Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 1-4 Pencils
Added 2020-11-02 22:18:53 +0000 UTCExcited to share these!
There's stuff to iron out, but I think I'm ready to start on some inks! Hopefully, you like how it's looking so far? Some of these panels I'm like 'yesssss this is awesome' and others I feel are super weak-sauce. So I dunno. We'll see how the inking goes!
Still playing catchup over here after all the crunch at work. Hopppping to have inks done in another week, but we'llll see.
If you're in the US - don't forget to vote <3
Comments
haha jeez =D
Amadose
2020-11-04 17:02:32 +0000 UTClooks great,love the intensity of owen.personally id like to see a nice firm pinning into a half nelson while shes letting nick know who her bull is followed by a hot mouth hooking about half way through the sentence >:)
sunna
2020-11-04 02:52:42 +0000 UTCHmmm! I figured I would re-work the script as I went, especially in the last few pages of the chapter. Maybe I can work in a small jab to their size difference there for ya!
Amadose
2020-11-03 18:45:37 +0000 UTCIt’s looking really good, I love the facial expressions! I wish Owen would humiliate Nick a bit by comparing their sizes in the last panel there, maybe in the future hahaha xD Great work!
Tay
2020-11-03 14:36:01 +0000 UTCOhh this gonna be sooo good! Particularly the first page is just perfect for me. Getting rutted by her bull while making out with her little hubby, then putting him in his place for a while and really showing him who’s boss, only to let him cuddle and spoon later on, and repeat. This is gonna be the best porn comic ever <3 <3 <3
Fen
2020-11-03 08:45:15 +0000 UTCOH MY GOD. SO GOOD. i dont got words. other then "WANT MORE"
Tigerchris
2020-11-03 04:13:45 +0000 UTCOh yeah, ignore the couch note. Everything happens on the bed now!
Amadose
2020-11-03 04:03:26 +0000 UTC!!! They Are?!? Haha, I struggled so hard with them and felt super let down with the end results - allways TOO MANY FLAPS. I ended up having to rely on a bunch of photos for reference. So glad they are working for you =D
Amadose
2020-11-03 04:02:09 +0000 UTCI don't quite get page 4. If Nick and Judy were on a couch, did Owen and Judy end up on a bed? The floor? Kicking off a couch and landing back first on the floor doesn't seem super sexy to me. But then, porn logic. Judy's expressions in this are awesome, especially panel 3 of Page 2.
Retromancer
2020-11-03 03:31:06 +0000 UTCWow, those penetrations shots are exquisite!
Kadath
2020-11-03 02:24:43 +0000 UTCIn the panel where Owen is pulling Judy back, I love the foot being shown to Nick, as if his proper place in life is groveling at his feeet
Mikey
2020-11-03 01:29:03 +0000 UTC'yesssss this is awesome' my thoughts exactly.
Summer love
2020-11-02 22:58:50 +0000 UTCHaha, well you called out all of my fav panels as well =D
Amadose
2020-11-02 22:48:35 +0000 UTCOh dear, where to begin. The expressions remain top shelf, especially the ones in page 3. Page 4 has that great shot on panel 1, showing off the proportional size difference between Judy and Owen. Big fan of the last panel in page 2 with all 3 of them together. Very complicated posing between them and it looks good. Not sure where the weak panels are, they’re coming out great.
Rickochet
2020-11-02 22:29:32 +0000 UTChahaha you got a legit lol out of me. love it.
Amadose
2020-11-02 22:28:24 +0000 UTCJudy's expressions are priceless, not in the US but I would vote for Owen
ocaron
2020-11-02 22:27:09 +0000 UTCAw thanks! I hope it comes across as playful and fun for all three of them!
Amadose
2020-11-02 22:25:18 +0000 UTCSqueals can't wait to see the real thing and will torture myself by waiting till i get home to read these hehehe
Tigerchris
2020-11-02 22:22:39 +0000 UTCMmm very sexy 🥰 I can feel their loving relationship getting shoved aside by Owen and it turns me on so much! 🍆 Great work!
Addlestone
2020-11-02 22:22:38 +0000 UTC
