Just a quick thing. I was looking at this page before I started coloring and realized that Elias's ear on the bottom panel matched the lines from his shirt in the upper panel too closely. Most people might not pay attention to it, but I try to avoid tangents from one panel to the next (unless it's on purpose for effect, I guess).

Same panel, but I offset his ear a bit. I think it reads much better now! (Side note, I always draw hands in that palm up, fingers fanned out position...no idea why other than that it looks more dynamic than just...a hand. Might also be because I talk with my hands a lot, and that's generally the position they end up when I'm making a point lol)