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Where Your God Is - Chapter 2

...I don't think anything more needs to be said here.

Next up will be a chapter of Industrious.  I'm also working on a Semper Quest update here and there, so that may be out by the weekend as well.

Other than that, stay safe out in the wide world and rock on.

Where Your God Is - Chapter 2

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Benjamin Hower

Ok, this chapter was much better, pretty much exactly what was needed. It established that Kirito was an SI, which to be honest I didn't catch in the first chapter, and might be good to put in the title, really set a deeper emotional tone for the story.

Alec

Kayaba: behold, the grand display of menace and power. The dark and evil God who holds the world hosage- Kirito-SI: Hi! Local trickster Pain In Your Ass here to play the game! And Kayaba- get fucked.

Chancelor Delamare

Holy crap, the SI pulled a child genious trope on Kayaba of all people? Lol! And also proved how a determined actor can cause a lot of damage with some of the simplest openings. And receiving a commendation for good work all in the middle of it...lol Finally he had to go there and become a idol/magical girl dev... Poor SI is going to be so screwed/teased when his sister/cousin connects the dots next chapter.

Guilherme Bezerra

Hah, the old “nobody reads the email address” trick. The first key to modern hacking, don’t hack the computer, hack the user. Also there’s a big note of tragedy to this whole affair that SI hasn’t gotten a chance to unpack

Jeffrey Gassenheimer

My 'Slayer's Shorts' thread has an index on the first page of it listing all my quests and stories.

Slayer Anderson

Magical girl Kirito. I can't stop laughing. This will be an interesting AU. I'll have to look up some of your stories that are in settings that I normally don't read. Because everything I read in settings I know is pure gold. A small question. Would a pinned index of all your stories on the main page be possible? Or is there ab existing list somewhere to look up older works?

Jaroslaw Jarmul

You saw nothing.

Slayer Anderson

You misspelled chapter in the title. You wrote chatper.

Hunter Rhoades


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