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Clouded Soul Vol 1 Outline Part 4

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I like the laid back big sister vibes I felt like she just knows things are gonna work out so why sweat it, which probably has to do with her confidence from her being a prideful white tigress. What I really want to see is her fighting serious against the Sasei I really want to see her attacking full out in both her beast and human form showing off the things she has picked up from Jun and her sparring.

AzureXIII

I’ll certainly be trying to do that yeah. I don’t want to present Jun as ‘wrong’ but I want to challenge his views and put him against interesting villains who will push his convictions and force him to gain a deeper understanding of his own Justice. How was the Miao stuff in this last bit?

PunishedKom

I love this whole story will walk the line of justice and revenge and how closely related they can be. The only real way to know which one your have gotten is to know what is in your heart when you do the deed.

AzureXIII


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