Where Your God Is - Chapter 2
Added 2023-03-22 12:11:38 +0000 UTC...I don't think anything more needs to be said here.
Next up will be a chapter of Industrious. I'm also working on a Semper Quest update here and there, so that may be out by the weekend as well.
Other than that, stay safe out in the wide world and rock on.
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Benjamin Hower
2023-03-22 23:15:11 +0000 UTCOk, this chapter was much better, pretty much exactly what was needed. It established that Kirito was an SI, which to be honest I didn't catch in the first chapter, and might be good to put in the title, really set a deeper emotional tone for the story.
Alec
2023-03-22 22:40:46 +0000 UTCKayaba: behold, the grand display of menace and power. The dark and evil God who holds the world hosage- Kirito-SI: Hi! Local trickster Pain In Your Ass here to play the game! And Kayaba- get fucked.
Chancelor Delamare
2023-03-22 19:58:23 +0000 UTCHoly crap, the SI pulled a child genious trope on Kayaba of all people? Lol! And also proved how a determined actor can cause a lot of damage with some of the simplest openings. And receiving a commendation for good work all in the middle of it...lol Finally he had to go there and become a idol/magical girl dev... Poor SI is going to be so screwed/teased when his sister/cousin connects the dots next chapter.
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-03-22 14:37:07 +0000 UTCHah, the old “nobody reads the email address” trick. The first key to modern hacking, don’t hack the computer, hack the user. Also there’s a big note of tragedy to this whole affair that SI hasn’t gotten a chance to unpack
Jeffrey Gassenheimer
2023-03-22 13:39:18 +0000 UTCMy 'Slayer's Shorts' thread has an index on the first page of it listing all my quests and stories.
Slayer Anderson
2023-03-22 13:15:09 +0000 UTCMagical girl Kirito. I can't stop laughing. This will be an interesting AU. I'll have to look up some of your stories that are in settings that I normally don't read. Because everything I read in settings I know is pure gold. A small question. Would a pinned index of all your stories on the main page be possible? Or is there ab existing list somewhere to look up older works?
Jaroslaw Jarmul
2023-03-22 12:50:54 +0000 UTCYou saw nothing.
Slayer Anderson
2023-03-22 12:17:00 +0000 UTCYou misspelled chapter in the title. You wrote chatper.
Hunter Rhoades
2023-03-22 12:13:07 +0000 UTC
