Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 24 part 2)
Added 2024-10-16 00:29:00 +0000 UTCNew part, guys! :)
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I just went back and read "This is job for a Milf," which I had stashed away quite a while ago. It's delightful to see how both your artistic and story telling skills have developed since then. You have blossomed. And it's great to see how you took an earlier idea and developed it into a full-blown, novel length story with a voluptuous heroine with rich settings and backgrounds. Greatstuff!
David P Friedman
2024-10-28 03:12:00 +0000 UTCGood ideas, my friend! I'll see if I can do something like that in the future! :)
Melissa N.
2024-10-21 02:34:26 +0000 UTCGood point, too :)
Melissa N.
2024-10-21 02:31:07 +0000 UTCWe'll see, Bobbie :)
Melissa N.
2024-10-21 02:30:47 +0000 UTCMaybe...
Melissa N.
2024-10-21 02:28:36 +0000 UTCWe'll see :)
Melissa N.
2024-10-21 02:28:23 +0000 UTC:)
Melissa N.
2024-10-21 02:28:11 +0000 UTChehe
Melissa N.
2024-10-21 02:28:04 +0000 UTCElenaβ¦ so very sophisticated and feminine. You know, since she lives in Greek and was at the pool at least onceβ¦ wouldnβt some tan lines show? Also, her new pussy is so almost hairfree - it variesβ¦ however, a scene of Elena grooming herself would be nice π Marina is probably a victim herselfβ¦ the scene with the inspector looked too much like Elenas Scene with Nikos. Who knows? Was Marina always a woman?
Asmodeean
2024-10-19 10:05:59 +0000 UTCMarina did not drug Elena, the strange woman did. "Called her myself and explained it all," could have been an imposter. Marina was called away from the surgeon's office unexpectedly. If she were the mastermind, she would have stayed behind and made sure everything went according to plan.
bouncybubbly
2024-10-17 11:18:39 +0000 UTCwhat about her 'daughters' tho, are they in? really support new Elena?
LC
2024-10-17 04:17:48 +0000 UTCShe arranged it as revenge for blowing their savings on that career move. Part of the reason she's so pissed is that he wasn't supposed to be happy after it. Marina seems to have realized she got in a bit too deep and wants to cut loose with the new guy she's calling her husband too.
Tajuh
2024-10-16 19:39:30 +0000 UTCI can't help feeling there is an outstanding and ground-breaking story hidden somewhere within "Mirror". The impact on Andrew of this unplanned, narferious and utterly comprehensive transformation should be shuddering and vast. Yet like him, I somehow feel we missed it. It being drip-fed in such a long-winded and seemingly ill-logical manner, I fear it lost much of it's punch a long time ago. Hopefully I'm wrong. That being said, I'm optimistic for the end. If Marina is responsible I hope at some point we get to see her confronting Andrew. Towering over him, mocking him for his stolen height, his stolen youth and his stolen masculinity. Revelling how 'he' enabled them to trap him within this now delicate, voluptuous and feminine body, against his wishes. Gloating that 'she' is now irrevocably female. Forever forcing her to into the life of the middle-aged woman, wife and mother he was previously only pretending to be. β€
Bobbie
2024-10-16 18:34:12 +0000 UTCShe swinged too hard and got "hit back" with double edged axe called "furious revenge"
Maggie Heels
2024-10-16 06:25:46 +0000 UTCMarina arranged EVERYTHING because of reasons... and that explains her outrage seeing how happy Elena is now being pleasured with Nikos "equipment"...
Maggie Heels
2024-10-16 06:21:24 +0000 UTCSo my instincts from the getgo about Marina are seemingly correct, there was always something off about her all along, her actions continuously strange for a woman supposedly in love with her new husband yet abandoning him when most needed......
Alison St John
2024-10-16 05:19:08 +0000 UTCThere lies the rub.
Matthew
2024-10-16 00:59:18 +0000 UTCThanks, Marina.
Charlie
2024-10-16 00:38:51 +0000 UTC
