Chapter 4 - I'll Have a Double - Page 10
Added 2020-08-19 17:31:28 +0000 UTCDang, I had fun with this one.
I hope you all enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it. It's WAY too dirty =D
This one almost feels like practice for the next horny-chapter. Lots of sex and closeups and very little background work. A different flavor. I tried to channel some Meesh and generic-hentai - by having a sort of no-borders approach to the layout. Lots of floating sex characters and balloons as borders!
Fallen a bit behind this past two weeks - the 9-5 has been a little more intense, and crunchy. So I haven't' been able to put in the hours for that final page yet. Hoping to find some time this weekend and next week for it. Fingers crossed!
In the meantime, I've been having some fun thinking up some QnA answers! Its been sort of hard but good? Forcing me to come up with answers and world build things out a bit. The hard part for me is trying to make sure the characters still ring true and correct. SO I've been going back and forth on a lot of the text. It's hard to write a sly and snappy cucking fox. Hopefully, I'll have something to show on that front in the few weeks too.
Keep on keeping on friends. Sending you all feel-good vibes <3
Comments
=D Thank youuuu - so glad your enjoying it!
Amadose
2020-08-22 21:10:09 +0000 UTCYou're right about this being way too dirty and I love it. Nick already being so eager to lean in to Owen's ideas and the way Judy teases him about it is delicious!
Figglestaff
2020-08-22 06:19:40 +0000 UTCOoo, maybe try a little zip for those longer stories? I feel like my 10 page chapters just about fit if I attach each page. But for your epics just toss in an up-too-date zip! Thank you for this lovely comment, it put such a smile on my face this morning. I really want it all to feel loving. Even if shes fucking Owen in the future, or being 'mean' and 'teasing' Nick, I want people to know that he can call time out at any time. One of my chapter ideas (I think I called it Cuckold Angst) was going to be all about just that: Nick brings up some worries and needing some care. A little chapter with Judy just giving him attention. It's not gotten many votes - but I'm keen to explore it in a few chapters time.
Amadose
2020-08-20 16:24:54 +0000 UTCCan't wait for last page and next part!
rasswar
2020-08-20 07:59:03 +0000 UTCOne of the things I just realized that you do that is Brilliant is attach every page of the comic thus far to the post! I really need to do that to make my stuff more accessible! Lol on my patreon.com/klink page I got a comic Dreams of Pink + Beach Daze (one continuous story between the two) that's gotta be 200 pages at this point and I've been trying to figure out how to make it more accessible to new comers rather than scroll through all of patreon to find the 10+ pages that haven't been released to the public at the very least. On the comic page itself, the writing is just wonderfully balanced. You can feel that they love each other, that she doesn't want to hurt him. The threat that he may never feel his wife again raw really is an erotic note to him, but there's something there that feels like if Nick really needed that. That if he was run down and specifically needed his bunny that day as a normal guy Judy would tell her bull what's happening. It's really a different note than a lot of cuckold thematics in which the cuck is beaten down by wife and bull. Here you really see that anything that comes is just pure play :).
Bucked!
2020-08-20 03:22:57 +0000 UTCThanks, bud, its a constant trial and error kind of thing. I feel like I could do so much better 0_0
Amadose
2020-08-20 01:08:58 +0000 UTChaha, thanks for the encouragement! I gotta find that right mix of dirty and real!
Amadose
2020-08-20 01:08:01 +0000 UTC=D I wanted it to feel, almost painfully for him to say out loud =D I'm glad he found the confidence to ask for what he wants!
Amadose
2020-08-20 01:07:15 +0000 UTCThe expressions always look lovely. Digging it.
Rickochet
2020-08-19 22:06:57 +0000 UTCI hope you are having as much fun making these as I am while reading them, great art and exceptional writing, but I disagree,it isn't too dirty
ocaron
2020-08-19 21:20:12 +0000 UTCI feeling then the tension in his words and expression. So damn good ^^
Zyfer Kazumi
2020-08-19 21:10:07 +0000 UTCGosh, thank you!!! Yeah, meeee too. But for the QnA where it's just him and Judy for the moment, I want him to have a bit of his sass back =D Only sort-of shy away when people ask him cucky questions. I dunno, still figuring it out.
Amadose
2020-08-19 18:22:01 +0000 UTCAnother amazing page. โค And about the last bit, I find it really hot when Nick deviates from his foxish nature while Owen is clearly ALL fox. ๐
AngelOD
2020-08-19 18:00:51 +0000 UTCAw thank you bud, I love it when you comment =D
Amadose
2020-08-19 17:41:33 +0000 UTConce again i squealed. this makes me so eager for the "good" stuff to start...granted my favorite chapter was three lol. now i know how i will spend my vacation tomorrow and Friday...hehehehe. writing XD. well that is when im not painting my room.
Tigerchris
2020-08-19 17:38:31 +0000 UTChttps://i.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/034/578/Invest_Button_Banner.jpg =D
Amadose
2020-08-19 17:38:09 +0000 UTCthis is amazing. so many buttons pressed
Mikey
2020-08-19 17:35:06 +0000 UTC
