The Boogies - The End
Added 2023-09-08 21:40:54 +0000 UTC'You speak to Lily and agree on a plan.
Lily, her sister, and the other former beings stay and watch over the compound while you and Jingle return to agency headquarters for debriefing. Contact with the compound is maintained via the hostless beings under your control. You leave behind a standard agency communication device as well.
The agency is astounded upon your return. Jingle corroborates for you that you entered into this form willingly. The investigation into the abduction case is closed as all the missing individuals get accounted for. The mission is considered a success.
After a short time you lead a new team mission returning to the compound to establish a successorship system. The nickname you made for the beings, boogies, caught on and stuck.
Some of the former boogies remain at the compound to provide support and information about the facility. Lily and her sister Leah went home but visit every now and then. Above ground additions to the facility are added, displaying a presence to the outside.
From around the nation people of exceptional note and talent gather. In little over a year a successor system is established and you return to being yourself well before your maximum limit. In time the surrounding area develops and is named Boogie Town. Though small in number, boogies' influence pours over the world.'
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You have completed the adventure and have received the good end. There are no more parts.
Big thank you to all you agents. You showed courage and wisdom in the face of many difficult decisions over this past year. Your heroic deeds will not be soon forgotten.
And thank you to the boogie adventure editors and other contributors for teaming with me to make the adventure:
Adventure Editor -
TriumvirateF (owner of Leah)
X/twitter: https://twitter.com/TriumvirateF
Additional Editor/Map Artist/April Fools -
EnjoyerOfFans
FA: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/averagefanenjoyer/
X/twitter: https://twitter.com/EnjoyerOfFans
Object Design -
SodaGoon
X/twitter: https://twitter.com/The_Soda_Goon
3D Map/Rewrites -
Sapphire 'Siska' Crook
FA: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/mech-ah/
Additional Help -
SophiaSimp
X/twitter: https://twitter.com/Krysta111111111
Final Stats -
Total number of parts: 102
Completion time: 394 days
Game Overs: 13
Visions of Failure: 1
Comments
Oh my gosh this was amazing.~ And with such a satisfactory end, too! It really was a happy ending for everybody. I *love* that there is a Boogie Town now; for them to live freely and have their own lives (and, possibly for people to get willingly assimilated! I mean, I would. I kinda like to imagine it feels good.)! Gosh, you are wonderful, Ozone! I'm so glad I finally got to read this story. Thank you for writing it, illustrating it; thank you to all your team who helped you. I might not have gotten the chance to participate in this adventure while it was active, but I sure had a good time reading it. Thank you so much for this opportunity; and may the Boogies live on!!
ThrowawayGoggles
2023-12-28 04:08:00 +0000 UTCIndeed. You went down floor by floor like you would a dungeon.
ozone
2023-09-23 20:30:51 +0000 UTCIt just occurred to me that this all happened in an underground facility and not a space station
YoBoySarge
2023-09-23 15:32:05 +0000 UTCTo think I joined relatively towards the beginning, a whole damn year ago
Mori
2023-09-11 22:02:45 +0000 UTCI see tiny jester in the window; hope one day you’ll draw her again
pokelolo99
2023-09-11 07:53:24 +0000 UTCThis was a lot of fun! Would love to see alternate endings sometime in the future! A good ending is good, but a bad ending will always be my favorite! Can't wait to see what more you do!~
Alicia McDuffie
2023-09-10 21:38:46 +0000 UTCAbsolutely, and everything you do in refining this format will only help with future projects in other mediums. Wish you all the luck in the world with production of the next story, and very much looking forward to it :D.
Alex L
2023-09-10 21:20:24 +0000 UTCJust be warned that the last game dev thing I worked on before running to be a cybersecurity lead was networking for the Wii U, so do with that hilarious/sad fun fact what you will.
Arianna Altomare
2023-09-10 20:12:30 +0000 UTCI'll keep on my 'exceptional talents' list.
ozone
2023-09-10 18:33:30 +0000 UTCIf you do ever need coding help from one Tech-tias to another, always happy to help in the future. Was a fun ride!
Arianna Altomare
2023-09-10 14:49:36 +0000 UTCI agree, at some point making a single player experience could spice things up from the usual format, Another way is maybe having a B team working on kind of like a side story visual novel and still have the usual team working on this format for the main plot, but that would mean a lot more work in the long run. (The B in B team stands for boogie btw.)
Nomad
2023-09-10 12:05:34 +0000 UTCamazing! this was a lot of fun! congrats on finishing this amazing adventure up! i definitely look forward to the remaining bad ends that'll come up later, and to all the fun stuff ur ganna do in the future!
LimeMaide
2023-09-10 00:18:47 +0000 UTCComing very soon.
ozone
2023-09-10 00:11:42 +0000 UTChow long till we get a file for the whole thing?
Ian Clayton Anderson
2023-09-09 23:14:02 +0000 UTCYes.
ozone
2023-09-09 21:59:40 +0000 UTCCould we just say that the following successors are every patron
Mori
2023-09-09 21:09:30 +0000 UTCFinally the good ending!
Fatal
2023-09-09 13:39:27 +0000 UTCWould love to see the bad end and some of the ones we never got caught by, like camera boogie ^^
Erise
2023-09-09 13:26:15 +0000 UTC"Boogie Town" sounds like a disco album. Will there be "Boogie Night" social events, or possibly road trips to go trade with Funky Town? ;)
Taerjaga
2023-09-09 09:48:37 +0000 UTCHuh that’s all?
Kochi, Dignity Thief
2023-09-09 08:23:52 +0000 UTCCan we has more bad ends plz?
a b
2023-09-09 07:21:31 +0000 UTCI do hope we'll be able to see a few of the GOs we missed as time goes on, and maybe even see what the Game Over ending would have been eventually. Wouldn't mind giving a bit more to see that one.
Nightspark43
2023-09-09 07:14:17 +0000 UTCFine fine.
ozone
2023-09-09 05:01:47 +0000 UTCThat's where I'll go if the pieces come together. But there's still more to show with this format.
ozone
2023-09-09 05:01:01 +0000 UTCVery well, I'll take it easy for the rest of the week.
ozone
2023-09-09 04:46:46 +0000 UTCYea please don’t do dat
No1isHere
2023-09-09 04:31:39 +0000 UTCOzone, just wanna say: love your artwork and it has been a wonderful adventure. Thank you for all you do and this was a lovely experience! ^v^
FiraFawkes
2023-09-09 04:29:04 +0000 UTCWoo hoo!!! Congrats everyone, we did it!! Hugs all around! <3
FiraFawkes
2023-09-09 04:28:05 +0000 UTCActually, yeah, a single player adventure was what I had in mind when I posted my other comment. A Corruption of Champions/TiTS-esque text adventure would suit this perfectly, I'd think.
Alex L
2023-09-09 04:11:06 +0000 UTCThough I was late to join the adventure, I'm glad I was here to contribute to the ending at least. Looking forward to what the team produces next! I should also ask, considering what you built here, have you considered making a video game? I think your handling of environment design and maps is pretty dang solid. It would take a larger team to pull off, certainly, but I could see this becoming something akin to what Corruption of Champions or TiTS pulled off. I know I'd certainly play it!
Alex L
2023-09-09 04:05:28 +0000 UTCMission Complete, Well Done agents. With the Boogies calmed we hope the future for Us the Boogies will be a promising one. Jazzy, out.
Jazzyman
2023-09-09 03:53:50 +0000 UTCThis is wonderful, its been a helluva journey^^
Grimdarkguardian
2023-09-09 02:37:51 +0000 UTCCareful not to burn yourself out!
Vananari
2023-09-09 01:52:05 +0000 UTCdamn so its good end afterall welp guess we wont know what would the bad end look like
kirikoss
2023-09-09 01:17:42 +0000 UTCNice to see it ended on a high note, Though I would totally join the Boogie Police Force sounds like fun.
Lucky Rose
2023-09-09 00:51:56 +0000 UTCA tiny bit
Lucky Rose
2023-09-09 00:51:21 +0000 UTCAs you wish.
ozone
2023-09-09 00:40:04 +0000 UTCMr Ozone, we made it too the end. We held our end of the bargain, so I expect you to hold up yours of showing use all the potential Game Overs in the coming future~
No1isHere
2023-09-09 00:26:49 +0000 UTCAwesome! We did it everyone! And what a happy ending indeed.
Crevan Prowler
2023-09-09 00:11:07 +0000 UTCWell, regardless of what you decide to do. You have a supporter in me. Again, thank you for the experience. It was fun. ✌️🐺
MrToastsandwich
2023-09-09 00:03:36 +0000 UTCWithout going into too much detail, if what I have in mind passes through the trials phase the next adventure will have a fundamentally different system that addresses those criticisms elegantly. Making one of these into a single player visual novel is a whole another matter. I'll be working on things in the background to possibly make that a possibility one day.
ozone
2023-09-08 23:57:29 +0000 UTC😶🌫️
Keti
2023-09-08 23:43:05 +0000 UTCWe did it! we succeeded! o v o yipppyy! good quality ending with a lot of fun to be had, and ending with zero lives is always the best way to do it! Fhehe, glad to be one of the many individuals giving votes, and occasional words of advice! Drinks all around!
Shade and Em (Dragonmaster2653)
2023-09-08 23:41:01 +0000 UTC'I'm a little bummed such a mysterious, dangerous force got put under control so easily' For now.
ozone
2023-09-08 23:32:14 +0000 UTCNow that the adventure and role playing is over, there’s a few things that I would like to talk about regarding the adventure itself. There are some areas of improvement that I believe should be considered in the future. Please bear with me for this might get long and that these are merely my opinions and suggestions. 1. The game overs felt too frequent. When we first started this adventure, I thought to myself: “Seven lives? Wow, that’s generous!” Well, those seven lives didn’t last very long did they? Let’s face it, if it weren’t for the extra lives we gained along the way - we might not even have made it halfway there. All because of the game overs being a constant threat in pretty much every decision. As a gamer, I believe that players should be allowed to make mistakes and not get punished for every wrong move they make. What I’m trying to say is, TONE DOWN ON THE GAME OVERS. Now, I’m not saying get rid of them entirely. Maybe we could get hit by a game over every second to third bad decisions we make. Maybe one bad decision could put us in a “danger zone” (which is indicated by a warning triangle or something) where the character is in real danger. If we were to make one more bad decision, THEN we could get hit by a game over. That way, we would not only be aware that we might lose a life if we’re not careful here, it would also allow us to make a few mistakes without being punished for it. 2. Some sections felt frustrating and pointless. Now, this could just be me being salty. But when I look back at the sections where we had to wait on the boogie to get closer to us. I felt that those parts could have been taken out of the adventure entirely and it wouldn’t have changed the story that much. Think about it, the room where we first found Leah might as well have been right next to the elevator right away without the long hallway. Same thing when we played as Jingle waiting on the big guy boogie. I personally believe those parts were the most frustrating parts of this adventure. Not just because we lost so many lives during those, but also because I believe they weren’t really necessary. PLEASE, Ozone, do NOT bring back scenarios where we have to wait on the threat to come to us! We just can’t do timing puzzles like these. 3. This should have been a single player experience. I have brought this up a couple of times now, but I do believe these adventures should be a single player experience. So many times during this adventure, I’ve felt that the player base were far too divided to come to reasonable agreements. The strip game over is a perfect example of this… Now, I realize that making these single player might be a lot of work. But if you put time into it, Ozone. I believe you could really have some great potential visual novel games on your hands here. This would be amazing, because this way the bad end huggers can have ALL the game overs they want and the people who wants to take the adventure seriously can do that in peace. If you would decide to give it a try, Ozone, I would be all for giving you all the time you need to do so. Like I’ve said before, customers will wait for quality. That’s all. I apologize if this got really long. Remember, these are just my opinions and suggestions for what could make these adventures even better in the future. Feel free to disagree with me. I would also take this opportunity to thank you, Ozoneserpent, for this experience. You’re a fantastic artist and I’ve really enjoyed your art. I hope to see even more great things from you in the future. :) Thank you for reading. ❤️🐺
MrToastsandwich
2023-09-08 23:18:41 +0000 UTCThat was a helluva campaign.... though I'm still holding a grudge for that one game-over where practically everyone voted for Cassandra to strip. *frakking neuron activation-monkeys*
Ryan Drakel
2023-09-08 23:03:36 +0000 UTCI'm glad most folks are happy with the ending but personally I'm a little bummed such a mysterious, dangerous force got put under control so easily. Though I am one of those people who wanted the bad ending 😏
Keti
2023-09-08 23:02:19 +0000 UTCWhile this was far from good for my anxiety I'm still glad I came along for the ride. Honestly not expecting something similar for some time as I'm sure it was a great undertaking, but I'll be here regardless.
Zack Taylor
2023-09-08 22:42:13 +0000 UTCWhooo, victory! \o/ See, Boogie Police Force is a thing, yay!
SilverFox5645
2023-09-08 22:32:06 +0000 UTCGlad to see this story ended on a high note. It was pretty precarious, but what a good ending.
Bababoey
2023-09-08 22:29:29 +0000 UTCCongrats! Wonderful work!
J8-Bit
2023-09-08 22:19:26 +0000 UTCDon't worry there will be.
ozone
2023-09-08 22:11:14 +0000 UTCI hope the Boogies create a dance club called Boogie Boogie
Deantha
2023-09-08 22:11:11 +0000 UTCYeah!! Woohoo!! We effin did it!! Mission accomplished!!
Nomad
2023-09-08 22:06:49 +0000 UTCA little bit
Paladin Kou
2023-09-08 22:05:55 +0000 UTCNot immediately but there will be special pics of Cassandra and the crew spread over the remainder of the year.
ozone
2023-09-08 22:04:32 +0000 UTComw to boogietown where the boogies are big are the grass is also boogie
Alchemical Scientist
2023-09-08 22:03:18 +0000 UTCMan I was hoping to see more good shots of our protagonist in her new boogie form
Smokinggunz
2023-09-08 22:02:33 +0000 UTCWas there ever any doubt? (don’t answer that)
Mandalorian Manray
2023-09-08 21:57:13 +0000 UTCGood to see this all tied up. Just two questions: do we get to know/see the bad ending, and is there a good end bonus like the last CYOA?
ArtAnimationFan
2023-09-08 21:53:00 +0000 UTCThank you for bringing us on the Tale Mr Ozone
No1isHere
2023-09-08 21:50:39 +0000 UTCThe boogies came.so close but gg good story.
LoboCharity
2023-09-08 21:47:31 +0000 UTCMission complete, time for some drinks.
Azure
2023-09-08 21:46:45 +0000 UTCit was a long process, but we did it agents, great work
CosmicNeko
2023-09-08 21:46:11 +0000 UTCWe did it, now for the bad endings òwó
Ash Shadowfox
2023-09-08 21:44:27 +0000 UTCFeels good to reach the end of a good, long adventure...safe and sound!! Well done, agents!!
Vusvox
2023-09-08 21:43:56 +0000 UTCA lovely story, was fun to be a part of the ride Agents.
PoisondeathWolf12
2023-09-08 21:43:53 +0000 UTCThat was a hell of a campaign! But we did it! High fives all around!
Paladin Kou
2023-09-08 21:42:53 +0000 UTCCONGRATULATIONS!!
Dotzrus
2023-09-08 21:42:49 +0000 UTCWhat a wild ride. It was awesome.
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2023-09-08 21:42:28 +0000 UTC
