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Corruption of a Geek Goddess Pt. 9

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I did the opposite and read the comments before the chapter itself, and based on the comments, I was expecting some kind of cuckold horror instead of the ending. As a result, I got a well-written sex scene, and I didn't notice anything especially harsh in it. I also don't see any particular cruelty towards Mark in it; judging by his reaction, he's more than happy with it. The problem with Chelsea and Mark, and the reason why I don't see a happy ending for them, is not Mark's cuckold fetish and Chelsea's uncontrollable sexual desire for other cocks; they could complement each other well in that regard. The problem is that Chelsea is a lying, manipulative bitch who doesn't consider Mark a partner worthy of discussing her life plans with, and manipulates him throughout the story, without changing a bit about it in the finale. That's why I think her picture of life with Mark is a pipe dream and their family life will fall apart after a while, regardless of Dylan.

Noam

This chapter is amazing. The sex scene is incredible and I think the ending sticks the landing - although IMO Chelsea is clearly fooling herself, which makes perfect sense. There are a couple of aspects that I wanted to note for you: 1. The public humiliation nature of Dylan's involvement in their streaming career. It was a great hook at the beginning, and revisiting somewhere later in the narrative would have paid that promise off for me a little. 2. Ripping the wedding dress was cataclysmically hot. FUUUCK. 3. It's really mean to Mark. I love it. I will say, it's mean enough that I expected a mean ending. I'll also say, as a huge fan of cruelty to cucks, you worried me with the 'Chelsea has a plan' cliffhanger at the end of CH8. Worried me in the best way. Thanks for the story, it's absolutely S-Tier for me!

Badlulu