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on the road - 5

page 5 already!

I'll have to get back to writing this comic, I have more pages thumbnailed and written, but I am gonna write myself in a corner if I don't do a second pass XD and I see the exclusive on the horizon, so I will start early with writing.

I do know where the story is heading, just not how the dialogue gets me there yet.

so... I'll see you all after I have written and sketched a few more things! X)

find the comic over here for easier reading: Drive Link

on the road - 5 on the road - 5

Comments

We (the total dorks of the world) stan a total dork

Manigeitora

Wow I didn't know you were a Dutch artist! Op het moment leer ik Nederlands in een taalcursus aan de universiteit. Ik hou van de klank van de taal en de leuke mensen. Ik vind het echt geweldig dat mijn favoriete artiest uit Nederland komt. 😊 Bedankt voor je prachtige werk en hartelijke groeten uit Duitsland! 🧡

Vostoros

"Babe wake up, Funkybun just posted"

Dingus

Yeah, 'camp' is the casual / non-formal version of 'campsite' and 'campground'

Dohyden

Campground is fine, i see that on road signs here in California

Todd Whitesel

Sorry I over explained. That's interesting that it's the actual word and not just the common mix up of "thing word" vs "action word" which i've seen a lot in my years

Dohyden

well it's not so much that I'm confused about how english works. it's just that the dutch word is litterally "camping" for a campsite, so that's just so ingrained in my mind that it feels wrong to deviate XD. but yeah campsite is what im looking for

Funkybun

English is such a screwy language I know. Like, you go for a drive not a driving, you go for a swim not a swimming. Camp is a noun... Camping is also a noun... Gosh I hate my language sometimes. It means you have places like "Camp Redwood" or "Totara Camp Site" places you go for camping. So you go to a camp to do some camping

Dohyden

oh really? I guess yeah camping is dutch for camp grounds then. I really thought that was the same. though camp feels like it has the wrong connotations, like its organized

Funkybun

Hehehe such a wonderful story, i love the flow and how casual it all is :3 I don't remember if English is your first language, or maybe it's not the first language of the character but "look for a nudist camping" isn't quite right. Camping is the action of going to a Camp Grounds. So he'd be "Looking for a nudist camp"

Dohyden

Epic!

Jonathan

Hope we see more nudist stuff in the future.

Tentomon4

😂😂

Sean Frisbey

The squiggly mouth line is what really sells it for me, it's a perfect visual representation of how your mouth does that thing when you're nervous.

Manigeitora

Nick is a total dork and I love him lmao

Danny Webby

Your ability to craft stories that feel natural and real is legendary. I had almost exactly this conversation with my (then) partner not long before I came out as trans.

LambChop

Yees, indeed 💗

Kuroi Usagi

Wait until he puts those nudist plans back on the menu 😆

Quadrant

Your characters saying "mmf" does things to my brain

Manigeitora

yes XD but with an excuse

Funkybun

Isn't "Purposely forgot" same as simply "left behind"? 😁

Kuroi Usagi

Probably my favorite page so far. Just looking at it does things to me; probably brings back a few memories tbh. I love what this story is insinuating and no matter the outcome, I can't wait for it!

Marcus Heckinberry

Finn's face getting embarrassed is so adorable I can'tttt

gab

All those car shots are quite exquisite!

Quoll


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