Nick Caged Draft 2

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Here is the Draft 2 script for the current chapter.

I keep tinkering here and there. Diving in and changing a line or two is just a pleasure, so I often just find myself editing back and forth. As ever nothing is set in stone - BUT the general gist of it after the last draft;

• I wanted to increase the Owen pressure a bit! Amplify his dom voice.

• I also wanted to put Judy in the driving seat a bit. Show her playing along and having fun with it, and at the end, really leaning in.

• The step-up of the 'rules' needed to make a little more sense; Owen expected to get a big rise out of Nick, and when he acquiesced so easily decided to add to the pile, to elicit the reaction he wanted.

• I added in some Scent stuff at the start. It's intimate, and we haven't had enough of it, since we introduced it a while ago. Using it as a way to set the tone feels good.

Following all that, it STILL needs some trimming. But I figure I'll do that as I go.

Requesting zero typo notes - I don't care about those until the verrrrrry end.

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Title: Nick Caged Draft 2

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Scene 1 at J n N’s HOME in the bedroom half-clothed.

Sound Effect - ‘Click!’

We see a triumphant Judy pull away in front of Nick. Pleased as can be.

She looks upon her devious handy work.

J - There we go, Snug as a Bug! How’s the fit, Slick?

N - Tight… but… good. Cozy?! This could be it.

J - I told you the smaller ones were too ambitious!

N - Fine, fine. You were right, as ever, Fluff.

J - And yet, it never gets old.

N - How’s it look? 

J - Good, like, really good. …kinda makes me want to tease you.

N- Ha, don’t start.

J- No, seriously! I’m getting a real urge to call you a “wimp” and fuck every other fox in front of you.

N- gulp- Oh, wow. Savage Hopps.

J - So, probably the right one?

N- I’d say.

Judy stands up - we’ve yet to see the cage - and instead, the camera teases the reader and still refuses to show it for a while.

J pockets the key. Nick finishes dressing. 

J - You know, I always knew I’d be the one to lock you up, Slick.

N playfully blushing; Ha! And I always knew I’d end up in a cage!

She shows herself off.
J - And?

N - Stunning. 

J - Fuckable?

N - Very..

J- Good. Let’s go, I don’t want to be late …wimp ;D.

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A camera montage of them leaving and getting onto the Monorail/tram. A panel or two of the two of them standing and Judy looking at his groin, and then elbow-nudges him with a big grin, making him blush.

If there's space maybe a tiny bit of dialogue:

J - Pstt, hey! Be careful how you stand. People are starting to notice.

N - What-! Ugh. Funny, Hopps, funny.

J snickering - No one can tell, you lug.

N- I can’t believe we’re doing this, it’s so wild.

J - Doesn’t seem too wild for you, Mr. Wilde. Feels… right. And (whispers) I wasn’t kidding earlier, it’s really doing it for me… like, a lot. (normal voice) I am so proud of you.

N - Thanks, hon. Honestly, I’m nervous!

J - I bet! But it wouldn’t be any fun if it was easy! 

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They arrive outside of a door. Or are approaching the apartment in an elevator or stairs? Judy knocks and looks at Nick, maybe holding his hand.

J - Deep breath. Remember, I love you and we get to stop any time. So have fun with it. I know I will.

The door opens and there is Owen. Dressed casually? Semi-casual? There’s room here to do a ‘dingdong’ and we watch Owen go to his door. But might be too slow?

Judy goes up on her tiptoes to kiss him

J - Owen!!!! she kisses him on the cheek

O - Hello you! Wow, you are a snack. Careful girl, you’ll give me ideas!

J - Giggle, I missed you!

Judy stays all wrapped up in Owen’s arms, they walk in, and Nick takes off his coat and hangs it up. Might have them shoulder hug a second…

O - I know, I’m sorry I had to cancel this week. Come on in. Make yourselves comfy. George is out all weekend, so we have the place to ourselves. 

Sniffs her, licks her gently

J- mmm

O - Someone smells excited.

J - Only every time I see you. 

O is get’s his snoot into her neck, and is maybe tenting a bit.

O- Haw, I’m flattered! You smell, good, really good. You know, you really are starting to carry my scent too. You smell like mine.

J - Ah, Nick’s mentioned it once or twice.  

O- Has he now. Well, It suits you. Right pup? 

N opening fridge - Ah, yeah. It’s… pretty hot. 

J - Ah, just fancy water for me honey.

N- Sure thing, cottontail.

As Nick turns back around he sees they’ve moved to the couch. Owen sitting and Judy is cuddling up next to him, or curled up in his lap, maybe making out? Alternatively, they could be stood looking at each other, as Judy tenderly touches Owen’s ‘tent’ A pause panel without dialogue. The general note is that Nick lays eyes on a very coupley-looking couple. If there's time, maybe a skipped heart beat moment/reaction shot, as he takes a breath and approaches and they notice him. 

Nick saunters over

N - gulp - Now that’s a picture.

O - Haw, come on over and join us bud. 

J - So…

The camera rests on Judy, who’s looking up at Owen as she touches his chest/mane/arm.

J - We’ve got news for you. Guess who’s caged.

O- !!! For real!? Already? That’s a hell of a lot sooner than I expected. 

J- Mm-hmm. I mean, after you told us to start shopping, measuring, find the right fit…

it was all we could think about.

O- And?

N- Fits like a glove.

O - Show me.

N - Heh. Buy a boy a drink first.

O - Did I ask for sass? You got your beer. Now you strip cuck.

N - Ah.

Nick takes off his top, Owen leans forward on the end of the couch.

Nick strips off slowly and completely and stands nervously in front of a clothed Owen and Judy, he’s awkwardly stood, maybe holding his junk or tail infront of himself. 

O - Shy? Disappointing. Hands behind your back, and hold the base of your tail till I tell you otherwise. Or I tie you up. 

J - giggle.

Finally, we see the cage in all its glory. Nick looks away embarrassed.

O - Ah, there we GO. Would you look at that. Just lovely. Any regrets yet?

N - Maybe. Yes? No?! Ha.

O - Sure, sure, well, we’ll work on that, eh. Keys? 

J hands him a key - Here you go! We’ve got two more at home. 

O pockets the key or puts it down - Good. I’ll keep this one then. 

He reaches out to extend a claw, running his fingers down the sheath and balls.

O - Stay still now, my claws are sharp.

O - I won’t lie, this has made my day. So small and adorable. Very… cute.

His nail taps on the metal of the cage.

O- Feel that?

N- Feel what?

O- Haw!

Owen leans back, with a contended sigh, and looks at Judy with a smile, or scratches behind her ear. 

O - Perfect. Did you tell him anything about our little plan?

N- gulp- Plan?

J- Ah (or better to do a ‘Shh, adults are talking’?)… Nope, I didn’t tell him a thing. 

O- Good, good! This’ll be fun then. Here, help yourself, while I clue the boy in -

Pops him free of his buckle.

J- Ah !!!

J- Ffffuck, I really missed you.

Judy starts to blow him.

O - Mmmfff, fuck, me too. A week is way too long…  So, mmf, bud, a while back your loving wife and Bull decided on a new rule to go hand in hand with that pretty little cage of yours. Us three, our little pack, we’re upping the game again, just like you begged not so long ago. 

O - mmf that really does feel good...

Owen’s free hand has snaked its way down her backside, where her skirt is riding up, revealing some black sheer underwear holding a sizeable butt plug in place. As he monologues a bit she frees his growing cock and swallows the whole thing up, she’s pointedly ignoring Nick while doing so.

O - Now that you're fitted and sized, all tucked away… Whenever I’m with this one (points to Judy maybe with a wink, or squeezes her ass? Getting a small moan from her?), you're going to be wearing that cage. Not just when you feel like it, not just on occasion. But every single time, no exceptions. New normal.

Judy is pushing back into Owen’s fingers as she struggles with his growing cock. Maybe his fingers find the plug and press on it eliciting a moan. Maybe he grins when he finds the plug. She is moaning a bit

N- … I- whoa. That’s-

O looks down at Judy, just wagging her butt and drooling at his dick.

O - Quiet. Not done. Now, let’s be clear. I wouldn’t be depriving you, would I Pet? You won’t miss hubby's dick, when we’re together, will you? Be honest now, don’t lie.

J bites her lip - …No… I - I think it’s better off in its cage, it suits him.

O kisses the top of her head and stands up.

O - Doesn’t it just!

He approaches and pulls Nick in close, before using his other hand to take his cock and poke and wipe it across Nick’s sheath. He talks quietly to him, as he pulls his head to his.

‘I am very proud of you, putting that thing on. But you understand us right? Judy deserves a real mate with a real cock, not some… pathetic puppy who’ll lock his pecker away at the drop of a hat. You’ll stay caged when I’m around. My cock-free-cuck. Nice and jealous and denied while I satisfy your wife again, and again, and again. Understood?

Maybe heart racing badum badum 

Judy perks up from behind, maybe licking her lips: 

J - Say, ‘Thank you’, Nick.

N - oh ah… yeah - yeah - I… gulp… Thank you.

O- low-growl, ‘-Sir’. Tonight I think you say, ‘Thank you Sir’, Mm-hm, but sure thing, cuck. 

O - How the mighty have fallen, eh? (maybe too cheezy) Here, down you go, loser. (Slick?) 

Owen picks Judy up and puts her facing cow-girl-style into Nick’s lap.

O - And up you come, beautiful. 

O - Keep her spread for me.

Owen Kneels in front of them both. Judy’s legs spread and skirt riding high, her underwear and plug still on/in. Beneath that too is Nick's caged cock

O - What a fucking sight. 

J - Ah… It’s - it’s all for you. 

O presses on the butt plug.

O - I noticed this little surprise. 

J - Mff! Do you like it? Nick said you might when we were shopping and...

O - I do, I love it. You are stunning, and your husband has exquisite taste. Keep playing with these kinda toys and maybe one day you’ll stretch enough to let me in back there?

J - Ah, if… if that’s what you want that. <3 

O - Girl, I want every inch of you-

Owen pulls her panties to the side and starts a long lick. She squeaks/Eeps/gasps/melts in reaction. 

O - Regret it now, cuck? Ha. It’s fine, you ought to! Just, ah-

O thumbs the side of Nick’s leg, maybe his nose boops Nick's balls. 

O - Speak up the moment watching and rubbin’ your caged nub gets too much and you need a helping hand eh? 

Owen pulls on Nicks's balls, maybe even puts his teeth around them - to pull back with. or just noses the whole thing.

O- Alphas take care of their pack. You beg a bit and I’d happily rut a load out of you.

N - Ah, I don’t- I wouldn’t - I - I mean, sometimes I-

O - Uhuh, no pressure, ‘straight boy’. But, do me a favor and follow your wife’s example here. Get some practice in some time, so I don’t fucking break you.

J - I- I would really really like to see t– Ah! ffff

In between licks and slurps:

J- Squeak!

O squints for a second, gauging just how far he can go - You know, Nick, you seem to be taking this all far too well, I was really hoping for, hm… well, I was going to save it for another day, but screw it. A little later, I’m going to text you a schedule for that cage too. One I’m expecting you to stick to.

N underneath a squirming Judy - Schedule? 

Owen is resting his head against Judy’s thigh as his thumb fucks her idly, she’s sopping wet and easily takes him to the knuckle. 

O - Uhuh, schedule. You wear that cage whenever I’m with Judy. And then, more and more in-between. Until you’re well and truly fucked. 

O - It’s gonna become a second skin and, one day, a permanent part of your body.

Nick's eyes go wide

N - P-permanent?! 

O - Ah, now, that’s more like it. Don’t play dumb fox, ‘Fuck me up’, remember? Must’ve crossed your mind when you were trying on all those itty bitty cages. Becoming a full-time Pussy-Free chastity cuck to his very happy, well-fucked wife and bull. The dream, right? There are details to figure out, sure sure, but you gotta start somewhere. So why not now.

N - I- Gods- Judy, that’s so -

Judy is side-looking at her husband, finally seeing him, maybe she kisses him on the cheek she’s beaming. 

J - Ah… I know, I know… but now, you say ‘Thank you, Sir’

N gulps 

Owen's nail cuts her panties off quickly, she whimpers in anticipation, and looks up at him

O - She’ll not save you bud. We all want this. But, if it helps, I’m in no rush. Small steps, slow burn. Enjoy your pee shooter while you still can. It’s plenty enough that you just know what that cage really means. 

Owen looks at the panties in his hands. 

N whispers in a subsiding panic - I- I yeah I- gulp -  I  mean, I could try, but I… and… oh fuck. Okay, yeah I - Thank you?!… sir.

O- Fuck. You are pathetic! And so very welcome. 

Owen takes the panties and puts it around Nick’s mouth keeping his snoot closed.

O - Here, a reward for being such a very good chastity boy! Close your maw… relax and breathe… there, now, how does that smell? Incredible right? Jealous? Miss it? Cage feelin' a little tight? Good.

N- Whineeee th-th-thank you si-.

O- And you, my slutty-bunny! Such a hot, wet mess! Was any of this for your husband?

J - Ah ah…. no. No sir.

O - Of course not! What a pair you make. Well, you deserve a reward too. Takes a lot to lock your very own husband away, and deliver him to man like me. What can I do for such a well-behaved prey animal like you?

J- I- I… I just want you inside of me. Please.

O - You heard her, line me up, loser.

Nick's fingers tremble as it reaches down to place Owen’s cock at Judy's entrance.

O - But. Mrs. Hopps, your husband is right here, and I am most definitely not him! Are you sure you really want MY cock?

Owen looms over Judy.

O - You understand, right? Soon, I’ll never let him in you again. I’ll ruin him, and keep you all to myself. Maybe I should just take back all those mean things I said, unlock him, let you two have the nigh-

J- No, fuck. Don't tease. Owen, I want you, I want your cock. Please just- 

O GROWL - Say it louder prey. Make him feel it-

J desperate and loud - Please, please. I… belong to- my pussy belongs to you, Owen, it’s yours all yours, it has been for a while, I only want your cock, it’s the only one I need, it's the only one that makes me cum, it's all I want, I’m your’s, I’ll do anything you say, I’m—- HHggg

Owen: Good girllll.

cock slips in 

J - ah ah, fuckkkkkkkk.

Owen has half in before wiggling and pushing the rest in the plug moving in response. 

O - Mmff, damn, that’s tight with the plug… lemmie just- and -Ahh there we gooooo.

Owen sinks in knott deep, it displaces the plug into a angle a bit.

J- Squeak!!! Thank you thank you thank you- mmmfff

They both moan and he kisses her deeply. 

Owen looking down at his cock buried in her. She is looking up at him with loving eyes. 

O - You feel amazing Mrs. Hopps.

O stars down at Nick, as he talks to Judy, squashed between them, with a toothy sinister look to him

O - My prey. My pussy. My mate. 

J-, ah, ah- I’m.. I’m all - all yours. Your mate, yoursss.

N - whine

Owen pulls out, wet pussy drool drips out of her onto Nick, maybe precum sqirts onto Nick’s caged cock.

O - Mmfff. What a mess. Look at all that precum.

J - Noooo. Why, why did you stop??

O - Haw, cause I very much want to rut a load into you, but the furniture won’t quit wriggling…

J - Giggle, maybe you should take me to the bedroom?

O - My thoughts exactly. And what do we do about him?

J things for a second, maybe sinisterly looks at Nick with love in her eys  - Oh… I really don’t care.

Owen wipes his cock off on Nick’s sheath.

O - Haw! Lemmie see… you helped make this mess, so you clean it. With your tongue. Then, I don’t know, come find us, take some video or something. Keep yourself busy.

Owen gives the top of Nick's snoot/head a long tongue lick/kiss, surprising Nick.

O- ‘Fucking Cuck. <3’

He gets up and pulls Judy onto his shoulder. He starts walking toward the bedroom.

Fuck drunk Judy waves good bye to Nick or is giving him a wave and a wink or a ;p face? 

As he walks away O - Come on, let’s see if I can’t fuck that plug out of you.

J- Yessss.

They disappear into the bedroom, as Nick touches all the wetness on his crotch, or takes off the wet panties around his snoot, there’s a focus on his caged cock. He’s a mess!

N- Whineeee. fuckkkkk. I- I-  Fuck… fuck fucccccccck. <3

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It fades and we see all three on the bed, post-sex. Nick's face is gooey from a cleanup, and Judy's all scratched up? Maybe in some restraints and a collar/leash tied to the bed with ropes of cum across her belly.

O - …Sooo, how did we do fam?

J - Are you kidding THAT was way too much fun… but, ah, how was it for you Hon?

N - Really intense… but I loved it, I really did. Thank you both for being so… I don’t know, bossy… and kinky…

O - You're welcome, bud!. Gotta sting a bit tho!? I won’t lie, ordering you to become a full-time chastity cuck fucking does it for me, but all for fun, yeah? You two come first and we really, one hundred percent DO NOT need to do something that extreme in the long run… But… aha, I really would love it if you tried, for a bit? You have no idea how long I spent finding and designing the right plan for you. It’s a slow one, well-rated, with great results and… I dunno, it would be really fun knowing you’re on it.

N - haha jeez, that’s- thank you?! It’s all a lot. But, I don’t know, it feels crazy and exciting. I don’t think I could live in a cage, and give up everything, you know? But for right now… maybe, I could try a bit… 

O- Sure, sure! Well, keep checking in, and don’t sweat it. Pull the rip cord when you need to.

N- Yeah, ha, maybe I’m too turned on to make decisions…

J- Mm? Decisions? What’s there left for you to decide, honey? You heard the man, Owen your alpha, laid it out pretty clearly; you’re our soon-to-be pussy-free chastity cuck, and you’ll stick to what ever schedule he wants you on.

N - ah haha 

J - You think I’m joking?! Owen’s pack, Owen’s pussy, Owens rules. You don’t get to weigh in, Slick, you’re locked out, literally. He wants it, so he gets it, and you don’t. 

N- gulp

O- DAMN JUDE!!!

J- Ah-ha wink!

Too much? I was just thinking we could have been meaner - he’ll DOES need something to jerk off to later, right?! 

O - Haw, meaner, huh? Nick, we created a monster.

N nervous/sweating - Ha ha fuuuuck!

J -  What can I say, I’m having fun with my two favorite boys. And, ah, honestly, it turns me on.

O - Yeah? Feeling ready for a round two, monster? 

J - With you? Always.

O - Such a good girl. Well then, how about we send the runt home then? 

J- Ah! YES. Nicholas, your just getting in the way, be a good boy and head on-

O - Meaner Jude, meaner!

J- Ah. Mmm, honey… I meant what I said. As soon as you put that cage on, he won, and you lost. I’m Owens'prey now, not yours. Keep that cage on till I get home, okay? Clean the house, cook, whatever helps.  I’ll… I’ll come home when I’m done, and if he says it’s ok, I’ll help take care of your little problem.

O - Atta girl!

J- Now hurry up and leave; you're distracting my man. And, ah, remember, I love you, I really really do.

O rolls on top of Judy. 

N- Nhg, I- I fuck, love you guys so much.

O- Haha, love you too bud, now fuck off, cuck! 

J- giggle fuck off cuck! 

MAYBE finish with exact same panel of monorail but it's later in the day and it’s just Nick with a disheveled look and grin as he goes home solo, maybe with the underwear in his pocket. Receiving texts.

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