Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 9-12 (Finished)
Added 2021-04-07 20:58:20 +0000 UTCEDIT - updated the last page to have more Nick text, to make it clear he's been a good boy, and done as he's been told (blown his load into the toy) ;D
Aw yeah, two more pages DONE! (and a typo on an earlier page fixed!)
Pretty pleased with how this came out! I hope you like them, friends!
I'll attach all the finished pages for the chapter too!
Hopefully in the next few days, I'll have you all some 'single panels' of these pages, and then I'll start work on the pencils for the last four pages for the chapter! I'm pretty nervous tbh; penciling is always the hardest step for me.
If you are here for JUST finished pages - this is your heads up that you can bail from the Patreon for a few months! It usually takes me a while to get the pages done, so feel free to disappear for a while (guilt-free), and drop back in later down the road (make use of Patreons 'Follow' button!)
I'll be thinking a bit on the QnA chapter script too. So if your a higher tier Patreon, feel free to hit me up with any questions to make use of.
Links:
The refined flats of these pages.
Pencils (and text) of these pages
Layouts/basic script for the chapter
The help-steer-the-ship-Vote is currently happening (for higher tiers), this time we're voting on Nicks-sexuality!
Higher tiers are always invited to send me questions (in private or as a comment) for the in-between-chapter QnA's! But I'm always game to answer questions for any tier outside of the QnA too.
Comments
Aw thanks Ryo! I'm excited too =D
Amadose
2021-04-08 21:34:36 +0000 UTCI love interactions like this. A steady group dynamic with the Bunny still having most of the control. Can’t wait to see where you go from here.
Ryo
2021-04-08 20:20:51 +0000 UTCWOO INTERNET BACK SO I CAN SEE THE GREAT NESS
Tigerchris
2021-04-08 13:57:06 +0000 UTCOh gosh - absolutely. I hate the idea of anyone sitting here paying month to month just for the finished pages when I know it takes a ton of time and multiple months to do! I see Patreon as a way to engage with you guys and a way for you guys to keep me in the coffees. Support me as much or as little as you all like, no stress =)
Amadose
2021-04-08 05:44:07 +0000 UTCMe too! I love getting to come back to the script, especially after so many monthly votes. It gives me a real 'I want to push this angle a bit more' vibe. The last three pages of text might change the most? I wasn't in love with my first draft. I'm not truely sure what I want Owen and Judys convo to look like. It'll develop as I go =)
Amadose
2021-04-08 05:38:42 +0000 UTCMurrrrr! Well, you know I'm not going anywhere. I love that you specify that people can pause while you work on new material, though. Especially as times are tough for so many and they might need to balance their finances against their thirst for high quality cuckolding art. ❤
AngelOD
2021-04-08 05:38:13 +0000 UTCI really like how you do more refinements in the dialogue as you go along. I like the "just having a normal one" line as is. I love the Ha! after that, and the insatiable wife line, and the Y-yes sir! That one was the best. A nice little signal from Nick to Owen...
Retromancer
2021-04-08 05:26:48 +0000 UTCHa thanks, Fen! I was wondering I should make it clearer in that dialogue that he's tied n cumming into the toy?
Amadose
2021-04-08 04:42:13 +0000 UTCAh he's supposed to be tied and cuming into the toy - I see now that's not exactly clear, after some text changes... Maybe I should change his text to 'Oh you know. Cumming into a toy, regular stuff.'
Amadose
2021-04-08 04:41:20 +0000 UTCHas Nick not cum yet, or does he just not get a panel showing it?
Arvetis
2021-04-08 04:04:34 +0000 UTCDamn I love this! Your art is amazing as per usual! ;D Also enjoying the littel dialogue changes! "You know, having a normal one." Just perfect! <3
Fen
2021-04-08 04:00:25 +0000 UTCLove it - thank you Rickochet!
Amadose
2021-04-08 03:22:57 +0000 UTCHeck yeaaaah. Drinking in all those adorable judy faces in glorious color. Knocking it out of the park.
Rickochet
2021-04-08 03:19:30 +0000 UTCThanks, Kad!!!
Amadose
2021-04-07 22:37:55 +0000 UTCOpps! Fixed!
Amadose
2021-04-07 22:37:43 +0000 UTCSuch a hot comic :B
Kadath
2021-04-07 22:16:43 +0000 UTCcan you add jpg links?
rasswar
2021-04-07 21:57:17 +0000 UTCHells bells, thank you Mikey!!! I love knowing you're seeing it all and enjoying it =D
Amadose
2021-04-07 21:31:04 +0000 UTCgod this is amazing, I love looking for all the little details I couldn't see before. You put so much work in to this and it shows. Amazing job!
Mikey
2021-04-07 21:27:03 +0000 UTCThank you so much bud! Means a whole lot!
Amadose
2021-04-07 21:08:05 +0000 UTCThanks, Andry! Pretty pleased with how they turned out!
Amadose
2021-04-07 21:07:50 +0000 UTCOmg these are amazing... I can't wait to see more of what they get up to. So erotic and sexy af
A Mad Man with a Box
2021-04-07 21:03:35 +0000 UTCOh my goodness! I've been waiting for you for days! ❤️ Good job!! ✨
Andry SilverFang
2021-04-07 20:59:35 +0000 UTC
