"Sunset Goes to the Beach" (Animation WIP)
Added 2024-09-22 23:03:40 +0000 UTCHey!
I want to introduce you to a new animation I'm working on!
I went crazy after the previous drawing and on Wednesday I started with this idea of making a short anime-style story.
My idea is for it to be a full chapter (that ends in a hentai), and I'd like it to last at least 8 to 10 minutes to develop a short story properly.
"It's something simple. A Sunset, still somewhat disoriented, discovers that humans go to the beach with little clothing, and not being used to always having to go dressed, she takes advantage of this to spend a day relaxing outdoors (although she doesn't seem to fully understand the concept of swimsuits)." From there, a lot of things can happen.
I'm still developing it, so I'll give you previews. I'd like to hear your suggestions!
I did all the drawings/animations, music and editing myself, but also the voice acting, so I'd also like to know if my accent and acting skills are at least decent xD (Sunset's voice was passed through an AI after recording it)
That's all for now, I'll read your opinions!
Comments
Thanks! I use Krita for drawings and animation, and edit everything later with DavinciResolve.
MaxEma
2024-09-23 17:41:54 +0000 UTCThanks!!
MaxEma
2024-09-23 17:38:35 +0000 UTCLooks great! :D
Nicole Sunstone
2024-09-23 14:10:36 +0000 UTCAnything with Sunset in it will sound hot
The Master (Mr.Saxon)
2024-09-23 09:32:03 +0000 UTCThis is great so far! AI sounds funny, but it’s passable for now! May I ask what animation program you are using?
TheAljavis
2024-09-23 02:44:59 +0000 UTCI'll check it out. Also, it's not something I notice right away, I have to step away and refresh my hearing to notice it. So thanks for telling me, I'm glad you like it!!
MaxEma
2024-09-23 01:31:30 +0000 UTCThanks! Yeah, that one is finished. It should be posted around the dates I posted the rough animation.
MaxEma
2024-09-23 01:27:17 +0000 UTCThe rough draft looks good so far. And I agree with TrenchTurtle, I think the AI may be messing with the tones in your voice. Otherwise, great start, can't wait to see the finished product!
Blck Dynomite
2024-09-23 01:06:03 +0000 UTCGlad to help out. I ask cause I've been trying to contact you about a commission back in May.
TrenchTurtle
2024-09-23 00:37:02 +0000 UTCI'm super excited to see it. Quick question: the tentacled Sunset animation, did you finished? I can't se it here on patreon.
HolHorse
2024-09-23 00:33:03 +0000 UTCOhh okay, maybe. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks! No problem. No, I check very little and the days fly by. I'm terrible with messages
MaxEma
2024-09-23 00:23:45 +0000 UTCI believe it's the AI that causing it. Just slight variations in tone at random times. Other than that it's a great start! Also if you don't mind me asking how often do you check your email?
TrenchTurtle
2024-09-22 23:38:50 +0000 UTCCool! I'm glad you like it!
MaxEma
2024-09-22 23:32:49 +0000 UTCBy "stiff" do you mean the pace at which I speak, or something else? Because sometimes I think the AI also modifies my way of speaking a little. I don't really know how it works, I'm still testing it haha but it could also be that I have a harder time speaking in English. Thanks for the comment!
MaxEma
2024-09-22 23:31:46 +0000 UTCI'm super excited
Killumi
2024-09-22 23:16:47 +0000 UTCOverall it's a very good rough. The voice is a little stiff but the acting is pretty spot on. Keep up the good work!
TrenchTurtle
2024-09-22 23:10:41 +0000 UTC
