This Romantic World Page 306
Added 2023-05-26 01:56:32 +0000 UTCI was a little concerned that Parker's kiss would seem to come out of nowhere, but I did establish in an earlier scene with Holly that Parker has a way of kissing girls when they make her feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
The sheer volume of word balloons I had to make room for here really hammers home to me how, when it comes to writing comics, there is zero room for a single word that doesn't NEED to be there. If I don't want my page to be a wall of text, sometimes I have to just hope that some things are easier enough for a reader to infer. In this case, I'm hoping it was clear enough that from Jane and Parker's point of view, Vincent had to be responsible for Lydia running off somehow. If somebody storms off suddenly, you're a lot more likely to guess it has something to do with who they were just having sex with than that there's a demon alien in their head pissing them off. Too bad for Vincent. XD
As always I'd like to hear what you think. I don't know what it is about this scene but I find myself staring down the barrel of dialog that would be easy to mess up quite a lot lately. Only one page left of this scene though, and then it's on to a whole new chapter of tricky dialog!
Comments
XD
Reinbach
2023-06-02 03:11:01 +0000 UTC"Strong enough to love the homies... too WEAK to kiss them!!!"
The Funny Hatter
2023-05-30 19:03:21 +0000 UTC:)
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:29:25 +0000 UTCNot that I can think of, really. Parker has a bit of a jealous streak forming, but Jane and Lydia are such close friends that might be enough for her to get around it.
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:29:19 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:28:30 +0000 UTCNot unthinkable! :)
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:28:11 +0000 UTCOh yeah, he'd be 100% on board here. :)
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:28:02 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:27:47 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:27:32 +0000 UTCI wondered if that was too much lol, but I personally really liked the idea that even after Isaac explained away two made up animals as Jane's lies, she still believed an even crazier third animal that he failed to address.
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:27:24 +0000 UTCWell I don't want to run my mouth on it too much because her psychosis may come up in the future, but for now I can say that it's men only that set her off.
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:25:59 +0000 UTCIf anything it wouldn't happen just because I personally find a cum burp to be too gross lol. XD
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:25:10 +0000 UTCLove it. XD
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:23:19 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:23:06 +0000 UTCThat is indeed the intention! :)
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:23:00 +0000 UTCGlad you think so! :)
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:22:48 +0000 UTCQuite so! :)
Reinbach
2023-05-29 21:22:38 +0000 UTCOh ๐ฅบ
omegazette
2023-05-27 07:28:08 +0000 UTCStill. Its Parker. If anyone can handle her cum. She can.
Slaughterbug
2023-05-26 22:15:44 +0000 UTCParker took the cum in her mouth. The other two got the creampies.
Angelo
2023-05-26 21:52:59 +0000 UTCWild part is that if parker/lydia/jane/Issac just like got together. . . .I don't think there'd be any problem between the four of them
PhantomZone
2023-05-26 20:28:04 +0000 UTCAwwww
frank barry
2023-05-26 15:06:41 +0000 UTCSo ... Jane/Parker/Lydia threesome when?
A Guy
2023-05-26 12:36:30 +0000 UTCI canโt imagine a reality where Issac isnโt okay with this
Vylon Delta
2023-05-26 05:12:03 +0000 UTCI believe in that situation it's called polyamory
alex baker
2023-05-26 04:05:21 +0000 UTCDamnit why do you got be a good writer and put this character development in my fap material?
alex baker
2023-05-26 04:04:07 +0000 UTCJust the wholesome I needed.
MechaBlerd
2023-05-26 04:00:43 +0000 UTCI'm glad you established Parker's gullibility a long time ago, otherwise that vampire coyote bit would seem silly.
Squid Hills
2023-05-26 03:54:18 +0000 UTCShe took all that cum in a creampie last sex scene. I'm pretty sure she's safe from a cum burp. Though even that would be cute.
Slaughterbug
2023-05-26 03:27:29 +0000 UTCYeah but Iโm also half expecting her to burp up some sperm into Lydiaโs mouth because she also a huge cumslut.
ShadowSkill
2023-05-26 03:05:33 +0000 UTCโฆam I a bad person for wondering if squirt affects Parker similarly? Also, now wondering if Parker and Issac are forming a harem
MAR
2023-05-26 02:53:38 +0000 UTCAwww. That's so cute. Parker is such an adorable sweetheart.
Slaughterbug
2023-05-26 02:44:28 +0000 UTCLove the page, hoping that Isaac pops the corner and tries to hide after the kiss lmao
logan schade
2023-05-26 02:31:39 +0000 UTCGreat page, I love character growth and seeing such a tough nut like Lydia grow is very satisfying. Also Parker for most wholesome girl.
llCDll
2023-05-26 02:12:05 +0000 UTCAhhh Parker, the true cinnamon bun of TRW
Taylored Printers
2023-05-26 02:04:09 +0000 UTCThis was so sweet and beautiful. ๐๐ Parker is an absolute angel.
Merjia
2023-05-26 01:59:19 +0000 UTCOooh, Parker doing a bit of gaying
Licorice Lain
2023-05-26 01:59:15 +0000 UTC
