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Our Listener character is a writer who has submitted his latest manuscript to his Editor, our Speaker character. His original pitch included some very sexy scenes, but the writing isn't quite matching the pitch. His Editor is concerned about telling the audience what's happening, rather than showing. She tells him there should be more description, more in-the-moment experiences in these scenes. Since it's been awhile since he has experienced anything like that himself, she's going to help him get these scenes where they need to go. 

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Additional sexy SFX by Boshido Blasta

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"Show, don't tell" is something most writers dread reading in their Editor's notes on their work. At least, the writers I know do. It means we're not conveying the scene in a way that makes the reader feel like they're part of it. And it's a bit of a blow to the ego when that happens, not gonna lie. Having been dealing with something similar in my own writing lately, this little idea popped into my head. That being said, when I recorded it, my original idea took a very big sideways turn and, well, here we are. But I think the end result is way better than the original concept. I hope y'all love it, too!

Enjoy!
~B~ 💜💜💜


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All content is created for Adults (18+), and is written and performed by Adults (18+). All acts depicted are erotic roleplay only and are fully consensual.

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NSFW Premium Audio Roleplay: [F4M] Editor’s Notes [Editor/Author] [Dirty Talk] [Office] [Mutual Masturbation] [Cunnilingus] [Grinding] [Blowjob] [Swallow] [Cowgirl] [Creampie] [Multiple Orgasms for Everyone]
NSFW Premium Audio Roleplay: [F4M] Editor’s Notes [Editor/Author] [Dirty Talk] [Office] [Mutual Masturbation] [Cunnilingus] [Grinding] [Blowjob] [Swallow] [Cowgirl] [Creampie] [Multiple Orgasms for Everyone] NSFW Premium Audio Roleplay: [F4M] Editor’s Notes [Editor/Author] [Dirty Talk] [Office] [Mutual Masturbation] [Cunnilingus] [Grinding] [Blowjob] [Swallow] [Cowgirl] [Creampie] [Multiple Orgasms for Everyone]

Comments

Well, you showed and did not tell 😉 great concept played out very well

darriello

B discussing the technical intricacies of character and storytelling is blisteringly sexy 😔

Jack Gattes

If only my editor would deliver critique the way you have here. I’d be a better writer AND much happier. 😂

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