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Added 2016-12-15 16:07:17 +0000 UTCWe're really getting close to it... the ntr part!
I'm sure there's a grammar error somewhere, pls someone if you found it just tell me :(
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Thanks, I like your idea too :D
2016-12-16 05:33:37 +0000 UTCI liked it. Its just my opinion don't take it the wrong way but I think this page could be after he found out that his "new friends" maybe doing something sexual with her sister and than start to get curious more and realise the changes around him. What I mean to say is that character should start to first get comfortable than get surprised one day and than start to get paranoid. I didn't find any errors but English is my third language. I just stated my opinion I like how things are progressing. Its just that I like when NTR is dragged out and than it hits you. Love it !
Fargoon
2016-12-16 03:16:35 +0000 UTC
