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[Early Access] Take Off S2 Ch.105 "The Missing Piece" (PART 1)

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Chapter 105 is long so it's been split in half! I've been nervous about this one because I know it's something that pays off much later on in the story... TuT I just hope it makes sense for now and that it's still enjoyable...!

Thank you all for the support as always❤️

[Early Access] Take Off S2 Ch.105 "The Missing Piece" (PART 1)

Comments

NOT THE CLIFFHANGER😭😭

mcx choochoo

No!!!! i started today n got cliffhanged today 😫😫😫 this puppy needs to stop the lies.

Yeom Bumz

“What’s in the room! WHAT’S IN THE ROOM!!” **Brad Pitt grabbing fists full of hair**

Shortpockets

NO NURSE DONT GO IN THERE😱

lilraspbud

THE CLIFFHANGER OMG

persophonebae

That was soooo gross.... I loved it!

julia sanchez

That was a brutal cliffhanger

Coraline

There’s nothing to be embarrassed about it!! It was very minor and totally understand the pizza thing XDD I rly truly appreciate all your comments regardless💕🫶

jui

It was probably a mix of factors: me reading very early in the morning; my affinity with Andrew (I see myself a lot in his doubts and behavior); I'm Italian (I know it's a terrible thing to say, but by culture we "ignore" pizza outside the national territory 😆). I'm very embarrassed by this. 😶‍🌫️ As already said, the story kept me in suspense and I can't wait to see how it ends!

Valeria Miceli

Ahh pls don’t worry!! No need to apologize!! I guess love just leaves a stronger impression! ☺️

jui

Aaaaaaarghhhhhh! I went to reread it: I don't know why the class scene remained in my head and not the group meeting! I apologize for the error!

Valeria Miceli

In chapter 91 (or might've been 92), Andrew does bring up pizza as the idea he has for the film project!!👍 :>

jui

Pulling my hair right now

🤍Dooshik

WHAT IS THAT CLIFFHANGER AHHH 😭😭

MysteryGaming101

Nooooooo a cliffhanger!!! what happened next?! 😭😭😭

You ended the episode there!!! What did the nurse see?!?!?!

Love

Noooo you can't leave it like this!!!

Danyell Jones

THIS CLIFFHANGER IS GOING TO KILL ME!!!! Well done, Jui!

Lacey Rogers

A cliffhanger about a made up story inside a made up story with characters we just met. And I’m still so mad! 😂

Serendipity

I usually dislike cliche horror, but this had me like, "no...she did NOT just stop right there." Gaaaaaaaarrrrrrggggghh. Good job

TheRealSnickers

It’s an hallucination and he was actually eating parts of his head !!!!! 😱 I’m certain !!!!

Clo

Nooooo! Why must you do these things to me?! Agrhhhhjj!😫😫

Cat

giving "pizzaface" a whole new meaning

Cloudedskiez

YES! the tension made me sit on to read! I'm so invested aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

loremipsum19

NOOOOOO I CANT DEAL WITH CLIFFHANGERSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!

loremipsum19

AND WHAT???? AND WHAT AAAAAAH Jui you monster! The tension and build up was SO good, I'm hooked and also hungry now 🍕

MLini

If I remember correctly the project is about love, not pizza. Although for many pizza=love, this is not the case! 😆

Valeria Miceli

I never thought a story about pizza would had me sitting on edge I need to know what happen! 😖

Tamika

To quote Nathan "Well you can't just stop there!?"! I know you said two parts but ahaaa the cliffhanger 😅 I'm not good with horror but now I need to know more 👀 I love how invested Nathan is (Same here!!) And Andrew is so happy about it 🥺🥰 love the dynamics! Okay so Andrew could narrate stories with ease. And you, Jui could also easily write horror stories 👀 Great first part of the chapter! Jui, Thank you and your Team for the update 💜

Kiki

Probably the cliffhanger that got me the most! And it's about pizza!

Charliie Kreitzer

im just hungry now

He’s making it up?!

AshT

Aaaaaaaahhh! Nooooo! 😱 P.S.: I love that Nathan is so invested in the story and that he listens to it carefully. The fact that Andrew is making it up will get him in trouble later, but for now it's perfect! P.P.S.: cliffhangers are illegal❣️

Valeria Miceli

OMG the cliffhanger TAT

Vina Rathakoune

Nathan and I are so invested in this story

Leslie

This cliffhanger is illegal!!!

Oh my gosh, I'm on the edge of my seat to know what the nurse sees!!! 😬

Agrothia

Oh man I’m on the edge of my seat but in the best way possible!! 😭👏

Bella

I’m reading this before going to bed and I know I’m going to dream about this and end up making my own conclusions about what the nurse sees 😂

kyop31

NOOOOOO LOL. What a cliffhanger

Victoria Ollerhead

Nooooo i must know

Merryl Martin

Oh my gosh! What happens next?! He is a great storyteller.

Pelto

Omg that cliff hanger I’m with Nathan I need to know!!! 😭

VioletDash

I'm just as intrigued as Nathan about Andrew's story 😆

des

NOW IM INTERESTED IN THE STORY UGHH

Brooke Martin

I just wanna say- THank you guys for being as invested as Nathan is lmao TvT🫶

jui

Damn now I'm super invested in what happens to pizza boy next 😂

cha0ticneutral

Omg… I got so hooked into Andrew’s story… I need the next part. Haha

And? I’m hanging at the edge of my seat 😩🤣🤣🤣🤣

Reina J. Ruiz

Lol! Seems like a campy horror story but I’m intrigued! I love how Nathan is genuinely interested and how happy it makes Andrew 🥺🩷

Andie

But like, who doesn't love a good pizza?

Kat V

Excuse me?! And thennn?! What did le nurse see 👀

sekacecir

I need to know about the grease smell asap💀

Samaruo


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