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Displaced Hero - Sith Girl Poll

Important Note: This poll's contents will contain some spoilers for the possible background of the OC Sith Girl that will be joining the Displaced Hero relationship. It is just general background, but if you want to avoid any spoilers entirely, you shouldn't read this!

Alright folks! As I mentioned in a long-winded ramble here, since the winner of the final Displaced hero relationship poll is an OC that was poorly defined, I've taken the time to create four variants that can be voted on in this poll. I was then faced with the puzzle of how to organize them, which oddly enough stalled me for a few hours as I debated it with myself :-p. Ultimately, I decided to just do it chronologically. In other words, the first girl is the one from farthest back in the Star Wars timeline, while the forth has absolutely no time displacement...

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1) Zavra S’hi

Approximate Date of Birth: 3655 BBY

One thing many forget about the ancient Sith is that they were not just conquerors. They were, to be blunt, also hedonists. Indeed, many of the more powerful leveled their rage and hatred out with passion, and some of the more clever focused entirely on those passions to drive them. Darth Acina, once Empress of a resurgent Sith Empire, was one such individual. First brought to the Dark Council due to a Passion for Technology that saw her becoming the head of the Sphere of Technology.

What few knew, due to the future Empress being clever enough to keep it a secret, was that Darth Acina also had a certain tastes. Specifically, she had a strong preference for females of the Sith Species, and secretly took several of them as apprentices. None of these were ever taken from high profile sources, as Darth Acina always treated them as much as playthings as apprentices. While many believed she eschewed cybernetic enhancement, as none was ever visible on her, the truth was…different.

Acina combined her passion for technology with her more personal passions for her apprentices, making a hobby out of creating cybernetic implants with a very specific sort of usage. Specifically, of course…causing pleasure and pain alike. All of her nubile Sith apprentices were modified extensively but largely internally, bribed with powerful implants that just so happened to have pleasure-or-pain inducing side effects.

By selecting carefully for naturally submissive Sith, she systematically trained them until each ‘reward’ implant no longer needed to be about anything but more ways to have fun. Each apprentice became a masterwork of personal ‘Hands,’ agents that were extremely capable but equally loyal to their mistress. Her Hands were easily rewarded by her use of their cybernetic implants to grant them the greatest sexual experiences of their lives…and easily punished by using those same implants to ensure they could not reach completion no matter how hard they tried when they had displeased her.

Zavra S’hi was her final project. The only Hand she had time to train during the Eternal War, while serving as Empress of the Sith Empire. Zavra was a somewhat different masterpiece than usual. Encouraged to walk a more neutral path in the Force, Acina allowed her far more freedom of action as her agent in maintaining the strained alliance with the Republic. Nevertheless fully modified to Acina’s preferences, though far more willingly and knowingly so, she became one of the only beings in the galaxy that Acina truly, genuinely cared for.

As a result of this, Acina had provided her favored Hand/Pet with a unique ship. A modified, ancient Sith Meditation Sphere. That ship, with its own on board intelligence and Force abilities, was all that prevented Zavra’s death when the Alliance fractured at Iokath and Empress Acina was killed. Damaged but intact, the Ship placed Zavra in stasis to preserve her as it began the incredibly long and slow process of repairing itself with nothing but the Force…

Force/Combat Specialization:

Though trained in secret, Empress Acina trained Zavra extensively with her own preferred Double Lightsaber, even going so far as to personally provide the purple crystals Zavra’s lightsaber uses. Combined with cybernetic augmentation, Zavra is an incredibly dangerous close combatant, though only middling with use of most other Force powers.

Due to wanting an agent more able to treat with Jedi during the time of the Eternal Alliance, Zavra is an extremely rare Sith who was strongly encouraged to lean into the Light Side of the Force just as much as the Dark. A very rare soul capable of riding the line between the two, she uses both freely.

Zavra is an incredibly talented technologist, part of the reason her Mistress eventually began to treat her as far more an equal than her other Hands. Despite being from centuries in the past, much of her knowledge of cybernetics, in particular, is far beyond current galactic usage.

Personality Traits/Notes:

Zavra is irrepressibly happy-go-lucky. Another aspect of why Acina quickly began to treat her differently than her other ‘Hands,’ she is the next best thing to impossible to hate. She also, however, has an extremely warped perception of ‘normal’ due to Acina’s influence. She will smile just as happily and talk just as bubbly while eviscerating her way through her enemies as she will in the bedroom while moaning under the effects of a lover’s touch. Many would see her as insane as a result. It would, however, be better to consider her differently sane, as she is internally consistent in a way the truly mad never are. (Character Personality Comparisons: Harley Quinn)

Sexual Interests/Characteristics:

Zavra is a hard submissive and adores that fact. The individual who responded best to Acina’s efforts out of any of her Hands, she loved her Mistress dearly and actually managed to inspire some level of genuine return on those feelings. While extremely capable of independent action, she will always seek out a Master or Mistress to serve, rather than seeking any sort of power for herself. As it happens, she tends to see whoever has control of her implants as her current Master…

(Special Note: This character is BY FAR the most kinky option on the table.)

2) Xel’Ka Ur-Ka

Approximate Date of Birth: 1125 BBY

Brief Background: A direct descendant of Kel’eth Ur. When her ancestor was ordered executed by Emperor Tenebrae for taking the stance that the Light Side of the Force contained great strength the Sith were foolish not to embrace, the remaining few members of his family were sold into slavery and vanished into obscurity. It would only be several thousand years later that Xel’ka would be plucked out of obscurity on a backwater world during the New Sith Wars. Her family like had long since intermingled with the ‘Pureblood’ Sith who, after so many died out, had became something of a status symbol, and it was for this reason that her new Master took her from a remote colony to be his apprentice.

Her new Master, seeing his Sith-Hybrid apprentice as a status symbol, used her to find the ancient world of Dromund Kaas. There she encountered the Force Ghost of her ancestor while exploring the Dark Temple for her Master, and her previous life as a slave found her open to his teachings about the Dark Side not being the right path. She took his holocron, hiding it from her master by passing on other recovered treasures. Under its influence, she slowly fought her way free of the Dark Side she’d been forced to learn after being ‘acquired’ by her Master.

Unfortunately, her ‘corruption’ to the light did not go unnoticed by for long. Forewarned by the Force Ghost of her Ancestor that her Master would try to kill her for it, she attempted to flee to the Jedi Lords, hoping to trade information on the Sith for being allowed to train as a Jedi. Unfortunately, she choose the wrong Lord, and the ship she stole to be damaged not in her escape, but when an overly blood thirsty Jedi tried to kill her instead of letting her defect.

The resulting Hyperspace accident as she fled that Jedi sent her hurtling through time, her only hope to blindly trust the Force to help her exit Hyperspace to a place of safety. This would result in her coming out in 'modern' times, instead of her original time, in an area of space where she will encounter the League.

Force/Combat Specialization:

Due to possessing her ancestor’s holocron, Xel’Ka specializes in the conversion of normally Dark Side abilities to work with the Natural Force. Notably, this means she has developed a version of Electric Judgement, the ‘Light Side’ equivalent of Force Lightning.

Trained in a fighting style similar to the a Sith Inquisitor from SWTOR. Quite talented with a single lightsaber blade, and mixes it with Electric Judgement, Force Crush, Ionize, and other Neutral/Light Force abilities.

Only Half-Trained at best, due to only being an Apprentice when her Master Found out about her ‘Corruption’ to the Light Side.

Personality Traits/Notes:

Extreme dislike of slavery, due to her personal former experience as a slave.

Wary of the Jedi and Republic, due to how she was attacked when she tried to defect.

Extremely snarky/sarcastic, this having been her defense mechanism that let her fit in with the Sith, without the need to actually be sadistic/cruel.

Natural Follower. She attempted to defect to the Jedi/Republic, instead of trying to kill her master, as she is not a natural leader or particularly ambitious.

Personality Comparisons: Morrigan from Dragon Age, Shego from Kim Possible, Miranda from Mass Effect.

Sexual Interests/Characteristics:

Thankfully having avoided any trauma in this area due to being found to be strongly Force Sensitive fairly young, Xel’Ka is interested in exploring her sexuality, but hasn’t had anyone she trusted enough to do so with. So far, the only thing she does know she likes is the discovery of a significant Exhibitionist Streak. She’s attractive, knows it, and rather enjoyed being able to get away with skimpy clothing that drew the eye as a Sith Apprentice. To her, the fact that she could do so without worry of someone trying something is empowering.

3) Samara Garahe

Approximate Date of Birth: 92 BBY (carbon frozen in 69 BBY at age 23)

Brief Background: Samara’s ancestors were among the Sith who traveled to the planet Voss during the days of the Great Galactic War and decided to stay there when the Eternal Empire forced the Sith Empire and Republic of the time to temporarily ally. Lesi Garahe, a rare Sith Pureblood with no Force Sensitivity, decided Voss was a fine place to stay the fuck out of the Force related madness that was going on elsewhere. She wasn’t the only Sith to think so, with a decent sized mix of Imperial and Republic citizens staying on Voss. Enough so that, in fact, that the metaling pot of species would eventually push the two native species mostly to extinction.

The similar physical characteristics and Force-Sensitivity of the Voss, in particular, would result in a significant number of Sith-Appearing hybrids among the dwindling native populations. Since Voss was, throughout history, lost to the rest of the galaxy several times, few people realize that was true. Leaving the Jedi ignorant that there was a significant 'Pureblood' type Sith population among the isolationist Voss Mystics. Intermixed with the Force-strong Voss, the Garahe family eventually regained quite a bit of Force Sensitivity. Likewise, Sith Ritualism and Voss Mysticism mixed over the eons, creating a Force Tradition that was a more Sorcery, Dream walking, and Alchemy than traditional Force usage.

Samara was one of the rare such Sith/Voss offshoots that decided she wanted to see more of the galaxy herself, leaving her homeworld to explore. At first, this went well, as her abilities with healing and various advantages gained by sorcery made her useful. Eventually, however, the relatively naïve Samara found herself betrayed and holding debt to a powerful Hutt. Unwilling to mess with a Force User, the Hutt had her frozen in carbonite once captured, where she had hung in display in that Hutts Throne Room for several decades…

Force/Combat Specialization:

Samara specializes in Force Rituals and Dream Walking. Aside from extremely good Force Precognition in battle, she has virtually none of the traditional Force User skills. On the other hand, she can perform incredible feats of healing, perform rituals that give permanent boosts to the users (and has undergone many such herself), and can enter and manipulate the Dreams of virtually anyone. Even those normally protected from such.

In a fight, she uses a pair of blaster pistols, her extreme precognition, and the significant physical boosts she has given herself via rituals to come out on top far more often than not. It took quite an ambush to capture her, and the Hutt decided not to risk letting her remain awake for a VERY good reason.

Personality Traits/Notes:

Samara is a wild mix of naïve and jaded. Her original personality was fairly bubbly and happy, and that surfaces frequently. But between her current issues in the Force (see next section) and her ‘recent’ experience with betrayal, she has a tendency to mood swing somewhat. This results in her being a bit of a brat at times, which could do with a firm hand to correct…

Personality Comparisons: Rebecca from Edgerunners, Squirrel Girl from Marvel, Merrill from Dragon Age II.

Sexual Interests/Characteristics:

Like many Hutts, the one who captured Samara was a pervert who enjoyed humiliating his victims. Before being frozen in carbonite, Samara was stripped naked and posed in a rather…compromising state. Unknown to both the Hutt and Samara, some of the rituals she had undergone remained unaffected by carbon freezing and they continued to gather energy from emotions directed at her. Without being awake to process the emotions into something safe, they instead filtered raw into her being. Given her circumstances, appearance, and pose, the vast majority of what has been directed at her for the last several decades has been lust.

Already having an affinity for tantric Force rituals, Samara now has an overwhelming amount of raw lust energy she barely has under control. This expresses as near-constant horny energy and borderline nymphomania. Not wanting to become completely subsumed by this, she is desperate for a healthy outlet…and very grateful for her rescue. She desires to learn control over her new impulses, and is hoping that her rescuers can help her gain it. Even if that means using unconventional methods.

Samara is a switch by original nature, though now trends submissive due to any arousal rapidly escalating to the point she can barely think. Requires both regular sex to bleed the energy off, and desires training in how to control herself while under the effects of the lust energy that has seeped into her very being…

4) Hexa Haeraran

Approximate Date of Birth: 49 BBY (Currently 24)

Hexa Haeraran is a Heretic, and she is well aware that the alliteration hadn’t done her any favors when her rivals branded her so. Frankly, though…fuck them. She might have been born into the Sorcerers of Tund, but she had pushed the idea of ending their reclusive ways and exploring the Force more fully as her platform. Incredibly gifted with both the illusions and shapeshifting aspects of their order, many had begun to listen to her!

At least, they had until the old bastards in charge of the Sorcerers had decided her popularity among the younger members, and her ideas about teaching their ways to outsiders, were a threat to their power. She was branded a heretic and, after a brief power struggle she sadly lost, exiled. She had still been too popular to execute, so exile had been her fate…but so what?

Even if she was a little bitter, she was also now free to explore the rest of the galaxy and see all it had to offer. The timing was perfect, too! The galaxy nearby, in Hutt Space, had gone a little bit nuts, and there were Force wielders who weren’t quite as stick-in-the-muds as usual running around where she could get at them. Making her way from Centrality Space to Hutt Space had been easy, and she was quite sure that this ‘League’ would be grateful for the Dreadnaught she’d hijacked for a ride. Not to mention for all the information about the Hutts and their continuing deals with the Centrality she'd also acquired and brought along…

Force/Combat Specialization:

Like all the Sorcerers of Tund, Hexa is extremely good with illusions…and shapeshifting. She also, as it happens, is aware of several interesting secrets possessed by those that study the Unity (Cosmic Force taken to extremes). Such as the little detail that all sentient beings in the galaxy are Force Sensitive to some extent, and that there are specific ways you can wake them up to that fact.

Combat wise, Hexa is best described as annoyance made manifest. She can disappear behind an illusions good enough to fool even Jedi Masters, run around the battlefield however she pleases, and make use of whatever weapons she has at hand. While not that powerful in direct confrontations, good luck actually managing to force one on her…

Personality Traits/Notes:

Hexa is essentially a twenty something enjoying a late rebellious teenager stage. She spent way too much time being serious as an actual teenager, and now that her bid to change the Sorcerers has failed, she’s determined to have fun. She’s more than willing to do good in the process, her desire to make her people better still coming out in an inability to let those right in front of her suffer, but she’s also rather lacking in impulse control…

Personality Comparisons: Starfire (DC Comics) in her older, more mature versions; Nymphadora Tonks (Harry Potter)

Sexual Interests/Characteristics:

She doesn’t know! But she’s game to find out! In particular, now that she’s away from those awful form-shrouding robes of the Sorcerers, she’s quickly discovered she finds both male and female humanoids quite appealing. The more flesh they are showing the better! Actually, the more she’s showing, the better too! Seriously, those clothes were awful!

Aside from a tendency toward not wearing a whole lot if she can help it, Hexa is also extremely interested in seeing how the Shapeshifting abilities of the Sorcerers might be of use in helping with that ‘attraction to both genders’ thing. (Note: This means that Hexa is a path toward Futa Shenanigans. No, not with Izuku, but with the other girls in the harem. Which can/could actually help him keep up with them all). Hexa is a Switch, who really wants to experience all the things, though would prefer to do so with a group of people she can be close to. Meaning she is, in fact, actively on the lookout for something like a Harem or Polycule to join.

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So, there you have it folks! Four significantly different variants of our possible Sith Girl. Each of them from a different time and background, and with wildly different Force skillsets. This is a straight popularity contest, so get your vote in for your favorite variant! This poll will run until at least the 17th of June. Possibly a bit longer, depending on if I decide I want to introduce her in the next Displaced Hero update or not.

Comments

Haha. I admit, I half expected her to be the most popular option because of that. Though we'll see if it holds up. The poll HAS only been up for 5 days, and less than a third of those that can vote in it have :-p.

Novus Peregrine

As yoda would say perversion strong, it is with young zavra s'hi, will of the force it is hhmmmnnn

Jamie Celtic

*shrug* On that aspect, do remember that Ood Bnar and Celeste Morne are floating around, fresh from the conflicts one step older than the one Zavra is from. Not that I'm trying to persuade you to change your vote. I like all the options equally. Which isn't exactly shocking since I wrote them :-p.

Novus Peregrine

While the futa aspect was nice I feel like someone older from the past would help him out more not some one close to there time line

Wolf Games

Whew! There's a lot here. First, I'll make the same general statement I've said to several people ;-). A lot of the point of these variants is to get a feel for what people were actually looking for out of 'Sith Girl' due to how nebulous the original concept was. I tried to make them ALL compelling, so that it becomes mostly a question of what sort of Force Powers, Personalities, and Potential Relationship Role (I.E. Kinks and Switch/Sub status) they bring to the table. Now for more specific things: The Futa thing is always a bit of complicated topic. Or, perhaps it would be better to call it 'polarizing.' A lot of people like the idea, or don't mind it at least, but just as many find it majorly off-putting. If Hexa wins outright, I'll have a good idea that a significant amount of my readers are into it (or at least don't mind). If she ends up doing really well but not winning...then I might be inclined to ask specifically about Futa style additions in another pull at some point. As you said, it could be achieved via other means. Samara. Addressing a specific worry you stated here, Samara won't be TOO messed up over the 'betrayal.' I'm not one to write angsty character much. So, while it will certainly be something she needs to deal with, it won't linger long. The Force and the ability to feel people out with it, particularly when the other person is a Force sensitive empath that actively choose to let you in, can shortcut that process a lot. Not completely avoid it, but shorten her issues there a lot. Particularly when it's her rescuers involved...and they'll have the chance to prove their sincerity by helping her through the carbon sickness. Remember how messed up Han was by it, and he wasn't in stasis anywhere near as long. Enhancement: Yes, Samara's can be applied to non-Force-sensitives. Because, as seen with all the awakened characters from Tisht, the really isn't such a thing as a non-Force-being in Star Wars. Save, perhaps, a few specific species that are Force Immune. As for cybernetic enhancement, I can't quite see Padme agreeing to it, since she's mostly an optimistic pacifist. I CAN see Sabé happily going along with it, though. Particularly as she's already undergone body-modification to look like Padmé and proven to be unbothered by it.

Novus Peregrine

That's the point ;-). Them all being awesome, that is. Not feeling like you're missing out :-). The original concept was so nebulous that I need a better idea of what sort of thing people were actually voting for, with each of these girls each representing a variant of what someone might be imagining when someone says 'Sith Girl.' Samara is, I'd say, the second kinkiest. The reason Zavra get's the first position for me is that she's fully embraced the way she was trained, and the sheer number of fun, kinky things that can be done with 'implants' is much broader than just 'character is always horny.' ;-)

Novus Peregrine

I'm glad you like some of them, at least ;-). And a lot of the point of this was to get an idea of exactly what sort of thing people were envisioning for this character :-). The concept was very nebulous, and each of them represent a different aspect of what one could think of in a 'Sith Girl' sort of character...

Novus Peregrine

While I like the fact Hexa brings a lot from the centrality (including a dreadnaught) and about the Unity, they are external aspects that you could have any other background character bring if you want to have the League get that knowledge. The Futa possibility aspect is some what interesting, though the cybernetic knowledge of Zavra seems like it could also provide an avenue to explore that, and could possibly lead to multiple people being able to experience it, especially if she works together with Mei and comes up with some different temporary possibilities, or even some kind of nanite cybernetic "grow as desired/needed" option. Really its the "actively looking for a harem/polycule" that seems most interesting. I do like how both Zavra and Xel'ka are definitely followers, they would make for new dynamics to explore as none of the other members of the harem are truly that submissive/looking to serve (outside of the bedroom). Zavra's cybernetic and technical knowledge and Xel'ka/her Ancestor's knowledge of how to use typically Dark side abilities without using the dark side itself could both be boons to learn as well. Samara's ability to give Permanent enhancements, and the fact that she's actually a blaster-focused precognitive combatants are what sell her to me. Yes there is the issue of the overabundance of lust energy and the "recent" betrayal that could make her a bit jaded and abrasive/demanding/high maintenance for any kind of immediate future upon introduction, which I am not too thrilled about character-wise, but it also would give room for a lot of character development and growth and make her more likely to be a much more "worth it to put up with" character who acknowledges how much hassle they cause and is grateful for Izuku/others for helping her despite it. It's a trade off. But the permanent enhancements and my desire for more blaster focused combatants (I know Padme, and likely Sabe, are too, but they're not [yet?] Force sensitive), particularly if she ends up getting short, underbarrel, saber-bayonets on her blaster pistols (similar to some of the melee mod pistols of Borderlands, but lightsabers) for close-up/defense? That just sounds cool. I really don't know much about Dream Walking, but it certainly sounds like it could have potential to be a game-changer too, but the rituals to give permanent enhancements? If they can even be given to non-force sensitives then that could mean that Padme/Sabe (and her other handmaidens if we're being honest, even if not a part of the harem) could get a big boost to help them better protect themselves. With how often Padme is targeted in canon, and in becoming involved with Izuku it is only likely to happen even more, they all really could use the help/enhancements. For me its got to be Samara. That said, I really REALLY like all the characters, you have done an absolutely fantastic job on them Novus. They each definitely bring something to the table and I would eagerly like to see how pretty much all those various possibilities would add to the story. I went to Hexa first but after a time decided that others could bring similar benefits to the relationship, or a different (or still her/a version of her, just not romantically involved with izuku) character could bring the knowledge of the centrality/Unity if you want to include/give those to the league. Zavra and Xel'ka both bring interesting new possibilities to the table, but the biggest thing for the relationship is both seeking a Master. Zavra being a trained agent/pet that has lost her master, and could be sent out to do various missions, Xel'ka being mostly untrained and could possibly become a "padawan" to Aayla and/or Izuku while also bringing the Holocron and possibly the spirit/Ghost of her ancestor too. Samara though brings the possibility of actual tangible benefit to the whole harems capabilities and thus their safety and ability to face threats, this even before the strategic benefits she may provide on a wider basis, and the fact that Mei's portal belt stuff could prove to be helpful to Samara for more kinky side of things. Yeah, based on current poll results (and I know its early, the first day) so far I don't expect Samara to actually pull ahead. But they're all interesting in their own rights so I won't be too upset. Plus the current leader, Hexa, might let Padme and Sabe become force sensitive sooner (I say sooner because after what happened during the confrontation with the dark side hutt I truly can see Padme and Sabe, as Harem members, eventually ending up close enough to something similar and awakening to the force anyways). Or Zavra might have cybernetic ways to enhance them/the other members (combine cybernetics with droids to make a cybernetic interface to a [deployable/portable?] droid-based cybernetic exoskeleton or bodyguard/"protocol" droid that can turn into a set of power armor?) Whether directly or not. Or Xel'ka could end up having a knack for politics/learn from Padme and others how to be a diplomat and end up taking the knowledge of how to use dark side abilities without the darkside and actually "stealing" away Dooku/converting him into an ally (that's a stretch, but she has the less developed set of advantages, but that also means she has the broadest range of possibilities she could grow into). They're all good, and bring stuff to the table in their own ways. I look forward to seeing who wins and eventually will get introduced, as well as if any aspects of non-chosen characters may still show up in the story.

Keht Jelicho

Ughhhh your killing me here!!! All of these are awesome character ideas!!! I feel like no matter who is picked I’m going to miss out. But I guess I can’t really “lose” this vote either, by that same logic. I gotta vote for Samara though. I’m a sucker for Marrin from the Fallen Order games. So I’m a huge fan of the sorcery aspects. I also think the eternally horny girl is way more Kinky than a simple “super-sub”. Samara would totally tweak Izuku’s hero-ness, giving her way more of an in to the harem than simply being a sub. VOTE SAMARA!!!

WhatAFungi

I must say that I am highly conflicted as I like the first and last choices almost equally especially what they bring to the table with the first choice we have a highly trained fighter that in her tech speciality could bring incredible advancement to both survivability and strength of both Jedi and normal troops and her sith meditation spehre could bring incredible interesting developments for ship building and other technologys as it is probably tech similar to the star forge seeds there already have it could let them figure out how those work easyer and equip ships with stripped down versions for better logistics....... And of course she is the most kinki of the lot...... Then we have the last choice is a natural infiltrater but what is the most interesting is the "secret knowledge" which could bring a sharp increase in force users even slightly trained and weak most force users make excellent pilots or mobile suit users.... So an army full of trained force sensitives is a big advantage but with the dark side being an actual corrupting force in this story it could also be a big liability so for me the first choice wins .....I also like the out of time angle more ..... Now talking about choices two and three ..... I find what they bring more lackluster while the enhancement rituals of number three is interesting it doesn't bring as much to the table as the other choices as it could only enhance so many people and it's likely that who could do it on who is extremely limited it could probably be used to enhance the troops as well as the Jedi but it's still a force rituals that needs a force user to per perform and the tantric energy overload will probably be extremely tedious the deal with ....on a positive node this could help enhance isuku to be on sidiuos or plagus level of power or even to starkiller level.....but one "man" with such power can not win a war alone .... Now option two the holocron itself seems like it could actually help all the Jedi currently on Izukus side but only him and the Jedi also she is half trained and distrusts the Jedi which could be a serious problem with the rest of the harem/polycule so probably not a good idea

Dominique Brassel

If it makes you feel any better, I'm considering pairing Asora with Eirtaé, though they won't get involved with the main pairing. Poor Asora deserves some love, and I accidentally made Eirtaé an adorkable nerd-girl in the last update. I liked it enough as a personality matrix for her to grow into that I left it when it sort of just...happened. Aside from Sabé I hadn't really fleshed the Handmaidens out much.

Novus Peregrine

Yeah, there's a reason I'm running this poll in the first place. The original concept was so nebulous that I'm not quite sure exactly what people were voting FOR. Hence the variants all having different personalities and specializations. As for who I expected to win? I honestly didn't have a freaking clue. I figured Zavra would have an edge from the hentai/pervert faction, but I legit don't know how big of a draw that is for Displaced Hero. The nature of Aayla's original situation means it's probably the 'kinkiest' of my currently ongoing works. But I don't know what percentage of readers were specifically drawn in by that. In a lot of ways, this doubles as a litmus test for the interests of my patrons in general.

Novus Peregrine

Yeah, I made sure to include at least one that is a straight up ritualist, though both Hexa and Zavra might have at least some level of familiarity with them, and there might be some include in Xel'ka's holocron. Samara is 100% the actual specialist though.

Novus Peregrine

But…but… *Reaches hand out feebly* Hot bunny girl secretary! … Oh well, the people have spoken! I have to admit, these are some badass Sith Girl characters you’ve given us Novus! Hexa has my vote! If Samara had more though, I definitely would have gone for her!

The Foreign Traveler

Well, bad for your ability to make a choice, maybe ;-). But I DID make them all as compelling as possible, you know. I intended them to all be sufficiently interesting, so that many or most peoples choices will likely come down mostly to the differences in Force Powersets, Personalities and Potential Relationship Role (I.E. Kinks and Switch/Sub status). I'm honestly glad you found most of them compelling on their own :-). Edit: Oh, and yeah, Zavra and Xel'Ka are the most Sith like, if you're talking the Sith Force Group. But that's not the same thing as the Sith Species.

Novus Peregrine

reading through these, the histories of all of them are great, but the personalities of some of them were strong turn offs for how they'd fit int he story. then i got to hexa haeraran who does have the least bombastic backstory, but the most agreeable personality, and i was already convinced. then i saw you compared her personality to matured starfire and i was fully engaged, as starfire is probably in my top 5 favorite fictional females of all time. it will be interesting to see how this poll ends up going, and i'm also curious which lady you expected to win before the voting started

Delphinous

Well, I would like to see an actual ritualist in the story so… Plus cultural melting seems the most fun honestly, even if I’d pick the actual apprentice otherwise

Danielle

Is it a bad thing that I kind of want 3 out of 4 of these introduced. Especially the first and last options seem rather interesting. Zavra might be trained partially in the light side but shes the only one that actually full out feels like a sith to me. A sith Meditation sphere would be an interesting ship to study as well. And yeah with an actual sith in the harem I kind of want the actual dark side being a thing. And well I've always been a fan of starfire. So a similar personality is always fun so Hexa sounds great as well. Though I do feel as though Sabe could already partially fill that role so it wouldn't be essential. It's mostly the shape shifting that pulls me to this option. As well as a backstory I rather like.

Daemonioros


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