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Guild Master's New Powers in the Reboot

GM’s eyes have been reworked in origin and power. In the reboot, GM’s argument with his grandfather when he was five years old that led to him running away into the Gnarled Woods had a new consequence. He came upon some sort of cave or hiding place that housed the eyeballs of Karnalla’s fourth historical Demon Lord, Zehesiel.

Young GM’s eyes are devoured and replaced by these, just waiting for the day he first gets laid to fully activate. These eyes give him a faint amount of demonic energy, which led to him growing a big dick and having a near endless lust as well as the stamina and output of an incubus. His childhood trauma still existed, but was slightly less bad because he’s always been able to look at women without them hurting.

Zehesiel was an odd Demon Lord who was not strong of his own accord, but he possessed a power over women focused on three principles.

  1. Development. Drawing out the latent potential of his lovers.
  2. Comfort. Caring for the needs of his lovers.
  3. Guidance. Maximizing his lover’s combat through tactical means.

Each ability should fall into one of these three categories.

His powers were used for evil back in the day, with Zehesiel creating an army of loving women which he conquered large swathes of the Realm with by proxy.

The details of Zehesiels powers are not known to historians, and only a few rare texts know the source. To any outside observer, they simply appear as eyes with demonic power.

Rather than awakening later in the story like it used to, IntiMate will appear in vol. 1 just after GM has sex with Sam for the first time. This will be what gets her to mail Zutiria in the reboot, figuring she might be able to know what’s up.

In the old version of the story, GM’s power was known as Taskmaster. To better showcase the new direction and source of its powers, it will be renamed to IntiMate.

None of these ability names are final.

Beyond his own skill-tree, his women will have one of them for him to develop as well. These are personalized and focus on improving the girls, but they don’t go as far as fixing internalized/external problems that the girls have. Zutiria doesn’t have a perk that will cure her nightmares, for example, but she does have one that makes her incantation less casting slightly more powerful.

His employees will get skill trees as well, an example being the maids would getting bonuses to their efficiency, their meals having added effects, and them becoming more powerful when it comes to protecting their home and master (would be funny if Peri had a sub-tree solely dedicated to turning her into a super breeder that she constantly asks him to invest points in).

The way that GM unlocks skill points for himself and his women is by unlocking new milestones for the girls. First sex? 1 point. First ‘I love you’? 1 point. Getting married? 1 point. Everything is 1. Could be a point of comedy like marriage should be worth way more than 1.

Some women cannot be added to his IntiMate system because of their strength of will or level of self-realization. Opalina and Nikita, even if he sleeps with them, would not be added initially as neither would be subordinate to him, which is important. A key distinction is Snow, who while very strong willed is distinctly satisfied with her position as GM’s number 2 in the workplace and still respects him as being in charge.

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Let me know how you guys think about this new direction. Furthermore, let me know if you have any ideas for skills that fit into any of the three categories. I'll need more, so suggestions are welcome.

Comments

The audiobook wasn’t from a deal with Amazon, that was out of my own pocket haha. But yes, the reboot will be on Amazon exclusively. As for weaknesses, he’d have standard demon weaknesses as well as negativity/depression being a big setback. Thematically I think it makes sense for a power ruled by the desires of someone to be weakened if they don’t have the mindset to chase their desires, explaining why he’s in a rut at the start of the story

PunishedKom

Hopefully you know better and will trust me when I say I want to change things now heh

PunishedKom

Holy shit. Holy shit. Holy shit. EXCITEDDDD

Marksm4n89

Honestly this is dope. An origin to the powers give also a possibility of a weakness, even if theoretical one. Will you fully rework the story? Also I assume this will be for a possible Amazon deal? If so I'm so on it. The coye audio was great

João Pereira


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