Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 5-8 (pencils)
Added 2020-12-12 22:00:01 +0000 UTCLinks:
These are pages 5-8, pencils:
Gotta say a lot of this I want to rework as I go. Some of these faces are wonky and that final close up... I'm not so sure. I want to show some balls all clenched up but that's tough to show! I might tweak it all over the next few days before I dive into inks - so let me know if anything looks especially weirdsies. There's a part of me that's daunted by the success of the first 4 pages - that starting here again at the pencils stage, just feels scary ha.
Comments
It just looks amazing! I can't wait to see the hardcore chapter of this comics!
sms
2020-12-13 10:13:57 +0000 UTCAmazing work. Everything about this is perfect. The sex scenes themselves, the pred-prey play, those big ass balls and how Nick looks, especially in the first panel, ready to dig in.... mmmfh <3<3<3 The only sloppy seconds that adorable little cucky should get are the creampies for dinner <3
Fen
2020-12-13 08:46:09 +0000 UTCOof yeah. That's gotta be hard/amazing to see.
Amadose
2020-12-13 08:45:11 +0000 UTCHaha, I really want the toy to seem like it's on its last legs - I'm too mean ha. Really glad the muscles work for you too! I tried to focus on just making his arms more angular and toned - I think it worked!
Amadose
2020-12-13 08:44:43 +0000 UTCRight? A small little reminder like that is so dang hot.
Amadose
2020-12-13 08:43:09 +0000 UTCyeah! I wanted to give it a slightly sinister/topping moment =D Glad it works!
Amadose
2020-12-13 08:42:29 +0000 UTCI wonder how nick feels watching Owen bite Judy? Seeing another fox mark her in that way. Great work I look forward to more.
jim
2020-12-13 04:46:11 +0000 UTCOhh this is so great! I loved how you now made Owen pretty buff, look at the size of his arms compared to Nick! He is the real big Bull! hahaha can’t wait to see him using all his size and strength to humiliate Nick (maybe an arm wrestle in the future? lol) I’m loving how this is turning out! Also that toy, Owen is pretty big I think he left it too stretched to Nick to use it properly hahahaha thanks for this great comic :)
Tay
2020-12-13 03:21:51 +0000 UTCReally love the angles here. The last bit from Nick about having a turn and getting denied is a wonderful touch. Kind of brings you back to the reality that this really isn't a threesome, this is cuckolding. That sudden bubble burst makes it all the more hot.
Mikey
2020-12-12 23:52:29 +0000 UTCMmmnf! Fuck.. This is soooo hot! ❤
AngelOD
2020-12-12 23:19:46 +0000 UTCOooo, that maw shot addition and bite are wonderful. Good to see the “predator/prey” angle getting some play. Definitely love how Owens character is taking spotlight in the scene. I think it’s looking very nice.
Rickochet
2020-12-12 22:56:58 +0000 UTCThat's it exactly! I wanted Nick in the scene a bit so I've got Owen giving him a lil Wap with his tail. See what you mean about Nick floating about around a bit. Not sure if I'll remedy that or not...
Amadose
2020-12-12 22:31:37 +0000 UTChahaha yesss. =D
Amadose
2020-12-12 22:30:11 +0000 UTClooks good sofar, the only quirk i see is the changing angles, especially with nick moving to the bag, from the other cells it feels like he is on the wrong side, love the maw shot and the chomp, not sure what the wap in the first panel is from but amuses me thinking its Owen's tail wapping Nick in the nose
ocaron
2020-12-12 22:13:27 +0000 UTCPage 6, bottom left panel: Judy died doing what she loved most XD
Kadath
2020-12-12 22:06:44 +0000 UTC🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
Danielfox
2020-12-12 22:05:29 +0000 UTCOh my I can't wait to see this in color...hehrhe though those sheets they look...intact XD
Tigerchris
2020-12-12 22:02:22 +0000 UTC
