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An old DanCre clip

Added 2019-05-03 00:00:59 +0000 UTC

A clip/panel plan I did in 2017 October, by PainTool SAI 2 & Cintiq 13HD. Initially, I planned to make a doujin but then those plots were lacking some sort of purpose, and I just dumped it. Though I still like this short clip haha. I adore their awkwardness and weird sexual tension 🤗
2017年十月時畫的一段自娛自嗨分鏡，工具是SAI 2和Cintiq 13HD。本來嘛我打算要把它串成一本同人誌，但其餘的橋段編得很勉強而感到欲振乏力。這一小段大概是我最喜歡的部份，充分展現蛋朵之間一點都不熟的尷尬互動和微妙的性吸引力(噁

I could have shared them earlier but those dialogues are hard to translate smoothly by myself. This year in March I received an email from a fan with literature degree who said she is willing to help with proofreading. Which is totally a surprise, like a gift falling from the sky. Still not sure how the translation will be like, but at least there are fewer obstacles to deal with.
本來嘛可以早點直接拿上來丟人現眼，但我自力翻譯的英文畢竟非常不通順，只有中文對話可能沒多少人看得懂。不過！今年三月時我收到一封天外飛來的信，有位熱心又具備文學學位的荷蘭粉絲表示願意幫忙校對對話。目前還不曉得合作成果會是什麼樣子，總之很慶幸少了一件事情需要擔心！

Another biggest obstacle, welp, is I still don't have a stable workflow to finish these clips, it's almost ironic that I've done many doujins years ago. It's like some important parts are missing in my workflow, which limits my ability to carry out those ideas and leads to an abrupt result and are nothing like my expectation.
另一個更大的問題，呃其實就是，我至今還是沒有建立一個明確的漫畫作業流程。即便幾年前我確實還算出過幾本同人誌，但還是有非常多力不從心的部份，尤其各位應該也看得出來，我光是要利用電繪畫好線稿都是一場艱鉅的挑戰，要畫什麼都能畫出個樣子，但竟然就是無法完稿，實在很諷刺Orz

This year, one of my primary goals is to learn to do illustration, another is to give my DanCre fan works a closure. I'll try to do some warm up first, like to finalize this short clip as a practice. I probably will stuck in some sort of retrying hell, but uh well, all kinds of challenges are expected.
不論如何，今年我的兩大目標之一、其一是要學好畫灰階，其二就是要幫DanCre畫出一個完整的故事。目前想到比較具體的方法就是先拿一些小片段當熱身練習，不過我大概又會因此掉進重畫地獄.....反正有試有保佑。

BTW, only Chinese version is available for now, sorry! If I'm able to conquer all challenges and finish this clip, then there will be English version shared on my Patreon too!
不介意劇透(哪來的劇情)附件裡有中文台詞版本，因為恥力不足故意壓得很小。假如有辦法幫這幾頁完稿，會再釋出英文版本~~