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Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 1-4 Pencils

Excited to share these! 

There's stuff to iron out, but I think I'm ready to start on some inks! Hopefully, you like how it's looking so far? Some of these panels I'm like 'yesssss this is awesome' and others I feel are super weak-sauce. So I dunno. We'll see how the inking goes!

Still playing catchup over here after all the crunch at work. Hopppping to have inks done in another week, but we'llll see. 

If you're in the US - don't forget to vote <3

Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 1-4 Pencils Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 1-4 Pencils Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 1-4 Pencils Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 1-4 Pencils

Comments

haha jeez =D

Amadose

looks great,love the intensity of owen.personally id like to see a nice firm pinning into a half nelson while shes letting nick know who her bull is followed by a hot mouth hooking about half way through the sentence >:)

sunna

Hmmm! I figured I would re-work the script as I went, especially in the last few pages of the chapter. Maybe I can work in a small jab to their size difference there for ya!

Amadose

It’s looking really good, I love the facial expressions! I wish Owen would humiliate Nick a bit by comparing their sizes in the last panel there, maybe in the future hahaha xD Great work!

Tay

Ohh this gonna be sooo good! Particularly the first page is just perfect for me. Getting rutted by her bull while making out with her little hubby, then putting him in his place for a while and really showing him who’s boss, only to let him cuddle and spoon later on, and repeat. This is gonna be the best porn comic ever &lt;3 &lt;3 &lt;3

Fen

OH MY GOD. SO GOOD. i dont got words. other then "WANT MORE"

Tigerchris

Oh yeah, ignore the couch note. Everything happens on the bed now!

Amadose

!!! They Are?!? Haha, I struggled so hard with them and felt super let down with the end results - allways TOO MANY FLAPS. I ended up having to rely on a bunch of photos for reference. So glad they are working for you =D

Amadose

I don't quite get page 4. If Nick and Judy were on a couch, did Owen and Judy end up on a bed? The floor? Kicking off a couch and landing back first on the floor doesn't seem super sexy to me. But then, porn logic. Judy's expressions in this are awesome, especially panel 3 of Page 2.

Retromancer

Wow, those penetrations shots are exquisite!

Kadath

In the panel where Owen is pulling Judy back, I love the foot being shown to Nick, as if his proper place in life is groveling at his feeet

Mikey

'yesssss this is awesome' my thoughts exactly.

Summer love

Haha, well you called out all of my fav panels as well =D

Amadose

Oh dear, where to begin. The expressions remain top shelf, especially the ones in page 3. Page 4 has that great shot on panel 1, showing off the proportional size difference between Judy and Owen. Big fan of the last panel in page 2 with all 3 of them together. Very complicated posing between them and it looks good. Not sure where the weak panels are, they’re coming out great.

Rickochet

hahaha you got a legit lol out of me. love it.

Amadose

Judy's expressions are priceless, not in the US but I would vote for Owen

ocaron

Aw thanks! I hope it comes across as playful and fun for all three of them!

Amadose

Squeals can't wait to see the real thing and will torture myself by waiting till i get home to read these hehehe

Tigerchris

Mmm very sexy 🥰 I can feel their loving relationship getting shoved aside by Owen and it turns me on so much! 🍆 Great work!

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