They wont mind page12 sketch

thankyou! its turning out so much better than I expected XD with each page I leave open allot of details for the vote, so I dont know what a page is going to look like before starting to draw it. but these are getting me all excited once I start writing it and I see how the pieces lock together <3

Funkybun

I made it like one of those small beach stores that doesnt have a camera. I planned to tell that in the comic too. but ended up scrapping it. I might add a line in the next page. but I am trying to keep cameras out of the comic as much as possible for now.

Funkybun

ohman thanks thanks and thanks! XD I really love how it all turned out so far (with me not planning the individual pages that far ahead). I think its going to be more of this next page XD with how onesided the vote is. I dont know if I want them to cum yet. but we will see :3 maybe ill add it in a vote somewhere

Funkybun

yess! I like what you are putting down

Funkybun

XD that can probably happen yes, especially if the vote is this single sided

Funkybun

I absolutely LOVE this page. Awesome job!

I'd like them to have fun, but I care whether shop keeper will do. She may enjoy watching the two people using surveillance cameras....

alucaje noit

Hehe Sophie just can't resist that thing :3 really love where this is going too, and like that sorta POV-ish shot just over sophie's head on top in the middle is so good, and is that a drop of pre there? ;3 also their faces in the lower right panel, and like Rose's nervous smile whe Sophie gets up is as adorable as ever <3 Oh and I really like the kinda sbstract way of showing the action with the closeups on the left, like it clearly expresses the chain of events without showing too much, like that shot of Sophie pulling the panties down is such a nice tease hehe, and the shopkeeper leaning over to try and see what they're doing there is a nice touch too As far as the vote, I think I'm gonna have to go with more of this personally x3 I loooove where this is right now, and definitely wanna see some more of this before we move along, like mutual masturbation is like seriously my fav thing <3 been hoping things would go here :3 And after they get to have their fun for a bit, I think it'd make sense for the shopkeeper to maybe get suspicious and go back there looking for them to see what they're up to, and how fun would her reaction be if Rose cums or something like right as she turns the corner and sees them? xD

Ash

I like the idea of people showing up and the two of them trying to hide on the edge of climax...but I'll happily see wherever the direction goes!

Skinner McLane

More foreplay! THEN have the customers show up!

Stoker Bramwell