mid month
Added 2021-08-20 19:47:03 +0000 UTCwip: https://www.amazon.co.uk/clouddrive/share/XqN1GUhCkFUTkHeLhSaXd7DI9Mhd3GHD6anFM0NYu1h
it's a bit fast paced at times, might go back and sort that if i have the time spare.
Comments
This is really good! The growth wasn't fast paced, which is the important thing. Just a few quick cuts after the TF starts. And when she crosses the room to get to Dash, the fade out fade in was a little fast there, you could hold on Dash's reaction face for a second more before the fade, perhaps. But again, it's not so important so long as the growth itself isn't rushed!
Luvtail
2021-08-25 09:23:54 +0000 UTCvery nice one, I'M really excited for it <3 But yes, a bit of more time for some scenes won't hurt at all <3
Tai Kai
2021-08-21 00:19:34 +0000 UTCLooks good so far. Classic eat and swell with a kiss transfer to cause other character to become juice filled. Should be good once finished.
RandomDudeGamer
2021-08-20 19:49:25 +0000 UTC
