Dzarne + Rale 2 fan sounds
Added 2021-01-21 09:15:10 +0000 UTCMade by jl017 like before https://www.furaffinity.net/user/jl017/
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Why the link doesn't work
Uriel2sb
2021-03-05 11:32:33 +0000 UTCToo bad the link is broken now
Altair
2021-03-03 02:17:35 +0000 UTCHot dang, jl017 just gets better every time. As others mentioned, the 'flesh on flesh' sound is fantastic and impeccably timed to the animation. Only incredible diligence can get those kinds of results! I also really enjoyed the 'big' sounds that show up when the character's faces are on screen, good audio level and choices in source sounds. There's one very minor thing I could suggest (which people have already touched on). It would be to 'punctuate' the big moments even when their faces aren't on-screen, e.g. during climax and when the lady hilts for the first time. Shiiru touched on this, it'd be hard to tell when the climax happens from audio alone, so adding some kind of vocalization during those moments would help the audio match the video even more perfectly. A second minor observation was that the vocalizations between the female biting the male's snout and releasing his snout are slightly too subtle, I think. This is where the breathing sound TehAngryXeno mentions could help fill in since the lady has to breath through an open mouth. However, sound that's too subtle is preferable to too aggressive, so it does work well as it is. That said, the mixing is sublime, the background noise fits exactly, and it can't be overstated how well the timing is executed! Please thank jl017 for us for continuing to grace us with their work!
Dargon
2021-01-25 11:22:40 +0000 UTCI agree with your points for me the stomping in the beginning wasnt that matching. Vocalizations at the beginning would be cool yeah but all in all I would say it ended pretty good. For me there wasnt even more options to add sound because it wouldnt match when they where kissing they are close to silenced for me so I guess it ended pretty good
OurFavDolphin
2021-01-24 23:22:26 +0000 UTCMmm just thought of somthing..... Maybe instead of quickening the breathing make it slightly louder closer to the end of the peace. Less is defiantly more though. You domt want them to be ear bleedingly loud. Subtpe coos might add to the atmosphere. These two are soppsed to be lovers yes? Its not cheap to have a vocalist record vocals. So monster noises are always a nice touch. But adding the level of vulnerability and tenderness helps. Sometime even adding a moaning coo as the subject "spooges" like at the end of this one it might be a good idea to add a subtle noise in place of a "Uhh mfff ugnnn" if you catch my meaning.
Shiiru
2021-01-22 09:39:12 +0000 UTCPerfect execution and attack time on the "slick" noises of the cock slided past. The vocals are great to. Maybe add some subtle breathing? Not in the forefront. But a subtle undertone. Have it quicken as it gets closer and closer to climax? I'm just thinking along the lines of "Can I visualize whats going on with my eyes closed?" Definitely superb though. Will test in a live fire test later XD.
Shiiru
2021-01-22 09:35:25 +0000 UTCLiterally everything in the audio is superb. The only improvements I would like to see done, are two things: •The rather rambunctious stomping of their feet •Vocalizations For the stomping, it sounds a little bit over the top. These wyverns don’t look to be super heavy so perhaps slightly less “stomping”? Instead, implementing something more suitable to their sizes, for they would be making a bit less noise, as they look to be rather nimble and lithe creatures, rather than super big. For the vocalizations, I mean there should be more “huffing” and “puffing”, especially when the two were initially courting each other and the female was licking the male’s shaft. All the other vocalizations by them was on point; I wouldn’t change a thing besides the “huffing” and “puffing.” <3 Damn fine job regardless.
TehAngryXeno
2021-01-21 13:41:43 +0000 UTCDamn that's really some great work! I really enjoy your animations already and the audio just takes it a step above!
Christopher Maikisch
2021-01-21 10:05:25 +0000 UTC
