QnA 3 - Page 1 & 2 & 3 - FINISHED
Added 2023-09-21 00:55:44 +0000 UTCEDIT- October2023 - corrected a few stray pixels and changed the 'narration' from balloons to boxes to avoid confusion!
Here we gooooo!!!!
Not too bad for 4ish weeks of work I think =D I'm so proud of some of these faccccces, and you guys, the underwear on the head thing? Just so damn hot haha.
I'm still a little frustrated with the background hues and colors. I think a lot of my constant frustration (this is a running thing for me) at that is just that our three heroes have such a variety in their tones and hues, that it becomes really hard to find a color where they pop and sit comfortably. I think... the green background I build them on is like... the only tone where it really feels like it lets them stand out. But green doesn't work for most scenes - as much as I try. The orange-yellow, felt like a nice contrast to the blue and really says 'this happened another time'. I like the idea that the blue will serve as a nice base to come back to in these pages where we bounce throughout time.
Going forward. Let me know how you're feeling about the 2-3 batch-page-at-a-time-process? I'm debating just doing 1 page at a time for these - as these are faster for me to do than the regular super cleaned up and tight pages I try to do for the main chapters (which can take me like... 3-4 weeks per page). BUT if I go one page at a time, the process might not be as fast? Or maybe I'll burn out? Having it in a batch like this means I can dedicate a whole week to pencils and give myself a wider amount of time per stage... BUT means you guys have to wait longer in between finished pages =/
I dunno! I guess there's no right answer. Maybe I try the one-page-at-a-time and see how it goes.
ALSO, do you guys want single panels for these? I think they're pretty fun, but I don't know if they're wallpaper-good. Maybe Some telegram stickers? LMK!
High-res-PNG's of the two question askers are in the attachment-zip I'd ask you, to NOT use them unless you're the question-asker-themself!
---
Patreon sometimes shrinks images, so check the attachments for the higher-res images!
---
All The Good Stuff - Links Page
(An up-to-date index of all the chapter and Patreon page links!)
Comments
looking forward to the next installment!
bullforcougar
2023-09-25 06:45:06 +0000 UTCThanks so much Gabe - I found drawing Owen's tanktop on her, the hardest bit! Getting a good droop is tough!
Amadose
2023-09-22 20:36:25 +0000 UTCOwen's on cloud nine =D
Amadose
2023-09-22 20:35:43 +0000 UTCHa I sort of think, SHE thinks that the stream can't tell how risque the setup is. Oblivious to the nip-slips and all, and just thinking the auto-blur stuff is keeping it all hidden =D So glad it's hitting that vibe for you - I want it to be sexy wholesome!
Amadose
2023-09-22 20:35:25 +0000 UTCThe way the clothes drape on her is just *chefs kiss* keep up the good work!!! 🥰🥰🥰
GabeRat
2023-09-22 19:51:50 +0000 UTCBeautifullll! Loving Owen's expressions just as much as Judy's those cocky half lidded eyes 😍
K1n9
2023-09-22 18:14:35 +0000 UTCI love how for something so risqué you make it look so wholesome, especially our dear Judy. :)
AcrossTheIcyLake
2023-09-22 04:23:50 +0000 UTCDamn! Looking real good! I can see why you would be struggling with the background colors but I think you've done well with them. The blue really helps Judy pop without it looking out of place and the yellow orange compliments the boys as well. Darker shades for Judy, light for the boys, it works. Also, these expressions on Judy are melting my heart. She looks so damn cute all the time and that look on Owen in the second panel...woof~ Cannot get enough of your take on these characters. Still emphasizing that it's a consensual situation always a plus in these little side adventures <3 Burn out to me is more important than most other things so whatever will keep you from straining you out is good with me. I'm sticking around so I'm happy to wait as long as I have to for this delicious cuck content. And of course single panels would be lovely. You know I need some new phone backgrounds, though I'll gladly make them myself if I gotta~
Rickochet
2023-09-21 22:41:42 +0000 UTCToo fucking hooot! Im running out of exclamations! :D
Fen
2023-09-21 20:23:03 +0000 UTCThinking about making it presentable on a phone, can you believe for two years I did all my art on a galaxy note 10 cell phone!? Using the little toothpick spen that comes with it!? Lol. The trick with halftone layers is go COARSE with it. Even in a big screen once you add color it doesn't assist unless it's COARSE. medibang paint starts with a hatching value of 60 or so for the halftone layer, I scale that back to 16 for larger images and 20 for smaller. Usually always 16. My series on the set probably has the best use of this I've done even though it's now three year old art lol. This I put an unessisary drop shadow behind the bull just to add. https://www.furaffinity.net/view/37693677/ I went even coarser to sort of accent the background instead of making the characters pop out. After all this practice I think this level of course is ideal. https://www.furaffinity.net/view/37594560/ Tbh thinking about edge lighting it reminds me of how softly you do often shade(which tbh always inspires me with how good it looks in the end!). My characters are much closer to comic cell shade. It's quick even though I use... 6 lighting layers. I would try just adding a overlay layer with a light grey used to outline the unshadowed edge of the characters for that edge lighting. See if it works. It shouldn't take long. I feel bad saying "shouldn't take long" because I know it may take far longer for others than me... so give it a little shot and see. Lol in a good week I get 2-3 pages of lineart done and 2 colored! Once someone watching one of my recordings drawing my punk fem character alex said "you draw their hair fast!" And I was like "draw it two thousand times and you'll get there" lol. (Alex has something like 200 or 300 pages of comic for her over the years.)
Bucked!
2023-09-21 19:26:59 +0000 UTCYesssss. Maybe sometime I should give her a couple of light scars? Little semi-permanent reminders? I think that could be pretty hot... Yesssss, I think there's so much fun in the dom/sub interaction, and I loveeee the idea of Owen telling Nick he's a good boy and well-behaved... for sitting there and being cuck - super hot to me.
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:42:08 +0000 UTCPERFECT RESULT
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:39:51 +0000 UTCAll great notes! I've found that shifitng the hue of the character sometimes in a scene can open things up for me with regards to the background. But it's still my most frustrating moment. I consider halftone dangerous! I like the idea of my pages being viewed on a mobile phone, as it's smallest size, and half tone can create moire effects when scaled down, which I think looks super bad! Some people are masters at getting it to look right, AND keep it scaling correctly. But for me it's too scary of a tool! Loooooove me some good rim-lighting and a strategic stroke! In these pages though I'm not lighting the characters much to keep the workload light. Yup! the timeline is long: I do this around my IRL work! But these particular pages were pretty fast and fun for me. Not having to be too precious about things, really helped it feel loose and flowly for me. Felt important to do the first 3 pages at once, so that I could get a better vibe check of multiple pages next to each other early. I don't know if I'll stick to that?
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:37:39 +0000 UTChaha! Maybe one day I'll do one of those 'lay back and throat fuck' drawings - I figure Judy would be down to give it a try! I sort of picture her mouth and teeth being quite hard to avoid tho, when your so large. When Judy's running the show it's much easier to control the BJ/mouth/teeth sort of thing. Maybe I'm ver thinking it a tad ;D
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:31:24 +0000 UTCBig and heavy and I bet Owen makes some cute noises when you grab 'em! In my head, Judy doesn't realize just how revealing the top is, and we're getting a real sneak-peek =D
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:29:10 +0000 UTCThank you so much Raven! Some one should/shouldn't tell her that her nips slippin on camera! ;D
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:27:51 +0000 UTCCan't have it all! Gotta serve the flow and function. If I load each panel with SO much, it becomes difficult for me to balance, and keep the visual flow working! Also gotta keep the page count down. RIP all those good ideas. I did draw the fleshlight into the background tho (it's under a pillow behind Judy)
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:27:07 +0000 UTCThanks so much, MH91! I fiddled a bit with that opening panel to reduce Judy's size and get Ownes' back a little more flat. I lovvvvve getting to draw all three just... lounging and sleeping and being a thruple. Re the underwear - I wish I kneeeeew. I have a folder called 'fun visual ideas' that I drop things into when I find them. I had a picture of a character with underwear on their head and it inspired me to try and do the same sort of thing with Nick. I thought it would be such a fun and powerful move for the scene. A real Owen-move.
Amadose
2023-09-21 18:25:22 +0000 UTCWowee wow wow!! 👀 those claw marks on the back of Judy's legs are doin some things to me~ I also gotta day, there's nothing better than a bull doting on and praising their cuck. 🤩
TrooperDog!
2023-09-21 13:47:32 +0000 UTCINSTANT HORNY 🥵
Henkou
2023-09-21 12:15:22 +0000 UTCHonestly I'm surprised about the two or three pages at a time process! I specifically draw one page at a time because while feeling out the dialogue (usually literally while I draw it... and I don't do "pencils" for roughs I go straight to ink) the dialogue options and narration may present an opportunity to change the plan for the next page. In other words I draw one page at a time to keep all subsequent pages as open as possible for inprovement of the story. As for having the characters pop, tbh your backgrounds are fine. It took me realizing that non furry artists manage it all the time to realize... we don't need color contrast built into tbe bg and characters to do it. It gets really hard to do tbe method of having contrasting (or complimenting depending ) colors for all the characters when you start to have characters of varied colors. There are two key tricks I use to make the characters pop out and I REALLY get em to pop out. 1) heavy edge lighting / back lighting. Stress that they are a different plane than the background. 2) a halftone layer. Sometimes it's great to detail the bg, sometimes it better to do a color splash with a half tone (the dots) to make tne character pop out in contrast. Check manga and American super hero comic books (the classic ones) for inspiration there! And jeeze man I handt realized it takes you four weeks! I'm glad your patient enough to keep that nose to the grindstone for us ^^. Keep at it and you'll get faster at it too!
Bucked!
2023-09-21 04:18:42 +0000 UTCJudy needs a good throatfucking and facial
bob star
2023-09-21 04:07:55 +0000 UTCI love how Judy holds Owens balls.. 😍 And she is so sexy dressed like that.
Jouni Mustonen
2023-09-21 03:55:30 +0000 UTC*gasp* it's here and looking amazing as always. Judy looking cute and absolutely sexy dressed like that. Can't wait to see what comes next.
RavenDancer
2023-09-21 03:11:25 +0000 UTCI love it, but i miss the fleshlight and other stuff in the wips!!
Juan
2023-09-21 03:01:08 +0000 UTCWonderful as always. I really like how you are portraying them as their position in the first panel. I can see that when judy gets back owen and nick will be cuddling each other. Also, Where'd you get the idea about the underwear?
MexicanHulk91
2023-09-21 02:35:33 +0000 UTCCan't wait to see what you're scheming!
Skippy The Fox
2023-09-21 02:05:54 +0000 UTCThank you so much Andry!!! <3
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:49:43 +0000 UTCMean's a lot to hear! I know the comic isn't there yet, but I see it as a Bi-story. I can't wait for the Chasity Cage chapter - as I've got a rather gay-ish intimate moment with the trio in mind =D
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:49:17 +0000 UTCYeah?!!? Thank you D! It's fast and friendly and fun! I'm really jamming with it... until the final phase where I'm zooming in and seeing all the errant pixels and start to feel a bit embarrassed. Love knowing you like it bud
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:47:01 +0000 UTCI bet they're heavy! =D Thanks Al!
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:45:59 +0000 UTCOMG! good job!
Andry SilverFang
2023-09-21 01:43:09 +0000 UTCYou really are fantastic with this comic! I'm Hella gay, but your art style and story is awesome! You really have me hooked with their story! And well I have a thing for Nick so that probably helps 😜
Skippy The Fox
2023-09-21 01:42:53 +0000 UTCThis came out fantastic, really digging the style you chose for these
Diego P
2023-09-21 01:42:21 +0000 UTCawesome, i love how judy holds owen's balls as she sucks
AL871
2023-09-21 01:31:55 +0000 UTCI'm a cum slut kitty cat and I'll have you respect that XD I just want to see it
Tigerchris
2023-09-21 01:10:38 +0000 UTCYeah?! haha OK, I'll see what I can crop and put together tomorrow =D I always love making single panels, I just didn't know if the messy pencils was... appealing enough.
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:10:16 +0000 UTCNah dawg, that load is going elsewhere =D
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:08:50 +0000 UTCRight?! Gotta tag and pull on them! Originally I wanted the 'pull' to feel more substantial, but it made his balls look too loose, so I has to fiddle with it a bit =D
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:08:00 +0000 UTCThank you hehe
Sora (Night Sky)
2023-09-21 01:07:42 +0000 UTCOoo I'd love to draw that - reminded me one day, or send me a QnA question? So I can get it into the list =)
Amadose
2023-09-21 01:07:03 +0000 UTCGod all of this is turning out so amazing!! You're doing amazing work and I really love the progress and the story that you've made through all of this. This q&A is adorable, really gives us a peak behind the scenes and keeps things moving along! I would love to see a single panels of this. A lot of the scenes I think would make amazing backgrounds or stickers. Also highly agreed the underwear idea being so sexy!
quietcoyote8
2023-09-21 01:03:58 +0000 UTCHot damn these are hot. That nip slip and the BJ if only we could see her with a mouth full of cum or throat bulge as it's shot down her throat. (But that should be saved for the main story lol) Ummm for this I kind of think the three page works cause it's a side thing XD
Tigerchris
2023-09-21 01:03:38 +0000 UTCI meant to say it several days ago when you first shared the drafts but - I always feel like there's a lot of neglecting the balls during oral & I LOVE the 2nd panel of the last page. 😋
Modest MOSFET
2023-09-21 01:02:27 +0000 UTCI wonder when we might see paw play. This story is so damn hot
Sora (Night Sky)
2023-09-21 01:00:29 +0000 UTCYou delight me - thank you so much Sora!!!
Amadose
2023-09-21 00:59:38 +0000 UTCThese are amazing lol I'm so excited from this. You're amazing
Sora (Night Sky)
2023-09-21 00:57:17 +0000 UTC
