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The Fractured Tower- Chapter 61

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because they're all misfits who won't randomly kill each other. Sorin can't risk trying to find a better team right now, not when like, his mediocre team is this chaotic whilst having strong familial and friend bonds. Imagine how disloyal other groups would be if they don't even have family bonds!

Pocket Rikimaru Thanatos

Why is the MC even entertaining the idea of sticking with these people?

1FantasyFanatic

It's a pain, but salvageable assuming double digits doesn't get involved; but seriously- nobody gets to shit on MC again for holding back BS they can't prove.

Silver Beard

I hate to drop because of an arc that’s should be about to end… but I’m dropping this story for the above reasons. Although I love the magic system, the world building, and the author seems to be an excellent writer, it’s just pretty hard to get past the fact that he is still with this team. What makes it a bit worse is that the story seems to be doubling down on this “flawed but human…” team and I wouldn’t be surprised if he sticks with them.

Simple Squire

Again, this group seems nothing but a pain in the ass. We’ve got a prideful noble team leader who’s nothing but demanding and a bitch, and truly only leads because Soren allows it, a healer who can’t fight, and a money hungry damage dealer that’s lied, betrayed the group, and led them into a ruin for greed. Why is he still with them?

TAMSC

Or maybe she didn't understand or believe it. Irl we don't aways exactly get what someone means with what they say.

Olavi Kaukamieli

True, but he's dealing with women - teenagers at that. There's no need to fuel another pointless conflict if he needs to say 3 more words to avoid it.

Luchix

The word choice of his almost seems apologetic - "I know this might be hypocritical" - 1) he answered questions when it became relevant. 2) He had no reason to believe that the people he beat up would be looking for revenge in the tower, while Rue very much knew there was the danger from the Hellions. Even Nemari knew there was danger from them. So the hypocrisy seems to not be on his part.

Caleb Reusser

Sorin tells Nemari and Rue that Jorn is "monster bait" which implies he is dead and then Rue asks him "how did you get away", which doesn't make a lot of sense. One of the two passages should probably be reworked.

Anton Lupanov

Cloudflare is down. Lots of sites having issues

I Is Patron

Thx for the chapter! Anyone knows why RR is down? XD

Etez

Had The Talk finally. It should take a while for them to notice a problem, and at that point the party has the armor and can go climb again

Olavi Kaukamieli


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