Hard Enough - Chapter 290 - Training Camp Days II
Added 2025-01-07 19:00:06 +0000 UTC“Remind me what today’s task was,” I said as I fought the urge to rub at my temples.
I also fought the urge to lower my eyes to where the instigators for today’s… fiasco were all kneeling.
“It was to be a game of capture the flag with colour bags…” replied Misty.
“Capture the flag with colour bags,” I agreed with a slow nod. The smile on my face was not friendly. It was a rictus of muscles clenching in the wrong order as various ticks fought for primacy.
“Colour bags,” I repeated.
I lowered my gaze to the group of miscreants.
I knew they were a cluster of personalities that were going to cause friction with their histories, but I thought it might be a good idea to break them up, make them join different teams.
On the ground before me, Forrest, Misty, Ash, Gary, Bugsy, Mia, Ritchie, Dora, Silver and Pete Pebbleman were kneeling with various levels of contrition on display.
“So, who wants to explain to me how a game of colour tag evolves into…” I waved a hand at the section of the reserve that I’d set up for this game. “This,” I said.
It was meant to be a fun game. It was meant to be about team building and tactics with lessons in positioning, situational awareness, understanding of points of view and… well, none of that mattered now.
Parts of my reserve were so multicoloured my Graveler, Onix, and Aron looked like a rainbow had been poured over them.
Other parts were on fire. Rocks weren’t supposed to burn but when people brought out poison types and sprayed down sections before igniting them could cause fires to become very enduring.
Yet other parts of the area had clouds of colourful dust hanging in the air with small twisters keeping them going.
Finally, the pond's rainbow colouration made me worried about draining it due to poisons. If there wasn’t a ridiculously colourful Magikarp splashing around alongside a Feebas I might have done just that.
I swept my gaze straight back to the kneeling youths.
“So? Who wants to explain how this occurred?” I prompted.
I wasn’t surprised when they all tried to talk over the top of each other.
I sighed, knowing in my heart this was somehow all Brawly’s fault.
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Ash grinned. He’d forgone wearing his lucky cap today in case he got hit, not that he thought it would actually happen, but still. Today, he wore his team colours around his head with a coloured band.
There had only been a few tasks yesterday with points handed out for questions answered and engagement. There’d only been one round of matches against other teams, and Ash hadn’t exactly put his best foot forward.
He’d ended up fighting against a kid named Silver only for the three pokemon he’d chosen to fall short. Silver had won points for his Team with his victory, enough for Team Mystic to claim the victory for the first day and to get desert for them and their pokemon!
Worse, Gary had been right there to rub his loss in his face while enjoying ice cream!
But not today! Today he and his team were going to be the ones that enjoyed the ice cream!
He and all the others of Team Instinct had paid extra attention during their lessons, and they’d scored well. Not as well as Team Mystic, with how many smart kids they had, but still!
The scores were close enough that today’s exercise would tip the scales in Team Instinct's favour.
From there, they’d be the ones to get the desserts!
They just needed to win this game of capture of the flag.
Sadly, things weren’t looking good. From the get-go instead of Team Valour and Team Mystic fighting against each other they had made a beeline towards Team Instinct’s base.
This wasn’t how things were supposed to go.
“Get down!” Bugsy roared as he threw himself behind a boulder only to be forced to keep rolling when the boulder got up and tried to get out of the line of fire as no less than eight paint bombs were flung.
Bugsy wailed theatrically as four bombs went off, painting him in Red and Blues before he fainted to the ground only to get up and walk towards the ‘respawn’ area in the base with his hands held high.
“Fight on Team!” he called only to get another red bag to the face.
Ash shot to his feet. “Hey! He was knocked out! You’re not supposed to throw them at knocked-out people!”
“Down with Team Instinct!” shouted Pete Pebbleman Jnr and Ash had to throw himself to the side as Misty of all people followed Pete’s lead. She’d looked a bit too into it for Ash’s liking.
He flicked his own yellow bag and was satisfied to see the older boy get beaned in the head with a big puff of Yellow dust.
Pete grunted and turned to jog back to his own team’s base with a nod of respect towards Ash. Misty ducked and rolled behind cover, knowing what would be coming next.
Ash turned his attention to the others, his instincts flaring as he grabbed a brace of yellow bags between his fingers so he could flick them out in a spray that would push back his opponents. He had to be careful to conserve his ammunition as the assistants were only letting each person have ten bags.
Ash could do the math, and he knew he was going to have to get clever.
Thankfully, Physical Education was one of the things he’d aced in school. He sprinted out of cover, zig-zagging left and right while flicking bag after bag and leaving tagged foes in his path.
When he got to the last throw he realised he was lining up against Forrest and Forrest like him was dodging erratically while feinting.
Ash locked eyes and prepared for the toughest fight he’d had so far only for something else to catch his eye. Someone had thrown a pokeball instead of a powdered bag. It came on so fast and was such a surprise that Ash didn’t have any time to evade it.
So he braced and took the hit to his ribs only to skid back.
Around him, other Team Instinct trainers were calling foul and drawing their own pokeballs and before he knew it people were dropping the coloured bags in favour of starting a proper pokemon brawl.
Forrest stiffened. “Guys! Stop! Stop!” he shouted, waving his hands to try and calm things down only for others on Team Instinct to see him as a sitting duck, resulting in a deluge of colour bags being thrown.
Yellow powder exploded off Forrest, and he staggered out of the cloud coughing and spluttering with yellow powder all over his form. A follow-up pokeball smacked him in the forehead and sent him staggering back into the cloud.
Instead of merely being recalled the pokeball instead disgorged its pokemon.
“Muuuuuuuk!” roared the pokemon, looming large over Forrest who shrieked in surprise and scuttled away. This resulted in more pokemon appearing and soon an all out brawl was occurring with pokemon clashing.
Grass types were sneakily tripping people up with vines while water types were hosing off others. The Muk from earlier was leaving a large trail of toxic slime as it pursued Forrest who was fumbling blindly at his own pokebelt.
Ash grabbed for his pokeballs. “Come on out Butterfree! Pidgeot! And Charizard!”
“Blow away the powders!” He ordered his pokemon flying pokemon only to shoot out a hand towards Charizard. “Take out those grass types that are tripping people up!”
Charizard use—” was as far as he got when Forrest unleashed a trio of his own pokemon. The Steel-type pokemon all turned on Muk and sent it flying through the air.
It splattered out wide when it landed before shifting back into a tall, coherent form.
“Leave Muk alone! He just wanted to hug you! He’s overly affectionate!” called a girl that Ash vaguely remembered as being named Dora. Ash whirled about, confused as Muk bristled.
“Ash look out your Charizard is—” Forrest started to yell and Ash twisted back around only to watch in horror as Charizard’s tail touched a part of the slime trail, causing it to ignite.
“Oh shoot!”
“Blastoise! Put out that fire!” called Gary as he made himself known. Blastoise emerged, and its twin cannons pointed directly at Charizard and the flames.
Ash didn’t have any time to get his pokemon out of there as a huge wave of water saw it getting splashed around while Forrest was shouting something about chemical fires.
The water certainly washed the fires away, but as soon as the water receded the fires returned, albeit in a wider section causing Gary to blanch. “What did you do Ashy boy?”
“Nothing! Stop blasting my pokemon!” Ash shouted heatedly.
The sound of air horns and whistles started to cut through the noises, but Ash didn’t have any attention to spare for the Team Leaders and the various Gym Trainers getting involved.
Charizard emerged from the soaking slumped over. Small twitches gave away how furious it was. Ash instantly zeroed in on him forcing him to ignore how Butterfree and Pidgeot were starting to clash with other flying types while rocks were being thrown to neutralise them.
Ash didn’t have to worry about them, they were well used to dodging Rock Throw and Stone Edges thanks to training against Forrest during their Journey.
“Charizard, it’s alright, buddy we need to calm things down!” Ash called, reaching out a hand while reaching for the energy that he’d discovered while napping during Forrest’s ‘meditation sessions’.
Ash felt himself connect, only for an inferno of annoyance and irritation to wash over him as Charizard threw back his head and roared out his feelings.
“Ashy Boy, don’t try to get cute! Remember! Fire types are weak to water types!” Gary sing-songed as he toyed with Blastoise’s pokeball while the giant tortoise pokemon shifted behind him, its cannons readjusting to target Charizard
Ash felt his own annoyance spike, adding to that of Charizard’s. Ash and Gary locked eyes and Ash just knew he couldn’t back down now, only for another voice to announce itself.
“Tch! This is what everyone’s getting worked up about?” called Silver from atop a small boulder. He had his arms crossed over his chest and his cloak was flapping dramatically.
“You’re all such children,” he said with a derisive shake of his head.
Ash smirked. “And you’re not standing on a rock!” he said kicking a pebble so that it struck the boulder.
The boulder rose, sending Silver falling off it with a squawk, only for his fall to be broken when Bugsy ran under him. “Hey guys, we should reall—” called Bugsy only to be cut off. “I can’t see!” Bugsy shouted as he began flailing about in the cloak only for Silver to be dragged along by the shouting bug specialist.
Misty announced herself once more. “Think fast Forrest!” she shouted, throwing her red bags haphazardly so that they’d clearly miss. Only for them to all somehow hit Forrest.
For a moment there Ash could have sworn he saw Forrest step into some of the thrown bags but that couldn’t be right.
Before Ash could take Misty out, another girl leapt from the dust. “Pewter trainers ho!” screamed Mia, only to trip and tackle Misty to the ground. Her long rattail hair braid twisted itself around both girls, and they fell to the ground with a squeal.
A sudden woosh tore through the battlefield as a grey blur cut through the air, resulting in huge clouds of powder and dust being blown away. All of the flying-type pokemon wobbled and some of the weaker pokemon ended up being blown away while others rallied in attempts to fight back.
They combined their efforts only for the now-revealed pair of Aerodactyls to flap their wings and counter with Whirlwinds.
The larger of the pair cackled and shrieked with glee, taunting the weaker pokemon.
Ash felt his annoyance shift into outright anger as Charizard and he caught sight of the stronger pokemon bullying Ash’s team.
Charizard didn’t need a verbal order to unleash a Flamethrower up at Aerodactyl only for it to be dodged.
The Aerodactyl shot them a glare before cackling at them mockingly.
The fire of indignation rose up within Charizard only for something else to spark within the inferno. Ash gasped as a wave powerful Inferno was unleashed only for the Aerodactyl to return fire with a Hyper Beam of all things!
Ash threw himself behind a boulder only to feel craggy arms wrap around him to protect him from the heat, flames and a huge shockwave rocked the area.
The fires Charizard had unleashed splashed aorund and ignited yet more poison slime causing an even greater hazard.
Ash risked peeking over the top of the boulder only to find a destroyed section of the field with his Charizard staggering to his feet while the other trainers who’d been around for the fight were all tucked up behind various Graveler and Golem who’d been hiding in the ground.
“Everyone stop now!” roared Brock as he emerged with two Tyranitars, a Steelix, a Lapras, and his Rhyperior.
The Aerodactyl quickly flapped over to join Brock and Ash gaped. Now it was pretending it had nothing to do with this mess?
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—and then you had us come and sit down as we were the only ones that hadn’t stopped fighting or running around like we were on fire,” Ash said, repeating my own words from when I’d detained him and his ‘group’.
I rubbed at my temples. I had been half expecting Bertha to be involved in the entire affair in some manner, but then again her antics were usually much more fun and harmless. Don joining in the brawl and blowing people’s pokemon and adding the chaos of the entire event was all too expected.
It was rather amusing that Don’s taunting of Ash’s pokemon led to Chrazird getting a ‘power up’ with what sounded like Overheat. I’d need to tap Flannery to spend some time with Ash to help him get his pokemon under control.
I suspected Flannery wouldn’t mind the suggestion at all either.
“Who threw pokeballs?” I asked.
Instead of raising their hands and admitting to wrongdoing, the group pointed at each other.
I sighed. “This got very, very out of control. There was a reason I suggested pokemon like Pikachu and Sparkie weren’t to join in. I even instructed people to not release pokemon at the start, did I not?” I prompted.
The group squirmed. “We didn’t! We just used our powderballs until someone didn’t listen and then we had to defend ourselves!” Pete Pebbleman Jnr proclaimed loudly.
I shot him a look. How he thought that argument would sway me, I had no idea. He had a loud voice and a bigger frame than most of his age group, but damn, he was still just a kid.
I suppose that was the issue here more than anything. I was dealing with kids. Kids with chips on their shoulders and a lot of reasons to get into fights.
I rubbed my temples. “I’m going to have to punish everyone for this… fiasco,” I said pointedly. The idea of evicting them from the camp came up, but I felt that was too much. Still, I couldn’t just give them a slap on the wrists for this either.
“First of all, everyone here is going to have points from their team deducted. Tonight, I will be instructing everyone that due to today’s events, there will not be a prize for best performance meaning no treats for anyone or their pokemon teams,” I said to start things off.
There we go, a bit of communal punishment to make people pull their heads in thanks to peer pressure. A few of them squawked at this but I shot my hand up and silenced them with a gesture.
“Secondly,” I said pointedly, letting them know that I had more planned for them. “All of you are going to be cleaning up the pond, without your pokemon helping you,” I added quickly when some of them relaxed. “There are hoses and buckets by the sheds. I want you to work together and get it done.”
Forrest raised a hand. “I read on the packets that the powder will just degrade into…” he trailed off when he looked at me.
“I know what the packets say, I also know that I shouldn’t have to be wasting my time lecturing you on this. This is time that you could have been enjoying with others training and practising new things, instead, you’re going to be doing a pointless task because you have wasted my time.”
I hadn’t been about to tell them all that initially but damn Forrest doing actual due diligence, then again perhaps it reinforced that they were not doing anyone any favours with how things had gone down.
“If I think I need to add to this later on… I may still do such.” I levelled a pointed look at all of them. “You are all on very thin ice. Do not make me expel you from this camp,” I stated, causing them to stiffen.
“We’ll be good!” “Sorry!” “We just got caught up in the moment!” “Was just backing my team!” “I was just standing there!” shouted or pleaded various kids.
I waved a hand. “Just… start cleaning the pond,” I said with a wave of my hand.
I turned and marched away to inform Dennis of the punishment I’d given out before also giving him the heads up about rescinding tonight’s prize.
“We’ve already got it in the freezers though? That’s a lot of goods,” he suggested.
“Give it to the Gym trainers and their pokemon instead,” I suggested. “Where are Flannery, Roxanne, and Brawly?” I asked.
“They’re with the rest of their teams over there with Rocko,” Dennis said, waving his hand towards the larger tents we’d set up.
I nodded marching over only to find the trio glaring at each other. Or rather Brawly and Flannery were glaring while Roxanne made consoling gestures.
“Right, you three with me,” I declared, collecting them up and making them follow as I strode into the Gym proper and then my office. I had them sit in front of my desk like naughty school children.
“Alright, before the training camp started I would have said that you three were the perfect people to have as Team Leaders for the various groups with the skills and experience you bring. Better yet, it played perfectly into each of your desires to help foster younger trainers' skills. But then we started the training camp and instead of that I’ve had to deal with…” I waved a hand at all three of them.
“What the hell happened?”
Roxanne squirmed. “It doesn’t matter,” she said dejectedly.
This caused Brawly to squirm and Flannery to glare harder at Brawly. “It does matter!” Flannery growled.
Brawly shot her a look that all but said ‘stay out of it!’ but she wasn’t having a bar of that.
“Roxanne’s been strung along by mister playboy here!” Flannery said, pointing a finger directly into Brawly’s face.
“I have not! I’m just a friendly guy is all!” Brawly said pointedly.
“So all the sitting together, the cuddles? Teaching her how to ride a surfboard? The walks together in Celedon Gardens? Flannery hissed.
“Guys stop! It doesn’t matter!” Roxanne said as her two friends obviously grew more agitated.
“Stop saying it doesn’t matter! It does!” Flannery said. “Don’t let him walk all over you!”
“I’m not!” Roxanne stated.
I clapped my hands and silenced them with the small thunderclap I unleashed.
“Alright, speed round,” I declared. I pointed at Roxanne. “What happened on the night of your celebration dinner?”
“I… decided to confess my feelings for Brawly.” Roxanne blushed. “I told Brawly I wanted to date him, as a boyfriend and girlfriend and he… said we shouldn’t date. That it was a terrible idea.”
Roxanne looked down at the ground, and Brawly squirmed as I looked at him. “That’s correct.”
“I mean…. Yes?” he said. “We wouldn’t work out. She wants to be a Gym Leader, and I want to roam around a bit more! I… I don’t want to settle down!”
I blinked, feeling a sense of recognition at his words. In my past life, I’d gotten the chance to finish school and attend university. In a way, I’d very much regressed in maturity with unsupervised access to alcohol, social events, women and good times.
Back then, I had been approached by a few ladies looking to deepen their relationships with me. However, I hadn’t been looking for a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship and denied them.
At first glance, Brawly was doing much the same.
Despite it appearing that he and Roxanne would do well together, Brawly wasn’t ready for that. It wasn’t a terrible thing to declare that you didn’t want a relationship of that nature.
Even if I’d been sure that the ‘Broxy’ relationship had been about to set out from port properly.
I drummed my fingers, knowing this was going to need to be navigated delicately.
“Hmmm, I can see how that would affect your friendships,” I decided to say eventually. “Brawly… has the right to say no, just as Roxanne would if she’d been approached by Brawly instead of the opposite occurring.”
“But he’s been practical—” Flannery started to say, only for me to raise a hand.
“Have you or Brawly ever kissed or done more?”
“More?” Roxanne said before blushing as her mind caught up with what I was suggesting.
Flannery didn’t let the conversation's subtext remain merely subtext, however, and dragged it to the front. “He means did you sleep together?”
“No!” “No, we didn’t!” said Brawly and Roxanne together.
I huffed and waved my hand. “Alright, that’s all good and well. Roxanne, I can see how things have been built up with all your previous interactions. I honestly thought you were already dating.”
Roxanne nodded glumly, and Brawly squirmed. “I didn’t mean to make it seem like I was leading you along.”
Roxanne just nodded. “I.. understand, and I’m sorry for lashing out like I did.”
I hummed and looked to Flannery. “Flannery, I can understand you trying to be a good friend to Roxanne, but stirring up the Camp attendees has really caused this to blow up way worse than a rejected confession.”
“It wasn’t just…” Flannery said before clamping her jaw shut. Roxanne and Brawly shot her confused looks. Flannery worked her jaw. “Roxy, babe? Can you step outside for a second?” she asked.
A flicker of confusion appeared in Roxanne’s eyes before she nodded and stepped outside. The second the door shut, Flannery locked her gaze on Brawly.
“After you rejected Roxy, what did you do?” she said firmly.
“I went back to my room in the hotel I rented to give Roxanne some space?” he replied, unsure where this was going. I flicked my eyes between the pair. Flannery had a look of vindication like one would see from a lawyer in a court drama who’d just had the criminal step into their trap.
Flannery gave a tight smile. “Did you go there by yourself? Alone?” she said pointedly, and I felt an inkling of understanding creep in.
Brawly stiffened. “Oh…”
Flannery’s eyes, if anything, began to flicker with an inner fire. “Yes, oh. I saw you meet up with the floozy! What the actual fuck Brawly?! You flirt and play around with Roxanne until she confesses, then reject her only to sleep around less than an hour later?”
Brawly raised a hand. “Now, that’s not what happened. This and that are separate incidents! And Shelia isn’t a floozy!” he said.
I put my head in my hands at his all-but confession. “Oh man,” I said. “Brawly, that’s not cool, man. Not cool,” I said.
“They’re separate issues!” he said defensively.
Flannery snorted. “They aren’t!”
“They are!” Brawly denied. “Brock, come on, man back me up!” he pleaded.
I raised my hands. “Nope! Not it! I’m not touching that! I’m touching on the issue of this whole…” I waved a hand at Flannery and Brawly. “Thing, blowing up in our faces.”
Although I could now understand a lot more of the context of why Roxanne was annoyed, Flannery was pissed, and Brawly… well, he didn’t and did have a leg to stand on.
He just shouldn’t have done some things so close together.
“This… thing definitely could have been handled… better,” I said simply, deciding to leave it at that. “I can see tensions are running high right now. I… Don’t have a solution to this, and I need people that can work together. There’s been a lot of miscommunication, as I see it, that has been exacerbated by…. Events,” I said while pointedly not looking at Brawly.
“I’ll have to ask all three of you to step back as Team Leaders for the rest of the camp,” I said.
Flannery stiffened. “Brock, can I ask you to keep Roxy on as Team Leader? She loves it, and it would do her good!”
I considered her for a moment before deciding to shake my head. “No, this is a lesson for her. For lack of a better metaphor off the top of my head, she might not have been throwing as much fuel onto the fire, but we still had an explosion. Each of you will step down, and I’ll have Gym Trainers take over,” I said. “You can still tutor young trainers and I would appreciate that, but I’m going to have to change things up.”
Flannery nodded, and I rose to bring Roxy back in to tell her the news. She deflated a little but accepted it well enough before bowing and apologising. The two girls departed, and Brawly remained.
“Brock, I’m sorry that things went this way. I didn’t think it would,” I raised a hand to cut him off.
“You didn’t think,” I announced clearly. “I get that passions were running… high,” I said carefully. “But damn, man… that could have been handled better.”
Brawly squirmed before nodding. “Right, you’re right. Sorry again.”
“Yeah, me too.” I considered saying something else to show I understood but decided to leave it at just that. Brawly departed and I exhaled a huge sigh of relief.
Damn, I had a ton of work to do to salvage the situation and bleed tensions. I started typing up the changes I was going to have to make.
I’d need to adjust tomorrow’s excursion and elevate Jackson, Missy, and… I chewed my lip and added Dennis to the list of new Team Leaders before a chime made me look at my Xtransceiever.
“Brock here,” I answered before a memory stirred. “Oh shoot, I’m late, aren’t I?” I declared as I recalled the psychologist appointment I’d booked in.
“You are indeed Brock. This is Doctor Lauren. I assume something has happened at the Gym?” announced a kindly voice, as the image showed a middle-aged woman wearing half-moon spectacles.
“Ahahaha, you could say that, just drama drama drama here as usual!” I said as I furiously started closing things up so I could rush out the door.
“Brock I can see you’re rushing, how about for today’s session we do it over the phone and you lock your office door?”
I paused, about to exit the room. “Are you sure? I can make it to your office in five minutes if you’d prefer?”
“What I’d prefer is for you to relax, and I don’t think rushing about is going to help. I can see a comfortable-looking couch. Sit down and breathe. I know we have a lot to cover and discuss with this being our first session, but, let's get to know each other. Believe me, I’m not at all worried about doing this over the phone. In fact I rather enjoy it as it has allowed me time to have a small break and get a cup of tea for myself!” she said with a small laugh as she raised a mug towards me.
I settled down on the couch. This wasn’t the start to my therapy sessions I’d have liked, but perhaps it wasn’t so bad.
“What should we talk about?” I said after a moment of silence between us.
Dr Lauren smiled. “Anything at all is fine.”
I shifted on the couch. I wasn’t sure I was ready to attempt working on the… situation that was my family, but I wouldn’t mind getting neutral parties take on the clusterfuck that had been dropped into my lap that was the Roxy-Brawly-Flannery situation. “Can we talk about what happened at the Gym just now which has made this call necessary?” I asked.
“That sounds perfect!” she said, and I already felt better knowing I had someone I could talk to about this.
That was neutral to the whole situation. I had no doubt that when I spoke with Sabrina about today’s events and revelations tonight, she’d need to be talked down from smacking Brawly around the head a few times.
Then again I had my own gripes with Brawly over the whole incident. The guy was my friend and I somewhat got it, but Arceus damn if I would mind slapping him over the head for not thinking!
Or rather, thinking with the wrong head.
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A.N. Thanks go to my patreons for your continued support.
I originally was going to have it as just a rejection but then I felt like that didn’t have enough oomph to inspire the annoyance from Flannery at Brawly. Him doing something dumb after kind of works out well as a thoughtless act though.
Thanks go to Twmmy for Proofreading this chapter!
Comments
Brawly did nothing wrong lmao
fireball77
2025-09-27 13:25:47 +0000 UTCI would say blame here goes mostly to the girls with the lions share to flannery We dont know how long ago this talk happened, but I doubt it was longer than a week so I gave roxane faaaaar less blame if it happened a day or two before the camp because she was just rejected by who was turning to be her best male friend. But still blame her for how unprofessional this turned out For flannery? We dont know how long brawly and shelia were a thing. They could have gotten together on that beach thing with the lapras. I think that was a few weeks BEFORE he met his fellow future gym leaders. Basically i see both flannery and brawly as social butterflys but i have never seen them say personal things besides flannary make a joke about her cousin having a meltdown so she could get the gym leaders position. Add in her hot headedness and i could definitely see brawly be a bit… leery? Of sharing relationship stuff with her. The thing is we dont know how long he was with shelia, how their relationship has progressed, or anything. For all we know shelia could technically be calling either roxane or flannery the “other woman” but we dont know Will be interesting to see though
Donald Bagwell
2025-01-10 20:26:44 +0000 UTCIf it helps, with the end of the circuit you have a built in “graduation” for most of these characters. Like how the Pokémon anime has maybe a cast of 15-20 reoccurring characters composed of gymleaders, notable NPCs and villain characters, that once Ash left that region would only have 2-6 of them show up again in other regions. Depending on if your having Brock still engaged with Ash’s journey and have each circuit focused on the politics of that year, I think it’d be fine to have the 3-4 chapters saying where Brock’s Mentees are focusing their time this year, then not mentioning them until the year is over. Keep them in the background while everything else is happening. And I imagine most of the trainers from the surge are going to return to their region of origin and maybe beyond a handful of them, we’ll never hear from them except in passing or for 1-2 chapters. There’s also another opportunity it have the “building safe passage to new regions” taking an insane amount of trainers and support to help accomplish and can just toss NPCs into the project and then ignore them for 6 months. That way while you continue to build out this world, there’s only 20-30 “active” players for the reader to keep track of. Which is still a large number but I’m still enjoying it and don’t have an issue with the number of POVs and characters yet. So mileage may vary.
Chris
2025-01-10 16:38:36 +0000 UTCRoxanne comes across in this fic as fairly meek, and this situation might be a learning point for her that if she wants to be a gym leader she can't be like that.
Alyxandar
2025-01-09 09:35:12 +0000 UTCI agree, there's a lot of characters and it's hard to remember sometimes who they are, what they did, and when/how we met them. That's not just human characters either, pokemon nicknames can lean into this a bit as well when they are a pokemon that doesn't come up very often (eg Swampert).
Alyxandar
2025-01-09 09:33:17 +0000 UTCTo a large extent, I think this is a personal taste thing. Speaking for myself, I've never minded getting chapters from other POVs. There's often things that people can share from other perspectives that we wouldn't be able to get from Brock, and I usually enjoy those quite a bit. I can't deny that we might be getting some perspectives from characters I don't really care about though. Honestly, I forgot Pete and Silver existed in this story, and I'm not sure they're actually adding value. I didn't mind having Pete's POV, for example, but I do feel like that POV could have come from basically any other character who was in the thick of things, some of whom might actually be more relevant and/or interesting. Humphrey, for example. I don't even know if he came to the training camp, but he's one of the minor characters who I actually wish we could hear more about. We don't get much about him, but whenever he's in a chapter, I find his character really compelling. I don't know if anyone else remembers or cares about him, but I kind of feel like he's an underdog who needs someone cheering for him to get through his struggles.
Ixta
2025-01-09 00:53:13 +0000 UTClol like I do in Red Riot? But yeah you're right in that it wouldn't be such a bad idea to have that inbuilt into the story to help... it's jsut one of those things that I am sort of constnatly chasing my tail with jobs at home, looking after daughter, writing, helping my family. I think it's a good idea tbh and one I should start including more.
Viva01
2025-01-08 23:52:43 +0000 UTC@Viva01 If I could make one suggestion that could be added with minimal disruption to your writing flow more quickly - you could add a character list at the start of chapters, at least for any POV characters. (ex.) Ave Xia Rem Y does this in all chapters regardless and I find it helpful if I've gotten some character mixed up to be able to read a sentence reminding me who this person is (in their case, it's more of a necessity since they use eastern naming conventions and 'dao names' that can change but the principle is still solid even without the same desperate need that their story has). They also add little blurbs about how the character is thinking and feeling in that chapter (ex. in your series it'd be like: **Brock**- MC and Primary Protagonist. Feeling exasperated), which I don't think is necessary in your case but you might consider if you find the process fun to write. If you package the chapters later into a book for sale, you can just remove it at that time, or add one instance of each name in the back as an appendix section. For someone releasing chapters episodically and with two different ongoing stories, I think having a quick character summary in any form at the start will really help the reader anchor themselves before consuming the chapter.
nugitoBambino
2025-01-08 18:46:11 +0000 UTCProbably doesn't help that I also have a very different style of story occuring with Red Riot so for the readers jumping between them the difference is magnified. Red Riot has huge chapters where progresison happens in big marked ways while Hard Enough is a slower exploration of the pokemon world I've created. I try and Show a lot of stuff rather than tell but it can fall into showing too much certainly. There's a lot of good points being discussed here by the way and a lot of things I will try and reflect on. Not sure if I can change too much straight away but yeah, it will be somehting I try and keep track of.
Viva01
2025-01-08 11:58:32 +0000 UTCAll points to terrible leadership brought on by personal drama in the workplace. This will serve as a teaching lesson for both their leadership skills as gym leaders and in the personal/professional relationship with each other later on. Especially since in the games and anime, they are earliest gyms you face so meaning they would have to work together more closely. Also something similar happened in the manga with Steven and Winona. Although all that aside, it's good to see that the kids like Forrest see the errors of their way Especially Forrest, misty and bugsy since they come from gym families and at least 2 of them become future gym leaders. I would also count Gary in this equation bc depending on the game he does eventually replace lance and Giovanni as gym leader and Kanto champion. On the other note, I'm glad brock is getting that professional help and I wonder if we find out who threw the pokeball that started the fight.
Saby Arrieta
2025-01-08 10:05:09 +0000 UTChmm yah know i haven't minded it. I do thinking we're getting towards the 'limit' but I usually base this kind of alternative POV's on if the author is supporting the narrative of the MC. I actually just recommended another author increase their use of POVs for enhancing narrative (although they're closer to the other extreme than what you're bring up). In this case, I think I agree Ash's narrative didn't add much here. We just didn't need to know what happened to follow Brock's thinking, and I didn't feel like it emphasized the narrative in a 'rule of cool' or 'rule of funny' sense that I usually use to view these intra-chapter narratives. Then again, I really liked the touch of Forrest stepping into Misty's paint balls, I think that was really cute, maybe even my favorite little moment of the entire chapter (even though I'm pretty sure he was already out, but that just makes it funnier to me). That said, I didn't feel like I needed the technical explanation / walkthrough on what happened. And we could have, maybe, gotten the forestXmisty interaction another way. So yeah idk. Honestly, I think we wouldn't even notice the pov shift if we didn't get the chapters in installments. When you wait for a chapter it's much more noticeable when MC's you aren't expecting are used. Even if we saw looking at the whole narrative/story that it was strategically enhanced even if these _individual_ chapters felt like they had too much alt povs. man idk I'm just thinking aloud before bed lol.
nugitoBambino
2025-01-08 09:09:00 +0000 UTCIt's an interesting challenge for an author, that's for sure. Introduce too few side characters and/or alternate POVs and the story can feel shallow and the MC one-dimensional. Introduce too many and the story can drag on or feel lost and meandering. Taking a step back, I can think of two general archetypes that "successful" side characters seem to take: establishing specific side stories that will rejoin with the main story in some sort of unexpected, unusual, or opportune manner; or viewing the MC from a "neutral" or "outside" perspective to either expose a facet of their character that may not be obvious or reinforce something that the reader already "knows". I don't want to get too in the weeds, but I think Viva has successfully taken both of those approaches at various times. For the former, Ash & Co. seem ideally suited to discover and kick off certain events before bringing them back to the MC. And for the latter, I think of chapters like the one from Empress' perspective shortly after joining Brock. All this to say that I don't think Viva has a glaring flaw or weakness in their writing style in this regard (like some other popular stories and authors who shall remain nameless), I just think they've leaned a bit too far in one direction in recent times. On a related note, I think timeskips are often underappreciated and underutilized to allow characters to grow and stories to progress. As long as the foundations have been set for how and why certain characters will act they're a way for events to occur without having to write or describe them in detail.
Matt H
2025-01-08 06:32:39 +0000 UTCI too have noticed this overload of characters. There have been chances to reduce character count (like AJ with the circus) and the author instead chooses to bend the situation in such a way that they keep the character. I think it's this author's flaw. You know how some authors loose plot lines? Or struggle to write fight scenes? Viva struggles to let characters go once they add them to the story. No matter how minor, they *will* be making reappearances for the rest of the story and will not leave at any point. Hopefully Viva learns to let characters go. Because it's kind of hard for readers to keep them all straight. (It's also hard for Viva to balance a character list in the triple digits and it's starting to show) Ideally, I would say drop AJ, Silver, and Pete from the character count. Like, sure, they can reapear in the background from time to time, but it isn't necessary for readers to remember these characters. I also think that chapters told from Ash, Gary, Misty, Yolanda's friends, and all of Brock's siblings POV should be dropped. While I love these characters, I haven't found their POV's to add anything to the story (yes, that includes the whole circus story arc. I think we could have gotten that plot wrapped up from someone giving Brock a synopsis during a Brock POV chapter).
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-08 05:46:49 +0000 UTC*moves hand in a so-so gesture* Personally I have seen Brawly as a rather socially adept character throughout the story. So I find it hard to believe he didn't notice the girls were starting something when even Brock and the kids - who were both completely uninvolved - noticed something was up. But I can see it from your perspective. Also, just to be clear here, I am not saying this situation getting out of hand was all Brawly's fault. I would say ~60% of the blame lies with Flannery, ~25% with Roxanne and only ~10% with Brawly. And that 10% is because he should have realized the women were escalating the problem and should have delt with it sooner or reached out to let Brock know. (Brock gets the remaining 5% of the blame because you're right; he should have taken the three aside on the first day when he initially noticed the issue).
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-08 05:24:07 +0000 UTCTaking a slight sidestep from the discussion of Brawly's actions: unless I'm miscounting there's been a grand total of two chapters in the past month that have been entirely from Brock's perspective. Normally, I'm all for a bit of world building, but these last two weeks have really felt like there's a bloat of characters. To be blunt: I don't care about characters like Silver, Pete Pebbleman, etc. In another story at another time, sure, I might care about them; but we already have SO MANY characters that are either close to Brock or are canonically important. Coming into this training camp there were a variety of threads you could've pursued: the training (and relationships) of the future Hoenn Gym Leaders, Forrest's return, Ash and all his shenanigans, Brock's other newly sponsored trainers, some outside perspective, etc. Instead, it seems like you've decided to try to pursue ALL of them instead of trying to do one or two well. I have and continue to love this story, but you're suffering from a bloat of characters before even leaving Kanto and I'm concerned what the future may hold: we're nearly 300 chapters in and haven't even covered a single calendar year, if I'm correct.
Matt H
2025-01-08 04:08:58 +0000 UTC"Brawly was aware the girls were out for him" Was he though? I mean, yeah, they did stand up and say they were going to crush Team Instinct, but that was really it. Brawly seems to take it as a joke, and we don't really know what he was thinking at that point. Even if he did think they were teaming up because they were annoyed at him, that doesn't mean he'd immediately assume that they'd take it as far as they did. Flannery spilling personal information to justify their crusade was waaaaaayyyyy out of line. But on that note, it does seem like Brock was aware that something was up anyway. I rechecked the last chapter, and he tried to subtly get Roxanne and Flannery in line twice that I saw. But Viva writes that Flannery ignores it or doesn't even notice. So even though Brock isn't at "fault" for the situation at all, he probably needs to use this as a learning experience to handle potential situations more quickly when he sees some warning signs.
Ixta
2025-01-08 02:45:28 +0000 UTC@Jordan For me, the personal issue and the professional issue are completely separate. Brawly being a player isn't something that I like or approve of, and if we were just hearing the story of the relationship drama alone, I'd be more sympathetic to Roxanne's sadness and Flannery's anger. But when it comes to who is getting specific blame for what happened in the training camp, it's completely different. When on the job, Brawly was being professional. He didn't have any reason to bring up the drama, because he didn't plan to act on the drama and he had zero idea that Flannery was planning to spill the tea to bunch of kids and cause even more drama. Sure, if he had known the situation was turning toxic, he should have said something, but he didn't know. So yeah, regardless of the quality of his personal life choices, his professional choices were correct. Show up, do the job, act like drama outside of work doesn't exist for as long as you're at work. I'd like to see a Roxanne pov though. I know she was sad and I sympathize, but she knew what Flannery was doing. She's the one who should have gone to Brock to tell him that her personal situation was turning toxic and that it was going to be a problem.
Ixta
2025-01-08 02:08:34 +0000 UTC@Ixta Normally I would agree with you, but after the first day Brawly was aware the girls were out for him and he should have looped Brock into the situation at that point. Not saying he should have made Brock mediator, but rather a "Hey, the women and I are having a spat. I thought they would be professional and keep it outside the workplace, but they aren't so here is the situation..." and let Brock do what he would from there. (Maybe Brock could have let Brawly play a different role in the camp? Maybe Brock would let the women go and keep Brawly at camp? Idk. No way to know cuz that didn't happen)
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-08 01:59:49 +0000 UTCI really like your comment overall! Well thought out and written. I wanted to comment specifically on this though: "I *think* his wrong was in bringing this level of drama to the office without warning the employer" Honestly, I don't think this is a wrong choice for Brawly. In the vast majority of cases, if you have issues with work colleagues outside of work, about something other than work, then it should stay outside of work. The boss doesn't need to know about interpersonal drama and it really not the boss's job to work as a mediator for relationship issues. Literally the only time you should talk to the boss about your drama is if you have to warn your employer because you're specifically anticipating a workplace impact that you can't control in any other way. In this case, I don't think Brawly had any idea that Flannery would spill the tea to the kids and take things this far, so he had no reason to bring it up, and every reason to act like it never happened for every moment that they're on the job. Roxanne though... She might be the one who is actually guilty of this. She knew what Flannery was planning, and she's the only one whose pov we didn't get. So either she was complicit in the revenge plot, or she failed to stop Flannery. If she was against it and failed to stop Flannery, then she should have been the one who went to Brock and warned him that her personal drama was about to cause problems.
Ixta
2025-01-08 01:45:01 +0000 UTCI think it's fair to say that all three played a role, but I disagree with your analysis overall. Regardless of how anyone feels about Brawly's choices in his personal life, it doesn't matter, because that's his personal life. Maybe he was leading Roxy on, or maybe Flannery helped hype Roxy up to see things that weren't there because of her own enthusiasm for the ship. It still doesn't matter though. None of them should have brought it to Brock or Sabrina because personal drama is supposed to stay personal drama and not come to work. Out of the 3, Brawly is literally the only one who showed up ready to work and be professional. He didn't bring up the drama, he didn't plan to act on the drama, he didn't know that Flannery was planning to cause more drama. Flannery was the root cause of literally all the drama that happened specifically at the training camp, and Roxy is at fault for knowing Flannery's plan, and either approving of the plan or total failure to stop Flannery from enacting the plan. She's a strong and capable character, we've seen that already. Sure, she was hurt, but she should have known that letting Flannery act out like this was a bad idea, and if she couldn't stop Flannery, then that's the only time someone should have gone to Brock to tell him about what was going on, so he could stop Flannery from causing problems. That's what it means to be professional, and these 3 are all aspiring gym leaders. They should all be putting the gym event first when they're at the gym. But instead, Flannery sabotaged a major event to act out her feelings. That's why I'm saying it was mainly Flannery's fault. Because all I care about in this situation is that drama should stay at home when you're at work.
Ixta
2025-01-08 01:18:14 +0000 UTCI'll fix this up
Viva01
2025-01-08 00:57:36 +0000 UTCVery nicely rationalised.
Viva01
2025-01-08 00:57:03 +0000 UTCYeah pretty much I'd agree with all of this. Brawly isn't required to date her for being nice to her and being friendly. Roxanne's feelings got hurt and Flannery saw something that predisposed her to being pissed with Brawly. We pointedly don't learn if Roxanne herself saw this same interaction or worked it out. The timing of Brawly hooking up with another girl is really the thing that sort of adds a sting to it all. It's miscommunicaiton all around but pretty standard for young drama.
Viva01
2025-01-08 00:53:34 +0000 UTCNice update
Monzter E
2025-01-08 00:51:21 +0000 UTCI think he would have, but he subconsiously was aware that he had another appointment shortly. So he probably cut the meeting a little short because he had something else to get to. But also, it's not Brock's job to teach his friends proper work etiquette. He was their employer in this situation and entrusted them with impressionable kids. They betrayed that trust by teaching those kids bad behavior. Just like any other employer, he isn't obligated to layout every step where they messed up. He can just say "you were unprofessional" and terminate their employment. Honestly, taking them aside to ask them why they were acting that way was very generous when you consider just how bad they were... (using children as props for a grudge is super uncool).
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-07 23:55:30 +0000 UTCI don't really think Brawly was in the wrong at all here. First of all, while we know he turned down Roxie and later went out with Sheila we don't know if Sheila was a spur of the moment thing or if he already had plans with her in advance. Ie Sheila may have already made her move and got a date with him first and canceling with her at the last second because he rejected another girl would be weird and really sucky of him. Secondly, him putting the "moves" on Roxie and sending "mixed signals" by teaching her to surf is iffy. Brawly is a friendly guy and he offered to do the same for Brock at/after their first meeting (and if I remember it correctly offered people who were at the beach pointers as well). I would even assume that he offered or would offer the same lessons to Flannery too if she needed, wanted, or asked for them. Last, I genuinely don't blame Brawly for not talking to Brock about this beforehand since the situation is super awkward and he likely feels like he could (or should) be able to handle it without a third party mediator and that he and Roxie can maintain professionalism (perhaps not taking into account that Flannery is going to be third party enabler/aggressor). All in all, I blame Flannery since she seemed to take the fact that her favorite "Ship" didn't sail personally the most, Roxie for allowing (perhaps even enabling) Flannery's behavior by doing nothing or being passive aggressive about the rejection second most, and Brawley the least since it seems like every ones problem with him was the fact that he valued his expectations of himself more than other's expectations of him (ie Flannery shipped Roxie and Brawley, Brock also shipped or assumed they were already dating, and Roxie, perhaps in large part due to Flannery, had higher expectations going into it than she should have).
boby
2025-01-07 23:49:06 +0000 UTCI think it's "I will touch the sky" that has league back counselors. Indigo could use some.
White Neko Knight
2025-01-07 23:40:35 +0000 UTCYour explanation is fantastic and absolutely correct 👍🏻
Shisui34
2025-01-07 23:11:43 +0000 UTCI honestly forgot, she the lapras cannon girl?
Donald Bagwell
2025-01-07 23:07:30 +0000 UTCI think it also plays into Flannary’s “canon” quiet nice as well. In the games and the anime she’s a newer gym leader compared to everyone else. While I don’t think it’ll be shown here, having her backslide a bit and “not gained as many lessons as her peers” would be a cool showcasing of “everyone’s journey is different” type of thing. It could even feed into the different typing influencing peoples personality and having her struggle to not take things personally and over react.
Chris
2025-01-07 21:26:04 +0000 UTCYou tell any summer camp that story and they’d be sure to get a thousand yard stare.
Rinaldo
2025-01-07 21:21:27 +0000 UTCHonestly I understand why some guys say it's mainly flannary's fault but all three played a part. Flannary mad on behalf of a friend. Brawly feeling self-righteous, and Roxie confused and hurt. All of them could've went to Brock or Sabrina about this before it blew up like it did. But we're lucky it was just the kids getting out of hand with the paintballs. Honestly I think Brock should look back on the camera and see what which kids did what and go from their. Overall brawly is a fuckboy who wanted to kinda put Roxie on the back burner
Jordan Lopez
2025-01-07 21:15:34 +0000 UTCTeen boy botches Let’s Be Friends maneuver? *shocked Pikachu*
Rinaldo
2025-01-07 21:11:46 +0000 UTCNormally I'd agree somewhat with you but it the fact that all of viva01's writing of their interactions has shown that she likes him and he is pursuing her. Especially when you look back at the chapter when Sabrina calls out his interest in both flannary and Roxie. Nor can you discount him being the type to know when he's just being a nice guy and when he's being a flirt. Trust me I've been there. Not only that but he defended his beach time fuckbuddy like a gf after saying no to a relationship which mind you he's already in. It's been at least four to five months since he meet her
Jordan Lopez
2025-01-07 21:02:33 +0000 UTCI gotta disagree normally I'm all for siding with the guys especially since viva01 like to favor the ladies alot. But in this case brawly's heavily in the wrong. 1. The mixed signals. Brawly since appearing on this fic has always shown himself to be a free spirit playboy type. Everytime a pretty girl has popped up viva has shown him trying to get to know them better or he's ogling them(mind you as a guy we all kinda do this I ain't mad at him for that). He has experience putting the moves on ladies Sabrina pointed it out when he showed up at her gym to watch the Bruno fight. He can't say he's just being friendly when the dude knows that he's been trying to put the moves on both Roxie and flannary. It's just that it was only effective on Roxie and flannary wasn't having any of it. 2. Dude could've come to Brock earlier about the issue since you want to jump on flannary about being professional. Him and Brock are friends and if he has told him that the situation was a bit toxic and why Brock and them could've done something sooner to make sure the young trainers got the best experience. And while you can say he wanted to keep his privacy all that goes out the window when you're drama leaks into the professional arena. 3. I can understand a guy not being ready for a relationship but, running off after telling a girl all this with another women, whom when insulted you defend like a man in a relationship might is kinda shaky ground. Now is flannary wrong about how she did things yes, but it's very in character for her she's a hot head who moves more with passion then anything else. Remember her gym match with Brock she won even though she probably should've lost which would've helped more with her growth as a person and trainer. But viva had one of his slight bias moments and let her win while learning no real lesson. Which continues on to now with this situation. I think she's be a great and loyal friend to Roxie.
Jordan Lopez
2025-01-07 20:56:37 +0000 UTCWouldn’t be the first retcon in the fic. Remember when valerie was in the top 10 in the ace ranking. edit: or as i pointed out in the previous chapter that pete Pebbleman didn't know ash, misty, ritchie and bugsy despit them having already met in 'chapter 183 - Interlude - From different eyes'
Jean Marc Kunnen
2025-01-07 20:43:51 +0000 UTCGirl from Brock and brawly's surfing trip the girl who was flashing everyone.
Jordan Lopez
2025-01-07 20:41:14 +0000 UTCYeah, I might have enjoyed the chapter but he’s gonna have to talk with those girls they mixed personal and professional and the blow out could have been so much worse than this. I get Brock’s soft on the girls but this was abuse of a position along with a few other things.
Big ToFu
2025-01-07 20:34:51 +0000 UTCOn one hand I think that the B/F/R drama was handled with a bit of a heavy hand, but on the other... they were hired to work with kids. By getting hired, they were being trusted to behave in a professional manner. Also, they were given HIGHLY impressionable kids (the kids arrived prepped to learn new behavior) who looked up to them as models on how to act. So it was expected that the three would be on their best behavior. And then all three of them behaved in an unprofessional manner and in the process told the kids "this is an acceptable way to act". Sure, Brock *could* have given the three another chance but... technically he already did by letting them continue working with the kids on Day 2 after their poor showing on Day 1. He already indicated to them on Day 1 that they needed to pull their acts together (if I recall, he did it so blatantly that we were able to notice it from one of the kid's POV, which means it was probably pretty obvious). When they didn't, he was within his rights to let them all go. Flannery started the infighting, Brawly was the heart of the problem, and Roxanne had all the power to influence the situation but did nothing to stop it (if anything, she added fuel to the fire). Also, keep in mind that Brock only has 7 days with these highly impressionable children. Two of these days were already spent teaching these kids highly antagonistic behavior. Does he trust these three people to be professional the remaining five days after they failed to be mature the first two, taught a bunch of children bad behavior, and then acted out in his office and expected him to play mediator to their drama when he tried to take them to task? I wouldn't. Especially when, objectively, only Roxanne seemed apologetic over her actions. Flannery was unrepentant and Brawly seemed to think he did nothing wrong (I *think* his wrong was in bringing this level of drama to the office without warning the employer) FYI: With Brawly's behavior the heart of the problem, and with Roxanne allowing Flannery to act out like that (she 100% allowed it), Brock could not, in good conscious, keep both Brawly and Roxanne in his employment.
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-07 20:20:44 +0000 UTCFlannery was blatantly in the wrong, but Roxanne and Brawly aren't exactly blameless. Either one of them could have taken the other(s) aside to discuss the situation but they didn't. Do I think Flannery is the instigator? 100%. But Brawly and Roxanne were standing there with fire blankets and could have put out this fire, but they both chose not to.
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-07 20:19:01 +0000 UTCWho's Sheila?
Blahful
2025-01-07 20:06:52 +0000 UTCI believe that's the point, that the situation could have been handled better. Brock saw and knew that something was going on, and decided to trust his Team Leaders to keep things professional for the kids rather than let their personal drama explode into a big mess involving the kids. Unfortunately, that trust was betrayed and now everyone has lessons to learn. All in all, it could have gone a lot worse imo
Thomas Keller
2025-01-07 19:58:08 +0000 UTCWhat do you expect teenagers leading preteens leading biological weapons. It's almost Hogwarts.
Petrox
2025-01-07 19:50:48 +0000 UTCHey man, I think you kind of fucked up chapter 216 you saying that when he has a Charizard already, I think it’s a easy fix but I don’t know if it’s any more chapters you mention Ash having a Charizard
Alex Horsey
2025-01-07 19:50:11 +0000 UTCHonestly, I think Brawly is getting too much blame here, and Flannery isn't getting enough. I'd love to see her have a serious 1-on-1 with Brock about the importance of professionalism. Sure, Brawly was sending some mixed signals and was rather insensitive given the situation, but he clearly stated his boundaries and gave Roxy a reason. Beyond that, his personal life is his own, and he has no obligations to her or to avoid contact with other women he's interested in. Of course, Roxy's feelings are also valid and unavoidable. Yeah, when that situation happens, the disappointment hurts. But the emotional fallout from unrequited feelings is not inherently someone else's "fault." Now Flannery, on the other hand, makes the wrong choice for the wrong reasons at every possible point. She escalates the situation at every possible point and dramatizes this situation as a betrayal that deserves revenge even when it's nothing of the sort. Then she subverts a professional situation where she's supposed to be a role model to get teams of kids involved in her personal vendetta. She even told them about the team leader's personal drama in order to get them riled up. It's so insanely unprofessional and inappropriate that it's mindboggling. She desperately, desperately needs a lecture about separating personal issues from professional roles.
Ixta
2025-01-07 19:47:12 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, will this result in a rainbow colored Gyarados? ;)
Vexdt
2025-01-07 19:47:03 +0000 UTCOhhh now this is juicy. We’ve been hearing about how the Pokémon world results in people less committed to responsibilities and commitments and Brawly is our first time seeing it. I’d be curious if this “moral weakness” reflects in the long term team and Pokémon management resulting in a weaker team/trainer. Brock has shown the benefit of designing a gym to holistically see to Pokémon needs and cultivate a strong community that produces strong Pokémon. Trainers who travel too often could face issues such as limitation of roster, or perhaps a ridged battle style based on team dynamics. It’d be a powerful statement if Brawly gets defeated by Roxy or other trainers who represent a commitment to a specific location or community in the League Brackets.
Chris
2025-01-07 19:46:56 +0000 UTCHonestly, I'd blame Flannery for this mess more than Brawley. Yes, sleeping with someone after rejecing a friend is a bit of a dick move, but he had a valid reason for turning down Roxy and it's not like he took advantage of her or anything when he could have if he were only thinking with his second head. Flannery is the one fanning the flames of this into a whole incident.
SailorOfHouseThunderBird
2025-01-07 19:42:42 +0000 UTCThanks
Qweku_v
2025-01-07 19:31:58 +0000 UTCNot cool Brawly... not cool.
BronRevo
2025-01-07 19:27:30 +0000 UTCBrawly my dude that was so uncool
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-07 19:22:38 +0000 UTCthe start of the chapter was great Personally not a fan of drama and felt the situation with Flannery roxanne and Brawly could have been handled better. other than that great chapter
ciaran mullen
2025-01-07 19:22:38 +0000 UTCSee update. Open update. Like update. Read update. Yes, I did list that in the correct order. :)
HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan
2025-01-07 19:22:19 +0000 UTC