The Fractured Tower- Chapter 53
Added 2025-11-12 12:39:03 +0000 UTCComments
Kind of confused why Nemari seems to think she has the leverage/sway to demand things from Sorin. He’s been carrying them from day 1, and even with the fact that he’s been going “easy” in front of them to split the anima, I feel like there’s no way she wouldn’t be in awe/cowering/or at least very very cautious and wary around Sorin. He’s so much more powerful than them (which I think they would be able to tell by now) that it kind of breaks immersion for me when she demands things like they’re equals.
Simple Squire
2025-11-16 18:12:12 +0000 UTC“ There were a few more terse moments over”. Should be tense?
Simple Squire
2025-11-16 18:09:57 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! :-)
Stephen Pearson
2025-11-12 21:17:42 +0000 UTC"I was forced to make a detour. That's all the answers you're getting considering your first reaction seems to be blabing to others about my secrets."
BerciTheBeast
2025-11-12 20:36:38 +0000 UTCNemari is being kinda inconsistent considering her reaction to the stuff in the ruin vs the manticore and this. I am just as annoyed as sorin about the hypocrisy of this and I dont get why the rest of the team seem to think that the tower should be safer.
Raymond Whitehead
2025-11-12 14:49:32 +0000 UTCThink it's time to bail. Nemari is deaf.
Bakerbob
2025-11-12 14:46:58 +0000 UTCWell the team may not survive to find the portal...though i have a hard time believing that they won't travel together to the portal hub. Sorin though is going to need to look at adding a few abilities to merge with his others. Maybe wind, earth, or water to make it a more general elemental manipulation ability. Granted he isn't a true mage. Though having the extra elemental manipulation would be a hidden ace. As well as merging iron body and regeneration to help free up space as well as making it more powerful
Corwin
2025-11-12 14:06:17 +0000 UTCThx for the chapter :D
Etez
2025-11-12 13:16:17 +0000 UTCDitch her! Find new team!
Touch
2025-11-12 12:45:45 +0000 UTC
