on the road - 5
Added 2024-07-09 19:05:27 +0000 UTCpage 5 already!
I'll have to get back to writing this comic, I have more pages thumbnailed and written, but I am gonna write myself in a corner if I don't do a second pass XD and I see the exclusive on the horizon, so I will start early with writing.
I do know where the story is heading, just not how the dialogue gets me there yet.
so... I'll see you all after I have written and sketched a few more things! X)
find the comic over here for easier reading: Drive Link
Comments
We (the total dorks of the world) stan a total dork
Manigeitora
2024-07-10 07:41:22 +0000 UTCWow I didn't know you were a Dutch artist! Op het moment leer ik Nederlands in een taalcursus aan de universiteit. Ik hou van de klank van de taal en de leuke mensen. Ik vind het echt geweldig dat mijn favoriete artiest uit Nederland komt. 😊 Bedankt voor je prachtige werk en hartelijke groeten uit Duitsland! 🧡
Vostoros
2024-07-09 23:18:35 +0000 UTC"Babe wake up, Funkybun just posted"
Dingus
2024-07-09 22:55:16 +0000 UTCYeah, 'camp' is the casual / non-formal version of 'campsite' and 'campground'
Dohyden
2024-07-09 22:25:27 +0000 UTCCampground is fine, i see that on road signs here in California
Todd Whitesel
2024-07-09 22:19:21 +0000 UTCSorry I over explained. That's interesting that it's the actual word and not just the common mix up of "thing word" vs "action word" which i've seen a lot in my years
Dohyden
2024-07-09 21:37:46 +0000 UTCwell it's not so much that I'm confused about how english works. it's just that the dutch word is litterally "camping" for a campsite, so that's just so ingrained in my mind that it feels wrong to deviate XD. but yeah campsite is what im looking for
Funkybun
2024-07-09 21:34:57 +0000 UTCEnglish is such a screwy language I know. Like, you go for a drive not a driving, you go for a swim not a swimming. Camp is a noun... Camping is also a noun... Gosh I hate my language sometimes. It means you have places like "Camp Redwood" or "Totara Camp Site" places you go for camping. So you go to a camp to do some camping
Dohyden
2024-07-09 21:31:15 +0000 UTCoh really? I guess yeah camping is dutch for camp grounds then. I really thought that was the same. though camp feels like it has the wrong connotations, like its organized
Funkybun
2024-07-09 21:24:37 +0000 UTCHehehe such a wonderful story, i love the flow and how casual it all is :3 I don't remember if English is your first language, or maybe it's not the first language of the character but "look for a nudist camping" isn't quite right. Camping is the action of going to a Camp Grounds. So he'd be "Looking for a nudist camp"
Dohyden
2024-07-09 21:18:31 +0000 UTCEpic!
Jonathan
2024-07-09 20:46:16 +0000 UTCHope we see more nudist stuff in the future.
Tentomon4
2024-07-09 20:22:29 +0000 UTC😂😂
Sean Frisbey
2024-07-09 19:41:00 +0000 UTCThe squiggly mouth line is what really sells it for me, it's a perfect visual representation of how your mouth does that thing when you're nervous.
Manigeitora
2024-07-09 19:40:45 +0000 UTCNick is a total dork and I love him lmao
Danny Webby
2024-07-09 19:36:53 +0000 UTCYour ability to craft stories that feel natural and real is legendary. I had almost exactly this conversation with my (then) partner not long before I came out as trans.
LambChop
2024-07-09 19:34:33 +0000 UTCYees, indeed 💗
Kuroi Usagi
2024-07-09 19:31:56 +0000 UTCWait until he puts those nudist plans back on the menu 😆
Quadrant
2024-07-09 19:31:37 +0000 UTCYour characters saying "mmf" does things to my brain
Manigeitora
2024-07-09 19:29:49 +0000 UTCyes XD but with an excuse
Funkybun
2024-07-09 19:23:25 +0000 UTCIsn't "Purposely forgot" same as simply "left behind"? 😁
Kuroi Usagi
2024-07-09 19:14:50 +0000 UTCProbably my favorite page so far. Just looking at it does things to me; probably brings back a few memories tbh. I love what this story is insinuating and no matter the outcome, I can't wait for it!
Marcus Heckinberry
2024-07-09 19:11:22 +0000 UTCFinn's face getting embarrassed is so adorable I can'tttt
gab
2024-07-09 19:10:44 +0000 UTCAll those car shots are quite exquisite!
Quoll
2024-07-09 19:08:36 +0000 UTC
