One Piece - Halfway Broken (Chapter 66)
Added 2025-05-11 21:11:52 +0000 UTCFirst, don't forget that there are still two polls ongoing! One is the June Story Poll, the other the final Relationship Poll for Displaced Hero.
Second, Happy Mother's Day to any of you out there who are mothers!
Now, with those out of the was...salutations, everyone! I did say I was going to try and sneak in an a small extra update for Halfway Broken this month, to reduce the odds I'd be lynched ;-). Obviously, I managed it! It's not too massive, just a single chapter, but it is a fairly hefty chapter at 4,400+ words.
The chapter deals with the main conflict of Asuka Island. Don't think that such means they are done there, though. I always intended the actual conflict on the island to be relatively short, followed by them getting some training time in a place that will help several of them. Along with giving a bit of breathing room for Nami and Luffy to start their 'seduce Robin' plan before the events of Marineford kick off.
Anyway, have your extra chapter ;-).
Comments
Glad for even a small slice of HB! Edit 1: The fact that they’d done it all mostly because of “was” the right thing… The fact that they’d done it all mostly because “it was the right thing to do”… Edit 2: Which didn’t mean the idea “didn’t” secretly amuse him. Which didn’t mean the idea “hadn’t” secretly “amused” him. Edit 3: He’d noted quietly “had” ale and liquor… He’d noted quietly “how” ale and liquor… Edit 4: Zoro was put on the back foot, but only for a moment, as he grinned fiercely and launched into the fight with “a will” Zoro was put on the back foot, but only for a moment, as he grinned fiercely and launched into the fight with “an indomitable will”… Edit 5: He’d lived, loved, brought new “like” into the world… He’d lived, loved, brought new “life” into the world… Edit 6: The clearing had long “sense”… The clearing had long “since”… One more...
The Foreign Traveler
2025-06-01 09:17:05 +0000 UTCThere's a good reason why you can't find an answer for that :-p. The Seven Star Sword is non-canon, from one of the movies. As such, it can't be considered one of the 12 normal supreme grade swords. That said, I've made it a blade of equivalent quality, as that fits with the lore around it.
Novus Peregrine
2025-05-16 19:54:39 +0000 UTCWell...50/50 :-p. Sense->Since was wrong and I fixed it in the master file. But Plain was already correct. Plain, as in 'flat area of land.' If I changed it to 'plane' it would be more a dimension of existence, which isn't what I was going for.
Novus Peregrine
2025-05-16 19:52:50 +0000 UTChi bud love the story just a quick question for you I've tried to get a good answer but haven't been able to find a solid one but would you say the the seven star sword is one of the 12 supreme grade swords?
fozzer
2025-05-16 18:04:28 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Just two typos I noticed in the last part of the chapter: ‘The clearing had long sense become more like a devastated plain.’: ‘sense’ -> ‘since’, and ‘plain’ -> ‘plane’.
Camille Favre
2025-05-14 21:18:27 +0000 UTC
