty sure this is the final design.

I'm sketching the comic right now.

A lil better? Just the face

First robot lady design sketch

In case you don't remember, the next box opening is supposed to be about a robot lady stretching the girl's ass with a strap on.

I'm already pretty happy with this design but I might do some more.

For her name, I was thinking C.A.S.S (continuous anal stretching system), let me know if you can think of some other more clever acronym.

Also, maybe the dildo is still a bit too big for lvl 1 haha.

Next comic poll (part 2)

Since the winner in the previous poll had less than 50% of votes, here's the second poll with only the two top results.

Linking the option 2 caption again for convenience: https://twitter.com/meri_kinkeyes/status/1717779942707273785?s=46&t=DS6vv-fQPGCdptioMFYtkw

I'll let the poll run for a few days and then start working on the winner!

Robin's Fantasy

First comic featuring Robin and Eileen. 10 pages long.

Page 10 done!

There's not much to comment on this one. The pose you guys chose was better for visual impact with the perspective thing, so good choice there!

Her thought bubble covers the knocking sounds a bit because she's not fully paying attention to them.

Warmer colors and big panel for the intense moment and cool colors for the bottom one, where she's cooled down.

Not sure if the ending feels a bit sudden but i kinda wanna move on to the next thing.

And yea, I'll start a second...

Page 10 progress

As always, colors are not deffinitive.

Page 10 ink

Page 10 sketch

Final page!

EDIT: Btw I'll edit page 8 so she's saying "WHAT!?" out loud instead of thinking it so them knocking to check on her makes sense.

Next comic poll

Here are 3 comic ideas I'd like to do. I'll probably start working on it right after I'm done with the last page of the current one (if I don't reach 5k twitter followers and have to do the box opening).

I included the second most popular option from the last poll. And just so you know, if I the sum of the two loser options' percentage is greater than the winner option's percentage, I will do a second poll with just the two most voted options. I think the result will be more representat...

Quick poll for Robin's pose in page 10

Updated page 6

Changed dialogue, added the coffee shop logo and made her waist/hip a tiny bit wider in the bottom panel.

Updated page 5

Changed dialogue and the two top faces i little bit.

New middle tier

Since someone asked for it, I added a tier for people who want access to polls but don't want to see work in progress pics.

Tier 2 is now Tier 3.

Hey btw

Patreon sent me an email telling me they added a live chat to the app.

I'm not sure if I have to enable it from the app. Are you guys interested in that? Is it working right now for those who have the app? Should I download it?

EDIT: I'll install the app and look into setting it up, since there's at least 2 people interested.

Updated page 4

Text and top right face a little bit.

I would have rather have the pic Eileen is sending be in the previous position since all the images being crammed at the top of the page looks kinda bad, but I wasn't able to make it work :/

I might change the text again, I'm not sure about anything.