Fast Pole RE; Night time look!
Added 2021-06-25 20:19:53 +0000 UTCHey higher-tiered friends, take a peek a the images attached, let me know which one looks most pleasing to you! I'm trying to get a nighttime look - tough to do! Also, the backgrounds and text are WIP!
Hoping to post the first two finished pages today or tomorrow =D
Comments
Hmm... B for me, got a bit more color to it, and you can see Judys 'love tunnel' the best ;D Loving the dialog! And do I see a little movement line in the last panel? Naughty boy's already at it!
Fen
2021-06-26 07:32:04 +0000 UTCI like the last panel. I think that's choice C? Love the dialogue though
Retromancer
2021-06-26 06:58:17 +0000 UTCHa thank you, but RIGHT? It's so hard to find the 'best' looook.
Amadose
2021-06-26 03:38:12 +0000 UTCNotes taken! Thanks Andry!
Amadose
2021-06-26 03:37:34 +0000 UTCexactly! Glad you like it so far. The color's current iteration is a bit dark. I'll come back to it tomorrow with a fresh eye.
Amadose
2021-06-26 03:24:28 +0000 UTCI'm late for the vote but I really liked B. A is a bit too muted and C looks a little to antiqued. Also I like removing the "technically," the word feels a little creepy. Like he knows it's wrong but she can't be mad because technically.....
jim
2021-06-26 02:10:51 +0000 UTCDifficult! They are all very good.
Gambit
2021-06-25 22:04:06 +0000 UTCDear Amadose, to my perspective, I think the colors should be a little darker but without losing their color!
Andry SilverFang
2021-06-25 21:41:30 +0000 UTCI'll think about pushing the whites up a bit. Butttt, I worry it makes it lose the overall 'dark evening' if they pop too much! Hard to settle on a look 0_o
Amadose
2021-06-25 20:49:13 +0000 UTCAhhhh wonderful! That makes my day =D
Amadose
2021-06-25 20:48:17 +0000 UTCHoly cow. That was a really hard choice to make, and I’m not entirely sure which I think is best. I genuinely don’t think you can go wrong here but what I can say is that the pictures and dialogue gave me the first spit take of my adult life. Was not prepared for how hot that was.
Rickochet
2021-06-25 20:46:56 +0000 UTCI really dig the more muted colors of (A) for a night time scene, personally i would add some shinies to the cum and eyes of each character to add a pop. Its coming out super well tho! That diolog hmm very nice, although if its going to be alittle darker/muted maybe add a light color outline to make the text pop out a bit more. Thats just imo what ever you do itll be great!
Radicalweegee
2021-06-25 20:40:44 +0000 UTCFiddling with it as I go! originally I had a line in there that said: 'Mm-Hmm! Though, technically, it’s still our first fuck. I’ve been in you all this time." To sort of allow a sort of grey; 'it's ok we're doing this while Nick is asleep' but the word 'technically' is so sterile!
Amadose
2021-06-25 20:32:46 +0000 UTCPictures I'm looking at for Ref: https://e621.net/posts/2716928 https://e621.net/posts/2771643
Amadose
2021-06-25 20:26:08 +0000 UTCNo Owen butt 0 stars
Tigerchris
2021-06-25 20:24:55 +0000 UTCOwO OwO
Andry SilverFang
2021-06-25 20:24:09 +0000 UTCThat is some hot dialog
Addlestone
2021-06-25 20:23:32 +0000 UTC
