Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 13-16 (Pencils Done)
Added 2021-05-02 18:17:42 +0000 UTCI kept working on the pencils! Feeling really happy with the updates and changes. Let me know what you all think =D
Really changed up how I wanted to do the last page. I wanted to add in a kiss and a hero panel. While I loved the slowly pulling-out-camera, that showed the same side-ways angle over 3 panels, I just felt like it was visually boring, and only serving the final reveal (that Nick's awake). With the updates, now the page is filled with fun stuff, and the focus is on Judy and Owen, with the reveal still nice and clear on the final page.
really feeling proud of a lot of the faces I got drawn up this time around. Might still tweak the 2nd page, 2nd panel Judy face - that angle is just SO hard to pull off, and might need to be redrawn again (for like the 10th time =/), I'll see how it washes out when I ink it.
After some chat and thought from the monthly vote and higher-tier backers (thank you fam!) - I think the text is going to be a little more 'in the moment' and not as aggressive as I had made it earlier (with Owen asking Judy to spend the weekend at his), it just wasn't meshing with the whole 'this is their first-time' vibe. Also wanted to get a word balloon in there where Owen checks in for some consent to keep going!
Onward and upward. Time to get inking Amadose =D
Links:
Previous wip pencils (see how I changed them up!)
Finished 1-4 , 5-6 , 7-8 , 9-12
Layouts/basic script for the chapter
Higher tiers are always invited to send me questions (in private or as a comment) for the in-between-chapter QnA's! But I'm always game to answer questions for any tier outside of the QnA too.
Comments
Thanks bud! Slow going atm, but seeing progress every day =D
Amadose
2021-05-07 17:23:23 +0000 UTCBig dicks, big licks. Digging the close ups and the posing on the last page. Looking forward to the next phase.
Rickochet
2021-05-07 13:03:38 +0000 UTCAw thanks bud! Yeah meeee tooooo. It's always fun doing that final text pass =D
Amadose
2021-05-05 17:34:35 +0000 UTCCan't wait for the dialogue reveal! I really enjoyed what you had written before, so I'm sure the new stuff will be plenty good as well :)
Rufus The Rat
2021-05-04 22:20:12 +0000 UTCRight? Kissing is so intimate =D
Amadose
2021-05-03 04:45:35 +0000 UTCOf course! I want all three to be happy.
Amadose
2021-05-03 04:45:20 +0000 UTCI don't know why but that kiss feels so scandalous. I know that doesn't make sense after he fucked her. But for some reason it does.
jim
2021-05-03 02:20:39 +0000 UTCI CANT WAIT...hehehehehe
Tigerchris
2021-05-03 01:25:34 +0000 UTCawww, I just hope they won't exclude Nick too much, he is a nice guy, and even if he doesn't deserve some Judy pussy, he deserves all the love!
Akataja
2021-05-02 23:12:25 +0000 UTCRight? I really want to write all kinds of dirty things, but in reality, it's their first time and it would be lower-key. More bodily. I hope I do it justice when I rewrite it propperly.
Amadose
2021-05-02 22:49:19 +0000 UTCAw heck thank you
Amadose
2021-05-02 22:48:15 +0000 UTCyour expression work is so fantastic. I like the small direction shift to in the moment as opposed to jumping in to "stay at my place." It's juat a really nice touch that adds some realism that makes it...I dunno how to describe it. Takes it beyond smut. I really like it
Mikey
2021-05-02 21:51:39 +0000 UTCLoved the new angles in the last page! Specially the first and second pose, you can really see Owen’s thickness XD Even though she couldn’t handle his knot yet (and I don’t blame her, Owen has a fricking wolf dick lol) what she took so far is impressive lol Judy is pretty good
Tay
2021-05-02 21:19:08 +0000 UTCRight? Pretty please with some of them as well!
Amadose
2021-05-02 20:39:31 +0000 UTCNo Knot taking happening in this chapter, sorry if it wasn't clear (I know the pencils are noisy). Saving that for the next chapter.
Amadose
2021-05-02 20:39:14 +0000 UTCAw thanks! I don't see it - but she doesn't kick anyone! The only paws on the page are Nicks on panel 3?
Amadose
2021-05-02 20:37:53 +0000 UTCLove Judy's faces XD
Kadath
2021-05-02 20:33:28 +0000 UTCShe managed to take her knot?! Or Owen forced her to take it uwu I love El toro's face when he knotted it, it's so.... Special! Maybe Judy should have a similar reaction to this. Good job! We'll keep waiting for you
Andry SilverFang
2021-05-02 19:41:56 +0000 UTCLooks and sounds great! The mating press... just... *chefkiss* Also on page 14... is... is she kicking one of the foxes in the muzzle?
Fen
2021-05-02 19:08:30 +0000 UTC
