Maid New: Redux
Added 2023-09-21 21:06:47 +0000 UTC
Here it is! The updated, corrected, and expanded version of Maid New.
A few things to help navigate:
- Grammatical errors, typos, name mix-ups, etc. have all been corrected.
- Formatting throughout has been redone (Cleaner sentences, paragraphs, etc.)
- Chapter 1 is now combined with the previous Chapter 2.
- Chapter 5 is a completely new scene.
- All chapters contain added mental dialogue for added effect.
- Several scenes are expanded. To name a few: Amanda's first encounter with Bill, Hannah's party, Amanda's meeting with her new landlord... There are others mixed in as well. Every chapter has a little something new.
- The "ONE YEAR LATER" from the previous version's Chapter 9 has been moved to the Epilogue, which also has added details to better connect with Trading Spaces.
I hope you all like this version (formatted as an e-book as well!). As I mentioned in my previous post, I'm putting this new version on SmashWords but giving it to all Patreon subscribers.
Thanks for reading!
-Yazzers
Comments
Thanks for the feedback! While the sequels have followed Candice to new crops of victims, I’ve considered doing a straight forward sequel that sees Candice return to the cast of characters from Maid New to further transform their lives. If there’s interest, I’ll definitely do it in the future.
Yazzers
2024-01-29 20:15:30 +0000 UTCSo glad I've rediscovered this, after initially reading it on Changing Mirror. Love this piece. Would personally love an expansion on Gina and Hannah's circumstances.
gdRios24
2024-01-29 19:17:01 +0000 UTC
