EOMC Ch4 Page 27
Added 2020-02-28 22:22:32 +0000 UTCnew day new date....
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SO this scene was actually not gonna be a new scene but part of the last one, but i found it both 1) too long 2) not the right timing for what convo they had in the last scene, sometimes on stories i make some changes along the way so it fits better or the pace is not as rough, this was a sudden decision so if something seems off that is why T-T;;; i find this would be better for what they're about to do 8)))
Comments
love the change, it fit beautifully... we gonna get more then a movie Evan... i think we are... hehehe <3
Alex (ksn)
2022-08-09 06:06:26 +0000 UTCLooking at the scenes after this I’m so glad you decided to make it a next date.
Faline C
2020-04-17 23:07:15 +0000 UTCAaaaaaa I can’t wait to see what they’re going to do x3
Valen Luxx
2020-02-29 16:54:05 +0000 UTCAbout to do 👀
sarathebonsai
2020-02-29 07:19:59 +0000 UTCEvan. Naughty, naughty 😏
Red
2020-02-29 05:09:58 +0000 UTCbold evan boutta Show Up and i’m so here for it...and for the rare and hella sexy marcus blushes that will result. as always, loves. 💕
peachpety
2020-02-29 04:59:11 +0000 UTCI know, right! I can’t wait to see Evan be more forward. ❤️
MessusMinnow
2020-02-29 01:41:28 +0000 UTCI like how Marcus is actually being the pure one this time 🤣🤣😁😁
tif
2020-02-29 01:39:50 +0000 UTCThis is why I don't remember what the Underworld trilogy was about 🙃🤣
tif
2020-02-29 01:29:17 +0000 UTCDNEJFNFJKRRFLKR LMAOO
loonytwin
2020-02-29 00:31:22 +0000 UTCSNORT he's been holding back now he wants some action lmao
loonytwin
2020-02-29 00:31:13 +0000 UTC😏😏😏
loonytwin
2020-02-29 00:31:00 +0000 UTCMaybe Marcus' animal is going to come out...and by "animal" I mean "trouser snake."
Valzan
2020-02-29 00:27:22 +0000 UTCThis is to totally gonna be a Netflix and Chill moment! Evan seems thirsty 🤣🍆🤤
SkyeBoo13
2020-02-29 00:19:16 +0000 UTCRiiiiiiiight the movie 😏
Lydi McCraken
2020-02-29 00:11:36 +0000 UTCLove all the awkward eomc moments though
Lily
2020-02-28 23:46:52 +0000 UTCAnytime 👍🏻😊
Nicolette
2020-02-28 23:15:56 +0000 UTC#calledit lol
Kindra Morris
2020-02-28 23:04:26 +0000 UTCSorryy!!!!!!!
Aki Ai
2020-02-28 23:03:42 +0000 UTCndnjkenjkfjngjrkjng its so ffunny cus i consider eomc a badly written romcom with so many awkward moments msmdnfejnfnj
loonytwin
2020-02-28 23:03:25 +0000 UTCwhen u wanna watch a movie but ur crush wants to netflix and chill...
loonytwin
2020-02-28 23:02:52 +0000 UTCthat actually helps SO so much, thanks for your feedback!! ngl i always reread my scenes to know if its a good place to start a new scene, its never easy but im happy to know people go back to reread old pages to feel the pacing, again thank you so much!
loonytwin
2020-02-28 23:02:15 +0000 UTCAkira please you're too close to the truth
loonytwin
2020-02-28 23:00:43 +0000 UTCBeen waiting for the update so glad it's here. I've got to agree with Evan I don't like romcoms either .
Lily
2020-02-28 22:56:19 +0000 UTCNetflix and chill??
MessusMinnow
2020-02-28 22:56:04 +0000 UTCActually, I think it works. The last page ended with Evan thinking that he would tell him that he liked him, eventually. So, transitioning to another day/date works. It can be viewed as the next date being “eventually”. Or however you want it to be. I think sometimes the pace gets broken up when we only get a page at a time. That’s why I like to go back a few pages to 1) remind myself of what’s going on or being talked about, and 2) get a feeling of the pace of the story to see where things left off. Plus the title helps too. 😉 Hope this helps give you some good feedback about your concern. 😊 Sorry it’s long 🤦🏻♀️
Nicolette
2020-02-28 22:55:11 +0000 UTCOoh I see. So popcorn, dark room, cuddled on the couch together. A scene from the movie come up and somone has some commentary then a slight convo. Next thing you you they are making out and getting hot and bothered. Now the real question is if they will make it to the bedroom or not. Alright I'm grabbing the wine, who wants some?
Aki Ai
2020-02-28 22:41:52 +0000 UTChe has... other plans B)
loonytwin
2020-02-28 22:39:09 +0000 UTCI was thinking the same question 🙃 Evan doesn't really seem like he was planning for a movie.
tif
2020-02-28 22:37:33 +0000 UTCsnhbdhhbd i love u too T-T <3
loonytwin
2020-02-28 22:34:41 +0000 UTCToT <3
loonytwin
2020-02-28 22:34:33 +0000 UTCAhhhh love you loony!! 💕
Andie
2020-02-28 22:28:36 +0000 UTCthings.... 8)
loonytwin
2020-02-28 22:28:08 +0000 UTCsorry!!! and no... def not 8))))
loonytwin
2020-02-28 22:27:55 +0000 UTCI'm in love
Cj Taylor
2020-02-28 22:27:36 +0000 UTCIt definitely threw me for a loop! But no worries, i recovered! They are so not going to the movies ;)
Kindra Morris
2020-02-28 22:26:08 +0000 UTCOmg what are they about to do?! 😳🙈
Andie
2020-02-28 22:24:00 +0000 UTC
