Mack Zack

July Story - Metroid: The Biggest Bounty (Chapter 3)

Samus awoke with a startle. She had no idea what time it was or how long she had passed out for. She was still naked on the floor of the stockade, holding onto the mysterious metroid, which had actually fallen asleep embracing her.

She slowly sat up and put aside its tentacles.

She was vaguely hungover, which told her that she might have slept overnight.

Despite that, she felt great. Amazing even! And…happy?

She felt blissfully content, with a dumb vacant grin on her...

July Story - Metroid: The Biggest Bounty (Chapter 2)

Samus rarely had time alone. When she did, a little bit of an existential crisis hit her. She spent a majority of her life facing off space pirates and rival bounty hunters and making a name of herself across the galaxy. When was the last time she sat and simply lived? She seldom used her apartment on Earth. She wouldn’t be surprised if it had been sold already.

The trip back to the client’s coordinates was still a week away. Samus surmised it must be an undisclosed space station, b...

July Story - Metroid: The Biggest Bounty (Chapter 1)

Samus Aran was taking a break from Federation jobs. She wanted to go around taking requests from the everyday folk. Smugglers, scientists, quarreling couples, corporate CEOs, and everything else in between. She almost forgot what it was like to interact with civilians. It was nice not butting heads with Federation regulations.

While drifting in hyperspace, looking for a good time, she received a call. She put them on hold while she went to change into her armor. It was always better tha...

June Story - Dagashi Kashi: Sugar-Free Love (Chapter 7, Final)

Kokonotsu awoke with such a dumb smile on his face. Everything felt different that morning. He didn’t feel tired or worn or bothered by anything. He completely forgot about his lot in life and had only one person on his mind – Hotaru Shidare. He slept and slept and hadn’t a care in the world. When he finally did get up to start the day, he set his mind on what he and Hotaru would do together.

As he made himself some coffee in the kitchen, Pops came downstairs and slapped him on th...

June Story - Dagashi Kashi: Sugar-Free Love (Chapter 6)

“Where are we going?” Kokonotsu asked.

Hotaru didn’t respond. She kept driving. For someone with such a loud personality, her gray sedan was rather subdued. Kokonotsu looked around the seats. It was bare and still had that “new car smell”.

“Funny seeing you drive,” he said. “We were just barely the driving age last time we saw each other.”

They had been driving for some time now, around twenty minutes. Hotaru drove down rural roads, away from most neighborh...

June Story - Dagashi Kashi: Sugar-Free Love (Chapter 5)

Once Pops left, Kokonotsu closed the front door and went to his office. The pages of his manga were there as he last left them. He picked them up and thought over the ending to his next scene. Once the idea hit, he drew so fluidly that he lost track of time. He remembered a time when Pops told him that the women in his manga were too idealistic. Kokonotsu could never get past a page without getting frustrated about how they looked.

But ever since he met Hotaru Shidare so long ago…

Dagashi Kashi story updated

I rewrote stuff, especially how chapter 4 ended. It didn't sit well with me how that chapter ended, so I changed it entirely. I highly suggest going back and rereading everything, if not all then just chapter 4. I will be posting the rest now.

I don't know if any of you are Dagashi Kashi fans. I always had this little story in the back of my mind. It's a little known anime except for the main girl Hotaru, whose design has floated around in NSFW art. It wasn't very good tbh from what I ...

Updates

Taking a hot minute. I decided to rewrite something for the Dagashi Kashi story. I'm also juggling some other work. Might not see something posted until next Monday. But hopefully by then the story will finally be finished. 

Note about the DA version of some stories

I've been making public the college story about the rugby girls on my DA. I titled it "College Gas 101". You may or may not have already noticed that some minor details changed. The character Julie is now Aubrey, and her appearance is different. This is because I have in the back of my mind another college-centric story for the future with a character too similar to Julia, so I don't want to mix the two up. I also gave the university a more punny name, but I still kind of think it's dumb. I m...

June Story - Dagashi Kashi: Sugar-Free Love (Chapter 4)

Kokonotsu met up with Hotaru at a small local ramen house, not too far away from his house. He waited outside and kept checking his phone. His palms sweated and his stomach was in knots. He got there early because why wouldn’t he? He wanted her to know that he wasn’t lazy in one bit. He changed into clothes that he hardly wore – a nice pair of jeans with a button-down shirt. He combed his hair. There was nothing much he could do about his haggard eyes. His habits of staying up late to w...

June Story - Dagashi Kashi: Sugar-Free Love (Chapter 3)

Kokonotsu couldn’t sleep that night. He was a mixed bag of fright and excitement. His life seemed alive again knowing Hotaru was in town. At the same time, he quivered with nervousness at ruining their friendship. He stayed up until almost 4:00 looking at old photos of them together with their friends. Those days seemed so far away.

“Oh man,” he murmured. “Oh man, oh man, oh man…”

He wondered if Tō had told her everything by now. Hotaru probably hated him now. Worse, ...

June Story - Dagashi Kashi: Sugar-Free Love (Chapter 2)

After Hotaru Shidare fell into his office, she rambled on about proper customer service and how Kokonotsu should always allow at least one late customer into the store. None of what she said stuck to his head, because he remained on the floor dumbfounded by her sudden appearance as she stood up.

Like Kokonotsu, she had matured. She was barely taller than him this time. She still had the same fashion sense with her skirt and black stockings, which made Kokonotsu blush the more he kept gl...

June Story - Dagashi Kashi: Sugar-Free Love (Chapter 1)

Kokonotsu sighed heavily once the last customer of the day left. He put up the “CLOSED” sign and admired the empty shelves in the store. This year’s Valentine’s Day had been busier than usual. Ever since Kokonotsu managed to revitalize and reinvent the store, all sales have gone up over the years. He had actually made Pops proud and made a ton of cash while doing so.

A last-minute stray customer knocked on the door. Kokonotsu jumped out of view before whoever it was could see hi...

Further plans for Miami MILF

The story is done for now, but not the entire story.

As I was wrapping it up, I had in mind to write a full-fledged erotic/fetish novel. I thought about how Miami MILF was really the middle of the story. There was a whole other dimension I wanted to add to it, a beginning and an end.

I would even revisit The School Counselor to make that more like a novel too. These two stories would go hand-in-hand really.

I'll get to that later though, but I j...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 10 - Final)

Joan was quiet after the Ferris wheel. When I asked if she wanted to eat or drink something, she was lost in thought and temporarily blanked out on recommendations of where to go. We stopped by a bar that caught my eye – Lola Bar. The aesthetic was like something from the 80’s, with a neon sign and flamboyant jungle decorations. Joan nodded in approval. They also offered hookah, although Joan wanted to just drink. I ordered some chicken wings for us anyway.

We sat outside by the har...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 9)

We all have an itch to scratch. People either can’t figure out what that itch is, or they get in trouble in their relationships cheating, but I think the big question is, “Was it an itch to scratch or something more?” For me, it was both. I spent so much time trying to find someone who was that balance of emotional and sexual connection. Usually, it was one or the other. Someone was too sexual and not very emotional, or even afraid of emotions. Another person was all about emotions but ...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 8)

We agreed to go to the beach that day. She needed some time to walk Stella, get dressed, and all around get ready for the day. I went back to my AirBnB to change clothes. I offered to pick her up, that way it made me feel like it was a date. I never got to pick up a date before in my car. I was using a rental though, so the dream was only half-fulfilled.

I waited for her at the curb and we smiled at each other when she stepped out. Christ almighty, she was divine no matter where she wen...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 7)

It was nearly 3AM by the time we stepped out of the club. After about five more drinks and hours of dancing, Joan was completely wrecked and unable to walk on her own. I had to pry her away from the arms of some big burly man who kept laughing at her advances. He patted me on the shoulder and said, “You’ve got quite a load of trouble on your hands.”

“Heh. Yeah.”

When she was loaded with alcohol, her inner succubus broke free. While we were dancing, she mingled with other...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 6)

The rest of our venture was nothing short of divine. I relaxed, read my book, and enjoyed being with Joan. She read from a Kindle for a couple hours and continued to casually belch in front of me. They ranged anywhere from quiet puffs to grotesque roars.

After one of the bigger ones, Joan opened a bag of chips and said to me, “My family would hate it when I burped at the table.”

“Yeah?”

She cackled. “I just always did it. I think it’s more gross to hold it in. If...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 5)

I actually didn’t listen to music on the drive up to West Palm Beach. I was so warped into my thoughts that I didn’t need music to be occupied.

The assisted living facility look like a resort, much more than any other assisted living facility in New Jersey. It was really weird walking down squeaky-clean tile floors and passing by lavish fountains. I got to walk through the courtyard and murmured, “Damn. This is pretty nice.”

A nurse was already waiting for me at the front ...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 4)

The Miami sun is nice until it bears down on you relentlessly in the morning. The guest room curtains weren’t that great, so once I woke up around 7 AM I couldn’t go back to sleep. I crept into the apartment with my bare feet. Stella slept with Joan so there was no chance of her barking or making noise from me waking up. I sat idle for a while, looking at my phone and staring off at the clear blue morning with boats sailing in the backdrop.

Joan stirred. I heard her get up and go to...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 3)

I drove us out of Miami International Airport and down the local highways. Massive fancy apartments loomed to our left, and downtown Miami beamed to our right in the distance as I drove us over a river. A wave of nostalgia swept me away, making me nearly miss a red light. I hadn’t seen these sights since I was a high school senior, before the family drama really went to shit.

Sunny Isles was only about ten minutes north of South Beach. The roads were surprisingly quiet. Joan directed ...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 2)

After I graduated high school, I did not see Joan for more than ten years. College was a bit of a mess but in the end, I found my calling being an archaeologist. I went on trips to the Badlands in South Dakota, L’Anse aux Meadows in New Foundland, and my proudest moment was being part of the team that uncovered new graves around Stonehenge. My passion for travel and discovery meant that it was difficult to keep a long-term relationship with someone.

Living with a fetish like mine does...

May Story - Miami MILF (Chapter 1)

Joan Braulio was my favorite teacher of all time. I don’t just mean it because of her looks. I first have to tell you about what she was like. She didn’t take any shit from any of the students, and being a teacher in an all-boys high school can be a challenge when you’re an attractive woman in your early thirties. All of us were horny and repressed Catholic school boys. But she took the role of being the only attractive woman in my all-boys high school with pride and swagger. She took c...

Lineup for the coming months

Hey everyone,

I'm gonna be doing things a little differently for the next few months. There will be no polls. Instead I will focus on a lineup of stories. The reason being is that I really need to play catchup, and these next few stories are already almost done from before I started my patreon. There are also other things in my life I'm trying to juggle, so writing these stories will be a piece of cake for me. May's story was a bit of a struggle since I was rewriting some of the plot.<...

Quick update

Still working on May's story. I'm probably on the last quarter of it. I'm trying something different with this one. I'll see how you'll like it (or not). It will be more literary than most, more about building the relationship between the narrator and the love interest. Burps will be the major focus, as the poll entry stated, but a few farts will be thrown in too. Can't write without throwing in a couple good farts!  I thought about writing this story as a slow burn so that the good stuf...

April 2022 Story - The Finger Curse (Chapter 9 - Final)

As they approached the castle that morning, Agnes was secretly worried about how she would break the spell. She wanted the witch to know she was confident in breaking it, but deep down she wracked her mind thinking about how to ask Lord Filmore to pull her finger. Surely, it would be simple being that they were engaged. That sealed the moment of true love, at least in Agnes’s eyes. But what if Lord Filmore did not pull her finger? He was as sophisticated as she was. Would he scoff? Laugh? I...

April 2022 Story - The Finger Curse (Chapter 8)

NOTE: I made a few edits that I should explain. Agnes's family name is still Norwich but the kingdom is now Dalria. I also edited the witch's spell again because of an idea I had involving semantics.

Penelope had no idea things would get so out of hand.

It was a rather mean thing to do at first, but Penelope could not help it. She considered it just a tiny guilty pleasure to trick Agnes into drinking her ale. Of course, Penelope had drank before. She was just smitten se...

April 2022 Story - The Finger Curse (Chapter 7)

Penelope was besides herself. While Agnes had gone off to continue planning her wedding, Penelope cleaned her room. But she was so distracted that she could not focus on doing anything properly. She forgot to tuck in the bedsheets and change the pillows. For the most part, she daydreamed by staring out the window.

Who knew that the most beautiful princess in the realm could break wind like that? Why did she play “pull my finger”? What was going on?

It took twenty whole minutes...

June 2022 Story Poll

I've had these two stories on my backburner for the longest time. It's really annoying. Force me to make a decision.

1. Dagashi Kashi: Sugar Free Love - set years after the last episode, Kokonotsu has established himself as an up-and-coming manga artist while also running his dad's shop, becoming the most successful candy shop in the prefecture. He also developed a fart fetish during college. Things didn't work out with Saya, who was grossed out by his...